Date: 04/22/08 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
AHHHH!
Bill heard Tom!
So does Bill start to hear Tom more and more?
Does Tom try to talk to Bill
What happens nexttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!???????
Date: 04/22/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
:O
Where is he?!
MORE!!
Date: 04/22/08 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
ohhh god
very good
moore plz
i love all the "reading minds"
Date: 04/22/08 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
ahhhh!
love this :)
Date: 04/22/08 11:52 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
Wow, this is awesome! I usually don't go for paranormal stories, but I really like this one :) Keep up the good work and update ASAP!
Date: 04/22/08 11:26 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
WHAAAAAATTTT?????????????
O.O
Date: 04/22/08 11:11 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
omg continue please!!! what happened to Bill? did he jump off the stage or...what? please, i need to know!!! *whines*
Date: 04/22/08 10:38 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
Hmm, this story is making me curious. I really wonder where you're gonna go with this :). Updateee!
Date: 04/22/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
o_o.
Date: 04/22/08 05:26 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
Oh my God, this is fucking AMAZING!
I can't believe I just found it, but damn! I love it.
Date: 04/22/08 05:24 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
the highest compliment i could give you is that i look forward to your updates as much as i do froggy's, majestrix's & little muse's.
keep it up. you are the queen of uber amazingness!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is such a compliment <3
Date: 04/22/08 03:13 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
Major suckage with the mean tom stuff.
Hmmm. So are you saying that Bill *does* have a power...
interesting...
Date: 04/22/08 02:55 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
Arghnhghrhgrngrgrh MOAR. BESTEST. AANDSDSDMEDNED It's too early for coherency. *slaps tom*
Date: 04/22/08 01:36 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
it's really good you are being quick on the update.. i grew to like the story.. and ther fact that Tom is so stubborn.. well... it looks truthful to me.. ))
I like it very much.. thanks.. ))
Date: 04/22/08 01:18 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
GUH UPDATE! *SHRIEKS AND SETS UP TENT, WAITING... IS CURRENTLY WAITING IN ABOUT 50 PLACES NOW.* X_X!
Date: 04/22/08 12:48 am Title: Chapter 5 - Best Laid - part 1
HOLY FUCK.
Date: 04/22/08 12:35 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
This chapter was so... frayed emotionally. I felt for both twins and poor Bill especially. I hope they work this out, I truly do.
P.S.
Hon, don't give your plot away in the end notes. Let the readers be surprised, or even better, think the wrong thing. You've got the element of surprise. :D
Date: 04/22/08 12:06 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
ahh you can't stop here. keep writing.
Date: 04/21/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
What the heck? Why can't I figure this out? Bill's power is... his power is... Uhh? *pulls at hair* And I look forward to when Tom isn't acting so spiteful toward his baby brother. D:
I looooooooove this. It's FASCINATING. :)
Date: 04/21/08 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
More I need more more more!!!
I'm addicted to this big time!!!
I love this!!!