Date: 05/03/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 9 - What You See - Part 1
Bill's shopping rush and Tom getting dressed over the phone was so perfect and cute and funny. I actively laughed through this chapter.
I love this story! Wooo. :)
Date: 05/03/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 9 - What You See - Part 1
Well Tom agreeing to practice is a step closer to him accepting his ability, right? And I think I understand Bill's warping of perception better now.
Date: 05/03/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
i dont know but anything he's going to do must be good and make us squeal xD
Author's Response: Lol, I promise it will xD
Date: 05/03/08 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 9 - What You See - Part 1
Finally. Come on, Tom; you can do it!
:)
Good chapter. I like how you've explained Bill's power, most people don't know about a superpower unless it's flight or speed, or even super strength. Nice you pulled out one of the lesser known ones.
Author's Response: It was hard to explain, I didn't show them at the 'Doctors' because I didn't want it explained in an info dump. I hope this didn't come off as an info dump, either.
Date: 05/03/08 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 9 - What You See - Part 1
aaaaaaaaaaahahaha hes gonna DO IT!!!! FINALLY!!! ^____^ i love this
Author's Response: -wiggly eyebrows- But do WHAT? xD
Date: 05/03/08 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - What You See - Part 1
Kewl. Interesting. Nice read. ^^
Date: 05/03/08 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - What You See - Part 1
Kewl. Interesting. Nice read. ^^
Date: 05/01/08 01:03 am Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
wow, when did all this updating go on-not that it's a bad thing!
this is SO amazing!
i absolutely love your writing style and ur word choice really adds to everything... quite honestly some of the best fanfiction i've ever read ^-^
keep up the good work!
Date: 04/27/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
Love it! :D
It's awesome =) really!!! I've read it all
I've just got some questions :P
(I'm not from an english origin so I don't get it all :P)
anyways...
What exactly can Tom do?` except reading peoples mind? like what other stuff have we gotten to know? =)
sorry for silly question ^^ great story!! (Y)
please update soon!! =D
Date: 04/26/08 12:48 am Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
This chapter wasn't my favorite because I was confused at first at the jump between them at the medical place and then back in the hotel. I guess I was hoping for more answers, but instead we're left with more questions. I assume we'll soon get more on what the twins are and what their abilities are in later chapters?
Other than that little nitpick, the chapter was good. Short, but good. Write more soon please!
Author's Response: I really wanted to avoid having the explanation be that simple- a doctor guy basically saying 'This is what your powers are', y'know? that's a little bit mechanical. But I do promise that all questions will be answered in the end.
Date: 04/25/08 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Best Laid - part 1
LMFAO!!!!! HOL CRAP A TEAR ESCAPED MY EYE I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD!!! omg your amazing at writing!!! friggan hell i love bill's attempts to get a reaction and tom's 'reactions'. the last one was priceless!!!!
encore encore!!!!!!
xoxoxoxoxooxox
Date: 04/25/08 09:09 am Title: Chapter 5 - Best Laid - part 1
Oh. My. God. This is fantastic! And that wall image was HOT. *fans self*
Now explain that, Tom. LOL
Date: 04/25/08 08:34 am Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
Huh, Simone knows doesn't she? Can't wait for more explanation on that front. And Bill finding out the truth broke my heart. Poor things.
Great job, hon! :D
Date: 04/25/08 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
Ooh, this is already grabbing me. Great start! I'm heading off to chapter 2. :D
Date: 04/24/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
Very interesting!
Tom's a bit rough in Bill, isn't he.
But I still don't really undestand if it's only Tom who's "abnormal", or is it both of them. Cus you say smth like "his genes are different from everyone on the planet INCLUDING Bill" but you gave us a hint that Bill can turn invisible, didn't you?
I'll be waiting for the update :))
Date: 04/24/08 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
Am I the only one still confused? I hope not. I want to be able to read the updates and slowly understand.
I love your writing style and just how everything flows and is nice. I love how you described their 'hospital' experience. Very interesting and I can't wait for more!
Date: 04/24/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
I'm glad to finally know their abilities but I don't really understand the whole warping perceptions thing. :
Date: 04/24/08 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
yammi... good to see the update before i go to bed... ))) a nice explanation was invented by David... my respect to him... ))) (but really to the author)
Date: 04/24/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
I totally forgot that I already beta'd this chapter for you and when I saw that you had an update I was like "Bad muffin! Not waiting for your beta is naughty!' but then I remembered that you hadn't posted this yet.
I really really like this chapter. I like the resolution of finally knowing what is "wrong" with the boys. I love Bill's reaction to how Jost decided to handle it. I love your twin interaction too. They are adorable.
Author's Response: xD I would never trust anyone else to read my schlup before you beta it. Anyway, I like pestering you best <3
Date: 04/24/08 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
freaking amazing.
love it.
such smoothe writing, and i love the way you characterise people, and how bill is so totally out of it all the time!
how old are they in this fic?
10/10