Date: 05/08/08 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Disclosure - part 1
I have absolutely no idea where you're going with this (except for eventual twincest) but damn, am I enjoying the ride :D
Date: 05/08/08 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Disclosure - part 1
Simone? NO! Ah, what happened?
(And LOVE the dispaly of jealousy from Tom)
Date: 05/08/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Disclosure - part 1
aaaw! that was evil!
Author's Response: I do try <3
Date: 05/08/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
Very interesting. Hope to see more soon :)
Date: 05/08/08 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
AWESOME story
Date: 05/08/08 11:08 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAHHHHH!!! FUCK YEEEEEEEAHHHH!!!!!!
GO FOR IT TOM!!!! PUNCH HIM IN THE BALLS!!! TEACH HIM HOW SOMEONE GOES TO THE HOSPITAL!!!! BREAK HIS FACE IN TWO!!!!
... im excited =P
Date: 05/08/08 09:06 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
TOM O_O geezus...
Date: 05/08/08 07:34 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
O.O OMFG! Did he smashed that guy?! What an amazing story! I want more! Please, update soon! I want to read the next chapter! Love ya!
Date: 05/08/08 06:20 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
oh i hope tomi got him good!!!
Date: 05/08/08 04:33 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
Oh no! I get so engrossed in this story thatthe chapters are over before I notice! Great stuff. Tom needs to stop being a douche. ;)
Date: 05/08/08 03:39 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
Oh shit, Tom. Come on now!
He is going to get them busted. For sure. Great chapter.
Date: 05/08/08 03:23 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
yes! I love it when Tom gets jealous over or protective of Bill XD
Date: 05/08/08 02:06 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
ohhhhh... and here the overprotective nature of a big brother was awaken!!! ))) it took some time!! )))
Date: 05/08/08 12:14 am Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
Nah, you are awesomesauce!
Tomi Tomi Tomi, why you have to be so mean? I really have nothing clever to say, I'm just hooked on this and would much rather spent my day reading this than going to work, but who ever said life was fair was an evil liar.
Date: 05/07/08 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
Tom calling Bill fat, what an asshole. Anyway, shit, I hope people don't become suspicious because of Tom's inability to control his protectiveness of Bill. I love when Tom gets that way XD
Date: 05/07/08 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
Oh man, why do we authors love to write cliffhangers? Especially with someone knocking someone else out at the end of it.
It's pure torture!
But it draws me in all the more. :))
Date: 05/07/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
Oooh, I love how they can project thoughts into each others minds. I would so love to be able to do that. And also YAY for Tom taking that dude out who was thinking dirty thoughts about Bill! Serves him right for moving in on Tom's man!
Date: 05/07/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Tunnel Vision - part 1
LOL. teleporting an entire family to the artic. XDDD
Date: 05/07/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
mmmm i wanna know what will happen in the next chapter... i really love this fanfiction... and can't wait for real twincect scenes
Date: 05/07/08 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 10 - What You See - Part 2
omg!!!!! what the hell is tom thinking!!! i kno that guy is gross for thinking something like that..come on..only tom gets bill..we all kno that...but honestly he needs to think more!!!!
xoxoxoxoxooxoxox thankx for the update