Date: 12/01/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Nine
OMG REALLY . Who ends it like that . Wow . i was just starting to get into it and wham rude ending . But it was good .
Date: 03/02/09 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Such a frustrating relationship.
Date: 02/02/09 11:59 pm Title: Chapter Nine
No! this is really the end? But I was loving this so much! It even made me cry at times (I usually don't get this corny and emotional, so...). In a way, it's a good end, though. It makes you feel like Tom and Georg may actually love each other without really knowing it, because they're so young and all, I guess. The whole thing was so deep! You really are a great writer.
Date: 02/01/09 05:27 am Title: Chapter Nine
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *_* loved it!!! the dialogue was baus, seriously, love it :) :)
Date: 01/25/09 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Okay, I really love this story but I don't think I'll ever be able to read it again.
You write their awkwardness so well... It make me think of my own experience at that age, and I can't help it I cringe ! Because it's so fucking embarrassing and you write it in a really vivid way. So, yeah...
But I love it. I love the fact that it's Tom and Georg, I love the twins relationship. They're so fucking close and cute together but you never shove it in our face. It's always by little acts that we understand their relationship. It's quite refreshing among the twincest (not that I don't like it :P).
So thanks for writing this story.
Date: 11/13/08 11:18 am Title: Chapter Nine
But... but... there's another, right? I mean, it's a series. And how does this lead to Georg getting married?
I was so happy to see this updated so soon and then I saw it was complete. Now I am sad. People don't write Torg enough, let alone people as awesome as you.
P.S. Uncertain, awkward Tom is still the best thing ever.
Author's Response: Of course there is more! There's lots more, and eventually Georg getting married makes sense (I swear).
Date: 11/12/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Wow! This was a fantastic story, so well done! I love how you wrote all the characters, esp. Tom (and his motivations/logic/etc), and the relationship between the twins and their mother. The best part about this fic, though, wasn't even the Georg/Tom-goodness, but how Bill and Tom interacted. People always neglect the other twin, unless it's a twincest fic. So few people can write the twins that incredibly close, without making them have lots of hot, yummy sex. This was almost better than the hot, yummy twincest, just because it's so rare to see, and so true and believable. And you did it so smoothly! Bill is just as big a part of Tom's life as Tom is, a bigger part than George is, but done in such a way that it did not in anyway downplay the George/Tom love fest -- it just made it all the more connected to reality. Thank you, *thank you* for such a wonderful read ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the time you took to write me.
Date: 11/12/08 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Finally, some release. ;]
I loved every bit of this.
Date: 11/12/08 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Oh wow. I love how you write; it's so... fragile. Delicate. Like the words you use to depict an occurrence could break at any moment, so we should savor it while we can.
Simply lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/12/08 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Nine
that was kinda of a weird ending i think u could have writin a little more but hey good none tha less lolz
Date: 11/12/08 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Nine
God, I don't know how I've missed this story but I'm glad I found it! This is fucking amazing! You really made every angsty feeling cursing through Tom's little body come across full force. The confusion, the nervousness, the anger, the tentative looks and touches.. just everything! Torg is a difficult pairing that you can't be sloppy with and you handled it perfectly. I'm crossing all the fingers I have hoping that you will be making a sequal to this, hopefully when they've grown a little bit and are in the band. Please please please with a cherry on top?
Author's Response: This is the first story of a series. The whole idea actually stemmed from a story I'd written some time ago called "Autumnal," which is also posted here. So yes, in short, there are many sequels.
Date: 11/12/08 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Nine
nicely done
Date: 11/12/08 06:13 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I'm not sure what to think of that ending. It was rather abrupt. But maybe it's better that way. Life doesn't always wrap up neat & tidy.
I think what I like most about this is that it seems really realistic. There's not Person A & Person B & they just fall in love or whatever & live happily ever after.
There's insecurity, & arguments, & not being able to make up one's mind. I appreciate that very much. And this Tom seems so human. I mean, what GaryStu pees the bed? Though an odd addition to the story, I think it fits.
And this Bill is more what I think the actual Bill might be like in real life. I can't really describe what I like about that. I just do.
In all, fabulous story. :]
Author's Response: If it seems abrupt it's because there's another story that comes after it. Thank you!
Date: 11/12/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Holy cow, you should have HEARD me yelling "WHAT? The end?? WHAT???" in my office! I freaking forgot this was part of a series. Good grief. LOL I SO loved the tension in this story. Loved it. Tom's reactions all seem so real, just perfectly natural. Wonderful. I really am looking forward to the next story in the series.
Date: 11/12/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Nine
HOLY FUCK!! And what an ending it was.
Loved it!!
Date: 10/31/08 06:50 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I don't understand why you don't get more reviews, because this story is really beautiful. I love the way Tom acts around Georg, and especially this chapter, like ohmygod. Lovelovelove. Make some more of those, please? (:
Date: 10/31/08 03:30 pm Title: Chapter Eight
omg finally lolz i loved it been waiting for like ever please update soon
Date: 10/31/08 12:24 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Oh, God, woman, MOAR. I was so ridiculously happy to see this updated and then shortness. Will there be an update soon or will it be as long as last time? :( I miss you 'round these parts.
Author's Response: Aw, so sorry to abandon you. There shall be more, and it shall be soon.
Date: 10/31/08 07:14 am Title: Chapter Eight
Awwww. Their awkwardness is so damn cute!!