*jaw drops* How did I miss this!?!?!? wtf

This story is just....no words. I fucking love it. I love vampires, but I can be picky on how their done. But you did it awesomely. I love the AU-ness. Bill and Tom are perfect as always. Bill trying to make his dream come true but ending up in the wrong hands is so sad. To be mislead and then your life taken away with no choice and the regret of your final words to your twin. :(

Toms rage and pain destroy me. I feel so bad for him. But I love that his pain makes him reckless and he goes on these crazy fights. The whole fight scene in the basement was amazing. I could picture it perfectly in my head.

I loved both transformations and how they were so opposite of each other. Both transformation were heartbreaking but as Bills sire was sweet and concerned for his wellbeing, Toms was nothing but quick, rough and pitiless.

Simply amazing.

I think I'm still holding my breath from the end of the last chapter, so the ending of this one didn't help at all.

I also think that all of my favorite stories were updated at the same time on purpose, this being one of them. I'm so eager to find out what happens; I'm practically biting my nails.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe it was you who I spoke with in the Schrei Box about dialogue verses descriptions. You defended that you liked to let your descriptions speak for themselves, and frankly, I thought that was absurd. I think I must depend on dialogue too much though, because the descriptions in this were amazing. I hardly even realized no one was speaking, because I was so sucked in.

This story will be the death of me, not sure if the pun was intended or not. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for all the compliments. I'm glad that the sparse dialogue didn't hold this chapter back. Since this chapter centered around Tom, who is quite absorbed in his grief, dialogue seemed inappropriate. The people in this particular chapter aren't the type to be doing much talking anyway. Chapters centering on Bill will probably have more dialogue. I believe very strongly that dialogue should accent the writing, not carry it.

My good, this is amazingly written. And, you're right about being difficult because vampires are very used. But you made it your own way, I really enjoyed reading it ;)
*hugs*

MORE PLEASE!

man, where to start.

I loved the contrast between Bill's sire and Tom's sire. They were amazing. My heart went out to Tom and his pain. I can't blame him for the torture of the unknown making him a little insane. Sounds like the coven he's fallen in with fits that just fine.

You are now my vamp queen. :D

Damn, that was a hot feeding.

8DDD AHMIGAD

i don't normally read vampire fics, especially in this fandom (this will be the first) but dammit if you didn't hook me with the first chapter. i think this will be interesting. my theory for the moment is that tom will be turned also this night, was turned because bill was and the whole twin thing, or will find out and ask to be turned. can't wait to see if i'm right!

Dear Lord. I had no idea this would even be a vampire fiction. I feel like an idiot now, because all the signs were written and intertwined marvelously and I was just too blinded to see. I blame the writing for sucking me in so deep.

Everything was described so amazingly, I forgot I was actually reading. It was like a movie passing before my eyes, because the detail is simply incredible. I'm in agonizing wait for more, you've got me hooked.

Oh no! Please update more regularly! I want to know what happens. Don't let Bill forget Tom. And why does Bill thinks tom's Dead? He's the one who died. Please, Please (begging on my knees here) update regularly.