Date: 04/17/08 08:54 am Title: In God's hands.
='[ This brought me to tears, literally!
I love this story even though it makes me cry. It's so beautiful! b29;
Keep writing please.
[I suggest you do Tom's POV in the next one and then action in the chapter after it.]
b29; LOVE IT! b29;
Author's Response: That's exactly what I was thinking about on making :) thank you for the suggestion anyway :) and thanks also for reading and reviewing :) luvluv.
Date: 04/17/08 08:36 am Title: In God's hands.
omg i cried so bad T_____T
it was amazing!
Author's Response: Thaaaaaaaaaank you :D sorry for making you cry!
Date: 04/16/08 11:53 pm Title: Kiss my eyes.
What happened "that night?" I can use my imagination but I'd rather you tell me. I like this story but the relationship between the twins makes me really sad. update soon
Author's Response: Well, they slept together when they knew they couldn't, seeing as they've decided years before to put an end to their relationship :) but just sleeping embraced, nothing more :p (that has to come... *smirk*) And well, it has to make you sad, otherwise it'd mean I haven't writen it the right way :D you'll find out more in a seccc! Thank you for the review.
Date: 04/16/08 11:06 pm Title: Kiss my eyes.
wow..written very very well i must say. i am really itching to find out what's going to happen next with them.
=)
Author's Response: *loves you* thank you :D you'll find out in a minute.
Date: 04/16/08 09:55 pm Title: Kiss my eyes.
Brilliant! Not rushed or anything. More soon please!
Author's Response: Awww, you make me blush! Thank you, I'm posting in a minute :D
Date: 04/15/08 09:29 am Title: Kiss my eyes.
Awesome story! It has a lot of potential, and I like how you put AFI's lyrics in there. I never noticed how that song could be so similar to how (i would like) Bill and Tom act around each other. Update!
Author's Response: Sure I will :) thank you for the compliments, I'm happy you see it the way I do!
Date: 04/14/08 08:20 am Title: Kiss my eyes.
*wiping her tears*
this is so sad and i am heartbeaking :(
Author's Response: Awww *hugs you* babe, this will end well- if you follow what's for coming, in my new series :D
Date: 04/14/08 12:35 am Title: Kiss my eyes.
i love that song, but this made me sad. you should write a sequel where they decide to do whatever the hell they want, because the twins should be happy always. other than that, good job. you tied the song in well without relying on the song to tell the story and quoting lyrics word for word. i hate when people do that. i liked this very much.
Author's Response: *squeal* really!! *O* sequel it is, dedicated to you <3
Date: 04/13/08 07:08 pm Title: Kiss my eyes.
aww, that was heartbreaking..
poor twins, they need eachother!
very good though, you wrote it really nicely!!
Author's Response: *melts* <3
Date: 04/13/08 05:52 pm Title: Kiss my eyes.
Aw! That was brilliant =)
Author's Response: Why thank you! :)
Date: 04/13/08 05:51 pm Title: Kiss my eyes.
*wipes away tears*
very powerful writing.
it was amazing.
Author's Response: Awww, bless you <3