I can't help it... I should be scared that David found them... But I just can't seem to stop laughing at the image of David stepping in to the twins room, seeing the twins together, and drop down on the floor...

Only one chapter to go... YES!!!
Or: Quite sad really...
But anyway, it's been a nice story.
Thank you!!!

(Hope David will be OK...)

Oh shit, don't end it right there!!! Grah!!!
This is freaking amazing, by the way! ;D

ROFL!!! they were caught by David!! man please update the last chapter soon!

poor David xDDD

but fuck i wanted Tomi to come... incredible.. and Bill such a teaser

What has been seen cannot be unseen! Or can it? Either way the boys need to learn how to use locks.

Oh no! David caught them? As a psycic can tom make him forget? I hope so.

This chapter was so great! The guessing game was funny.

Update soon.

Ahhh, Bill's Sausage Wallet is turning my brain to mush. I can't nearly be as composed in this review as I was in the last. *pout* So I'll just need to start from the top. Or actually, from the bottom, since I just read that part last and yeah.

I loved the line where it went "Tom was always trying to moan deep, or not moan at all". I think that describes Tom to the T even though it isn't particularly deep or involved. It gives you a lot of insight into how he's always trying to act more macho and composed than he really is and I love that Bill gets that and knows which sounds are fake and which ones are natural.

I also loved the hint of possessive!Bill (I find I like him a bit more than possessive!Tom and think he's more likely to be possessive IRL too) and it wasn't even an actual scene in the chapter but the thought of Bill snickering to himself about the fact that no one gets to see Tom's body in those baggy clothes made me giggle.

And, since we're moving up, the sex was hot. D: Sorry, no elaboration on that, my brain's too busy leaking out of my ears. I love Bill's evil sex fiend side though, and the scene was made that much hotter by how Bill insisted they keep "practicing".

And also, before I forget about it remembering the lemon, David Bowie turning into an owl WTFBBQ, LOL. :D I spent a few minutes staring in confused awe at that sentence before sputtering into laughter. Heehee, Bowie... owl...

So you know my reviews are generally pretty long for everyone because I like to peel apart stories like they're onions, but you honestly make me want to look at each individual LINE and write an essay on it, you really do. There are certain words you use that I think go so perfectly with the character you link them to and small hints of humor that you don't even remember at the end because the big picture is so much bigger, you know? But it's while you're reading that's so important, and they make the ride that much more enjoyable.

This chapter was so different from all of the other chapters; I suppose in the simplicity and lack of plot advancement, but I wouldn't trade it for the world. I thought you took the next "step" into their relationship perfectly and with so much ease because -- (take a breath, Ella) -- a lot of writers write individual chapters well but when you try to read the entire story as a whole it seems choppy. But I just re-read the last three chapters with this one and it flowed perfectly and I LOVE that because it means I'll have that much awesomer of an experience when you finish the story (SECOND TO LAST CHAPTER, TELL ME YOU LIIIIEEEE!!) and I read the entire thing from beginning to end. I can't wait, I really can't.

You're amazing. Don't ever stop writing.

Much love,

Ella

Beautiful and hot. (:

Bumbumbuuum!
more :3

Ahh omg, an update! ♥♥

Yeessss Tomi, admit Bill is right. Bahahahh. This is so good, I'm ecstatic that it's planned out to the very end. :)