Date: 01/04/25 08:18 am Title: Kiss it all better
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 07/26/12 12:44 pm Title: Kiss it all better
aww I really liked this (:
was very cute... but like hot too ^^
xx
Date: 12/11/10 07:41 pm Title: Kiss it all better
this one is soooo amazing! *heart* love it very much!
Date: 07/25/10 12:56 pm Title: Kiss it all better
i just read this story... hmm a thousand times? i just love it!
Date: 02/26/09 01:33 pm Title: Kiss it all better
Somehow the Tom in this fic reminds me of Tom from a Wolf's Tale. And the way you wrote some things. It's not surprising because the author is same but it brought a smile on my face :)
This is very good. I like the way they are dancing around the subject before they go straight to the business ;)
Bill is so cute! Just the way you just want to give him a big hug.
Thank you! I enjoyed it :)
xx
Date: 02/04/09 03:23 pm Title: Kiss it all better
This was a great story!
Date: 02/01/09 01:52 am Title: Kiss it all better
That was so sweet and hot. And I totally "awwed" lol.
Date: 12/02/08 03:50 am Title: Kiss it all better
aw cute and just YAY!
Author's Response: hihi, thanksies ^^
Date: 11/02/08 02:06 am Title: Kiss it all better
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!~.~ That's soooooooo cute!!! XD!!!!!
Author's Response: hihi ,) thank you so much <3
Date: 08/02/08 01:33 am Title: Kiss it all better
Loved it! It was adorable. :}
Author's Response: naw, thank you so much <3
Date: 06/17/08 02:47 pm Title: Kiss it all better
The smile on my face won't go away... :)
Awww soooo sweet and romantic and caring and... and... i... it's...
WOW!!!
Your storie made me realy happy!!! THANK YOU!!!
I am always amazed how you manages to portray the loving and caring so wonderfully!
"Puffs of air dusted across Tom’s chest and made the older boy shiver in delight, Bill was so comfortable against him"
AWWW so sweet!
How do you do it?
LOL at Georg!
Author's Response: hihi my god are you trying to spoil me? ,) because I'm loving every second of it! this story was one of the first longer smuts I've written and it means a lot to me that you liked it! and bout Georg, I don't know if you've noticed, but I tend to make him the but of almost every joke xD it's just a little thing I have ,) thanksies!
Date: 05/30/08 08:49 pm Title: Kiss it all better
Of course I'll review one of the best!!! My pleasure :)
Love it, I really do, sexy, hot, perfect and... Did I alrady said perfect? xD LOL
Luv ya Lucy, you're one of my favourites!!!
Author's Response: *blushes and goes all jumpy* oh my god, mariah you're spoiling me...and me loves you for it ;) I'm happy you liked this one cus it took a great deal of time and talking to Andy :p
Date: 05/23/08 01:15 pm Title: Kiss it all better
Uhn, so hot. And sweet at the same time. I loved it.
Author's Response: hihi thank you girl...are your eyes really brown? sorry just me and my wierd questions ;)
Date: 05/23/08 09:27 am Title: Kiss it all better
Okay, I hate you, you make me lose ALL my words with your hot and cute and sexy stories!>:(
Lol Nah, seriously, I love you! *-*
Author's Response: are you reaviewing everything I write ??? xD because I am seriously starting to love you to hun ;p
Date: 05/11/08 12:57 pm Title: Kiss it all better
Awww, that was hott. With two ts. XD. I love PWP. This one was great! ^^
Author's Response: oh thank you :) happy you found some of mine you like!
Date: 04/19/08 12:33 am Title: Kiss it all better
loved it
Author's Response: thanks !
Date: 04/17/08 08:08 pm Title: Kiss it all better
You are with out a doubt my favorite fan fic author ever! I love this one shot (admitedly I miss the comedy but this is just as good). The ending is so sweet but of course that wasn't my favorite part... ;)
Author's Response: hekki *blushes* god you just make me smile so bad :) and I wonder what your favorite part was ;)
Date: 04/17/08 06:22 pm Title: Kiss it all better
Ahhhhhh luce! That was...ugh...no words. I'm running out of words, you've heard all of my praise and compliments i don't want to bore you with the same thing. I need to invent new words that describe how amazingly awsome you and your fics are XD
When Bill was giving Tom that massage I thought that he was going to leave Tom high and dry and be all scared when he saw Tom's "problem" forming and then leave, but he was like "can i?.." and i was like :O!
and after when Tom was falling asleep and heard Bill in the bathroom saying his name while... i was like awwww *blushes*
BUT! The BEST part EVER! was when Bill asked "Can i kiss you?" I almost died! No ones has ever done that in a story before they always just KISS without permission. It just makes it that much more amazing and romantic *sighs*
Your stories always get me lucy *tear*, i love that about your style of writing. Please don't ever stop writing because you definitly have a gift that needs to be shared. =)
Always yours,
Andi
Author's Response: oh shit andi *blushes extreemly bad* my god that was just...no words, when you come up with those new words of yours then let me know cus I am definativly using them on you !!! haha couldn't have bill leaving his older brother to do the work himself now could we ;) and I just had to make him ask, it was just so...well, bill. thank you again andi for making my day bright and happy, you bseriously do put a smile to my face !!! ps. update your story soon would you, I'm dying to know what happens !
Date: 04/17/08 05:14 pm Title: Kiss it all better
omg......
im blushing.
i dont know why but im blushing. and i have a stupid, dumb smile in my face.
omg...
OMG!!!
that was....omg....WHY THE HELL AM I BLUSHING?!?!?!!?
.....shit this was so hot...
i dont care. this is going to be a short review and thats because you got me open mouthed, nervous and horny!!! xD
and..god....u killed me with the: “Can I kiss you?”
it was a simple, normal thing to ask but.....damn! i dont know how to explain, it was really intense!
cause..first they had sex - they connected physically, and then they kissed - they bounded spiritually...
damn, the ending was the BEST!
gahhh!!! and u got me blushing! i never blush!
what could i do..? this was sooo heart-melting...
Author's Response: hahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you finally said it *does victory march* always when you review my stories you tell me that they make you 'hor...frustrated!!! but you said it this time hihihihihihihihi :) ok I'm being redicolous...well that's just me I guess ;p and I made you blush :)...well princess that makes two of us!
Date: 04/17/08 04:55 pm Title: Kiss it all better
awwww!!!
so cute...thank god tom got hurt down there XD
Author's Response: haha I know, the first time I think any guy has actually apreciated getting his groin damaged ;p