Date: 04/18/08 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Tunnel Vision - part 1
this is goddamnd good!!!!!! i love it!!!! x )))))))
Date: 04/18/08 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
More like you'd never get him in a skin-tight black jumpsuit. More's the pity
Date: 04/18/08 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Tunnel Vision - part 1
Hhahahaha. Tom's an X-man. Bless.
*Loves*
Author's Response: xD Nawww, even if the X-Men existed in this universe [Which they don't] Tom would never be willing/powerful enough to be one x3 Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/18/08 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Tunnel Vision - part 1
Another great chapter.
I love your descriptions of the twins on stage. They are very accurate and amusing. I'm so looking forward to seeing how Bill's influence plays out.
I'm still really loving the tv thing. Tom is so oblivious. You'd think the idiot would put 2 and 2 together by now.
Author's Response: He knows, he just doesn't want to admit it. He'd rather be crazy than a mutant xD Ah, denial.
Date: 04/18/08 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
Really amazing story! Addicting =)
Date: 04/18/08 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
.........wow ............O.O
Date: 04/18/08 10:44 am Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
wiuuu...
continue as soon as you can!
Date: 04/18/08 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
Aww, Bill is such an innocent sweetie
Date: 04/18/08 07:09 am Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
Aw, Bill is unbelievably cute. And poor Tom. More soon please!
Date: 04/18/08 05:49 am Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
A beautiful chapter.
I love Bill's sense of betrayal and his insistence that he could guess Tom's thoughts too.
Poor little baby Tomi must be feeling pretty guilty.
I love y our subtlety in explaining the circumstances of the world and what's going on beyond the twins.
Date: 04/18/08 05:22 am Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
i hope it's all better tomorrow! ='[[
Date: 04/18/08 04:58 am Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
Mmm yum. I like it. Great writing.
Solid like pudding.
Date: 04/17/08 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
ohhh looks like somebody's a mind reader. This is really good.
Date: 04/17/08 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
You're the chick I talked to about Slipknot, right? ;]
This is really good. Subtly painful, and definitely going in the right direction. Bill is laughable, but I still love him. And the ending was dramatic without even trying.
Author's Response: Yup, I'm the slipknot chick xD I'm glad you like it, thanks.
Date: 04/17/08 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
Awesome. I like the fact that its Tom who has the supernatural power for once instead of Bill. Keep going and update soon! Please!
Date: 04/17/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
This is really unique and original, you should certainly write more. Can't wait to read what's next.
Date: 04/17/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
WWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW
THAT WAS CREEPY!!!!!!!
O.O
AND FUCKING AMAZING!!!!! xD
Date: 04/17/08 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
I love it! Continue really soon!
Date: 04/17/08 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
Awsome...
I wish bill was the same though, it's a little sad that he's not,
definatly reading more of this.
Date: 04/17/08 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
I am really liking this. I can't wait to see where this goes. You've got a flair for subtle emotions that is much appreciated.