Date: 04/23/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 3: "You got it off easy today, retard."
oh my god.
I have tears in the eyes.
Fuck ...
Fuck..
guys...
its so sad..
wow...good chapter though...
Author's Response: Oh, we're sorry if we made you cry... :( But thanks! ^^
Date: 04/23/08 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 2: "Your mother... S-s-she's dead."
fuck im addicted :O
I love your storyyyyy
you should put an imageeeeee
Author's Response: Thanks! We're glad you are. :P Oh, an image, like a banner? Or like, of Bill in a wheelchair? LOL. Either way, we sorta suck at photoshop. *~*
Date: 04/23/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: "What Happened To him?"
Fuck that fics looks amazing
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Date: 04/21/08 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: "You got it off easy today, retard."
*Grumble at the lack of more chapters.* >:T!
Author's Response: We're so sorry, dear! But chapter 4 is out! :)
Date: 04/21/08 11:25 am Title: Chapter 2: "Your mother... S-s-she's dead."
Yeah, Italy, dear old Italy xD we have loads of subjects, too -.- oh, I've heard of Singapore, but I don't really know anything about it o.O is it cool? :) Italy... yeah, kinda is cool. Ugh, I have to go do maths -.-
Author's Response: Lol. I guess... It's quite cool. :P But we don't really fancy school all that much. The standard here's quite tough. Bleh. :/
Date: 04/21/08 10:18 am Title: Chapter 2: "Your mother... S-s-she's dead."
I suppose you don't have Epic as a subject in your school - lucky you! Where are you from?
Epic is asubject where you study what the Romans and the Greeks wrote - for example, Homer's Odyssey. :(
Author's Response: But that's COOL! I love the Illiad! Lol. If that actually counts. Omg. I'm from Singapore. It's disgusting, 'cause no one here's even HEARD of TH. :( ugh. and we have disgusting subjects like economics, where i don't understand a fucking thing. :/ Are you from Italy? :)
Date: 04/21/08 09:23 am Title: Chapter 3: "You got it off easy today, retard."
Ow D: that was so... sad. That Trent guy should burn in hell, but that other bitch should be PULVERIZED! Maybe what Tom feels is really pity, but I'm sure it'll turn into something more, won't it :) now, I'm praying your teachers won't give you homework too! Although I can tell for experience they will -.- waiting for a succulent update! Make them talk *ç*
Author's Response: Lol. Now we all know the answer to that, don't we? ;D Yesh, don't worry, love. They will converse! ^^ Omg, yes. Today alone i just got two history essays and math homework. Sigh. But I've already started Chapter 4! Promise it'll be up soon! <3
Date: 04/21/08 05:20 am Title: Chapter 3: "You got it off easy today, retard."
poor bill.. i luv this story !!
gd work dearly :)
Author's Response: But Tom's there now. So... *zips mouth* We'll have to wait and see! Thanks, sweetie! :D
Date: 04/20/08 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 3: "You got it off easy today, retard."
i thought rachel was nice, what a bitch.
and O_O at britney!gustav
i so love infatuated!tom
Author's Response: Haha. She WAS nice - when Bill could walk. But yeah, now she's a bitch. Credit for britney!gustav should go to pppoynter. (all her crazy ideas XD) Lol. Don't we all love him? ;) Danke for the review!
Date: 04/20/08 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: "You got it off easy today, retard."
I feel really bad for Bill. Why'd Rachel dump him? I'm hoping for more Bill/Tom time. Just to get to know each other if nothing else. The G's seem ok. Conformitive but that's just school. Update soon. I'm praying your teachers don't give you much homework.
Author's Response: Haha. We should all protest against homework, now, shouldn't we? XD Ooh, and we're sorry if there's not enough Bill/Tom time, but we gotta set the scenes, first. But we guarantee it'll come! :D We'll try our best! :)
Date: 04/20/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 3: "You got it off easy today, retard."
Fucking bitch! Tom should kick her ass!!! Fucking bastards!!
Very good plot indeed xD
*hugs*
Author's Response: AW. *hugs back* :D haha, ja, Tom totally should. But we'll see where the story goes, yeah? Thanks, love! ^^
Date: 04/20/08 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: "Your mother... S-s-she's dead."
I do so understand you u.u I wroe my chapter in the car while driving to the lake, on a Sunday, when I had to study Epic XD poor us. We'll end up telling our teachers our stories instead of the books' XD
Author's Response: JA. omg. i totally agree. lol. but they probably won't understand people here are too daft to understand Bill and Tom's beauty. ;D hehe. What's epic?
Date: 04/20/08 06:34 am Title: Chapter 2: "Your mother... S-s-she's dead."
Ew, don't talk to me about school ._. I end up writing during lessons! XD how old are you two? I'm 15 and attendng Scientific High School, the biggest pain in the ass I could get (after Tom's 'pen', as he calls it... XD)
Author's Response: LOL. omg. We think of fic ideas in school! We can't write, 'cos it's way too obvious to the teacher. and it'd be bad if we got caught, cos they'll probably read the whole thing out to the class. :/ hehe. though we sms each other ideas, cos we're not in the same school. :( We're both 17, and we've been besties since 2nd grade! :D lol. and yes, school's fucking disgusting. i mean, this weekend alone, i've got 4 fucking essays to write. damn. and i should be doing my lit essay now, but i'm replying you. my priorities are fucked up. XD
Date: 04/19/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: "Your mother... S-s-she's dead."
bill had a gf... shocking!!!!
kidding..
i can't wait to read more.
infatuated!tom is love
Author's Response: Haha... a little hard to believe, it is. And yes, Tom's just adorable. Hehe. We wanna just hug them both. ;) More should come soon... in the next few days! :D
Date: 04/19/08 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 2: "Your mother... S-s-she's dead."
Oh gosh! D: what happened to him was so sad... poor sweetie, I so feel like going there, jumping on his lap and hug him to death. Btw, I want them to talk again! C'monnn post soon please please!
Author's Response: LOL. Be my guest, honey. Hehe, we could do a threesome with him... hug, I mean. Threesome hug. ;D Don't worry, they'll definitely talk again - if not there's no story! *~* We'll try our best to post asap! (school's a fucking ass killer.)
Date: 04/19/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 2: "Your mother... S-s-she's dead."
I really hate how short this is and I'm now dying for an update.
But I still love you guyss. :D
Author's Response: Oops, sorry, love. school work and all! :( We'll try to make it longer next chappie! aw, thanks, we love you too! :D
Date: 04/19/08 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: "What Happened To him?"
Awww.
I'm telling you, I fuckin' love this story already.
Author's Response: We're glad you do! Thanks so much! :D
Date: 04/18/08 03:55 am Title: Chapter 1: "What Happened To him?"
jaaaa! go on! :D
Author's Response: we're on it! :)
Date: 04/17/08 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: "What Happened To him?"
I know I'm gonna like this fic so much. In fact I already like it. It's well written so far and I cant wait to see where you are gonna take this.
Update soon, plz!!!
Author's Response: Danke! :D We hope it'll live up to your expectations, then. It's on the way! ^^
Date: 04/17/08 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: "What Happened To him?"
I must say, I wasn't convinced by this story, it's not something I usually would have read. (Nothing personal, I just mostly avoid stories where the twins aren't twins.)
However, I read because I was validating and I must say, I did enjoy it and I intend to continue reading. Well written and intriguing.
However, here is my constructive suggestion, if you will have it. I think your title will put people off. You seem to be writing a story that is sensitive and serious. The title is jovial and more suggestive of a crack!fic.
So, there is something you might like to consider. :)
Otherwise, a promising premise and if you'd like me to put a stop to the bickering up there, I can pull out some modly powers. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, we're glad you enjoyed it! :D oh, and about the title, *blushes* lol. We honestly couldn't think of a proper title (they all came out lame and... ugh! *~*) Yeah. But if you'd like to suggest a more serious one, we'd gladly accept! (and credit you, of course! ;D) Thanks for the advice! And p.s, thanks for the offer, but I'm sure there's no need. After all, we're all mature fans, aren't we? :)