Date: 08/25/10 10:31 am Title: Chapter 9 - What You See - Part 1
Bill's gift explains a lot of things and it's the best you could find =)
Too bad the real Bill cannot get people not to notice him, it would make his life a lot easier I think.
Date: 08/25/10 10:24 am Title: Chapter 8 - Curtain Call - part 2
Very clever move from Jost. No the most heroic one but he saved his job, and Tom's life.
Date: 08/25/10 09:28 am Title: Chapter 7 - Curtain Call - part 1
I hope Jost is going to help them =S
Date: 08/25/10 09:23 am Title: Chapter 6 - Best Laid - part 2
Tom, you stupid... But at the same time it's quite normal he reacted this way.
Date: 08/25/10 09:15 am Title: Chapter 5 - Best Laid - part 1
Bill dooesn't like to be ignored XD
Date: 08/25/10 08:59 am Title: Chapter 4 - Tunnel Vision - part 2
Truth is sometimes hard to accept and people tend to ignore it, but the longer you wait, the more it will hurt.
Date: 08/25/10 08:46 am Title: Chapter 3 - Tunnel Vision - part 1
I'm glad the twins weren't separated and I like how Tom is trying to be "normal". He managed to create a good mental shield but it's not enough for Bill.
I also like the news regarding the genetic mutation, it seems people with abilities are not very popular, even after all those years.
Well people have a natural tendency to fear what they don't understand but I have the feeling that they're not trying to help gifted people to control their powers.
Date: 08/25/10 06:10 am Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
What is Simone gonna do ? not separate the twins I hope D= !
Date: 08/25/10 05:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
I LOVE this first chapter =D !
Date: 03/14/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 16 - I Think - part 2
waaayyy late review but
LOL IRL at the mean girls reference
I read the line seriously like ten times because I couldn't believe my eyes, then burst out laughing so hard. A+++++
Date: 09/12/09 06:13 am Title: Chapter 12 - Disclosure - part 2
First off I would just like to say that, so far, I am thoroughly enjoying this story and I can't wait to finish it. :-) Now, I'd like to tell you why I have commented on this chapter specifically and not waited till the end like I usually do for completed stories. When you began talking about their mother in the hospital and the way it feels, that "this was the stuff of nightmares...nightmares about losing people you love" you couldn't have said it any better. I lost my father very suddenly late last November to an aneurysm and when we got to the hospital and saw him laying there in a coma, and where taken to a small 'family room' and told the news, that is exactly what it felt like. I reacted very similarly to the way you described Tom's reaction, everything was just sort of a hazy blur, like I could feel everything and nothing at the same time, like I could hear people speaking but couldn't. And when you had Bill 'singing' By Your Side to Tom I actually shed a few tears because it was that very song that got me through that difficult time in my life, and still helps me even today. I just wanted to let you know that you wrote that part very well. It was very believable and very moving. Keep up the good work. :-)
Date: 08/09/09 08:03 pm Title: Epilogue
Awww. :3 I'm so happy, haha.. I lost track of this story before you'd posted the epilogue, so I'm glad to see it finished. :)
Just to let you know though, lemonlibrary.com appears to be down/suspended? Is there any chance of you posting the rest of "My Favorite Conspiracy Theory" on this site? I've loved that story for ages as well, and would like to see the rest of it. :)
Awesome writing, and I look forward to reading more from you! :D
Date: 05/10/09 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
wow !! its a rare thing that a first chapter get me addicted like this ! cant wait to read the rest of the story :D
Date: 04/10/09 07:06 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved this. that would explain their insane popularity... ^_^
Date: 04/09/09 06:16 pm Title: Epilogue
Yay! I love a happy ending!
Date: 04/09/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Guessing Game - part 2
"like how Bill had accidentally killed Andreas’ pet worm by trying to share his grape soda with it." Awwwwwwwww, that's adorable! But this chapter was sad.
Date: 04/09/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Guessing Game - part 1
Ooh, this is cool! My niece can do that, I swear. She'll answer my thoughts like I've spoke out loud.
I love how the twins are portrayed in this. They're so little, so cute, it'd really sweet. The "long-neck-asaurus" made me laugh.
Date: 03/29/09 06:53 pm Title: Epilogue
yay i love this epilogue!! are you not posting here any more? is that why the rest of your other stories are elsewhere? you will be missed, i really like your writing!!
Author's Response: I don't really have any other stories or other places where I post, sorry. I'm in my last semester of college and will be graduating in a few weeks, and things have been hectic/busy. I also lost a bit of interest in the fandom, but I'm hoping this summer when they come out with a new album I'll be able to continue writing = ) Thanks.
Date: 03/20/09 05:47 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow, just finished. Lol. This story was epic-awesome and I thank you for writing it! It's great and I love that you mixed a sci-fi type feel with the classic band-fic set-up. Plus, the added twincest--it's epic-buns smothered in awesomesauce and topped with flakes of WIN.
I praise you, *all hail the waywardmuffin*.