Date: 05/14/08 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Tunnel Vision - part 1
This is like XMen. But better.
Date: 05/14/08 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
Aw! Baby!Bill is much too sweet and I love how hard he tries! And poor Tom. I can't imagine how it would be to feel as if nobody could understand you, not even your twin. Poor babies!
Date: 05/14/08 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
*tears in eyes* That was the sweetest thing. I love it. *smiles tightly and bottom lip trembles* Damn it! I'm not going to cry! *sniffles* I love this chapter! I can't wait for more! ='D
Date: 05/14/08 11:54 am Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
Awww!
As ever: more!
Date: 05/13/08 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
OMG!!!! poor tomi!!! omg i feel so bad for him!!! i almost cried when i read that!!! seriously if bill or tom died i would be crying my eyes out!!!...DONT kill one of them please!!!!
xoxoxoxoxo thankx for the update ^^
Date: 05/13/08 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
kgfhfdkgsffjge, Bill&Tom!
Date: 05/13/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
Oh God! I love this chapter
Date: 05/13/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
GHAH!~~!!!!@!@!@ RAWR.
So awesome.
Hott damn. XD.
Love this.
Date: 05/13/08 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
Glad to hear simone will be ok. Bill and tom seem ok too all things concidered. Will people notice that it was their mom though? That could be bad.
Author's Response: It wasn't just an attack on Simone, it was a general attack on a protest, so large amounts of people. So no, no one would notice her.
Date: 05/13/08 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
I was so close to crying, and then that elephant thing. ROFL nice job.
The end? Wahh.
But kudos to Simone, even if she did get hurt pretty badly. It's a nice symbolism(? Dunno if that's the right word for it). :)
Date: 05/13/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 13 - No Matter - part 1
AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS JUST TOO CUTEEEE!!! *dies happy*
Date: 05/13/08 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
Is simone definately going to be ok? I hope so. I hope the twins are ok.
Date: 05/12/08 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
I love this story. I can't wait for more.
Date: 05/12/08 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
Awww! :'[
More!. :]
Date: 05/12/08 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
Oh, that was too sad for words. :( I'm glad Simone be alright and that the twins are there for each other. Bill's singing was too heartbreaking, yet very nice at the same time. Another great chapter.
Date: 05/12/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
Oh god. That was such a sweet, yet sorrow-filled, chapter. You had me tearing up when they saw the condition their mother was in. And then the tears fell as Bill sang to Tom, whether in his head or not.
Beautiful. =']
Date: 05/12/08 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
So beautiful that if this was a beauty pageant, this would win hands down.
Gosh, it is so much easier to be strong when you know that when you finally fall apart, someone who loves you will be there to pick up the pieces - or fall apart with you.
Date: 05/12/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Disclosure - part 1
Oh, the tension! The love! The jealousy!
While I hope Simone is alright, I anticipate with all the ahem-ahem.
Date: 05/12/08 11:15 am Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
this was...the most cute and sensible thing I ever read *teary eyes* T.T so beautiful....
Date: 05/12/08 09:15 am Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
thanks for carrying on with the story... wander what happened with Simone...
I feel relieved that the twins reconnected again.. ))