Date: 08/06/08 12:10 am Title: Chapter Seven
hilarious i luved it please update soon
Date: 08/05/08 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Six
Tom and his horrible timing. I mean, it would be one thing if Georg had his own line or something...lol poor Tomi.
You do an excellent job of showcasing Tom's nerves in this fic. His need to talk to Georg properly, but his complete inability to. I hope Tom gets some courage soon as Georg said he's not going to chase him.
*nudges Tom in Georg's direction*
:DDDD And Bill! Bill is too cute. I love how he knows exactly what's going on and what's wrong with his brother and Georg. IT doesn't even faze Bill. He just keeps on plowing forward--deranged and strange and wonderful as he is--and he's always there to comfort his brother and tell him when he's being an ass.
LOL!
I'm just wondering if it was Georg's parents at the end who answered or was it by chance Georg? It could have been either and Tom still panicked, so I wanted to clarify.
More please! :DD
Date: 08/05/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter Six
aaaaaa you cannot leave us there!!
Amazing chapter, that dream was so nice to read! I cannot wait for some action between this perfect pair ;)
Thanks for updating so fast!
Date: 08/04/08 06:27 pm Title: Chapter Five
This might be coming slow but I'm in love with this story. There's nothing like this on this whole website. Thanks for keepin on writing and posting. You're doing an amazing job!
Author's Response: High praise! Thanks very much.
Date: 08/04/08 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Five
Poor Tomi, I hope his bed problem gets better. So are they going to become Tokio Hotel in this story?
Author's Response: Yes.
Date: 08/04/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oh no. I just read Autumnal just now. I'm taking it that things never get better. *weeps*
But there's still Summer and Winter right? I wonder what's going on there if your Perennial series gives any indication.
Author's Response: This story gets better, I promise, but you'll hate winter.
Date: 08/04/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Five
Ouch. Tom, you idiot!!! "Bill said I should call you."???? OMG. *cries*
LOL. Yeah that phone call really went well. Poor Tom. Poor Georg.
Another thing is, I must really love this fic because I'm usually a devout T/B fan. The twins together all the way, baby! But this fic is finding a place in my heart. It's really good.
Now I'm going to go sit in a corner, rock back and forth, and will some sense into Tom before he pisses Georg off for good. LOL!
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/03/08 02:28 pm Title: Chapter Four
This story is really good, but the problem is, it's so far in between updates that I forget entirely what it's about. I understand people have personal lives--very busy ones at that--but it kind of ruins the momentum of your story. Same thing with Secrets of Summer and there's another chaptered one you were working on which I can't even remember the name of now, let alone what it was about. I think it had to do something with the twins and someone bursting into their hotel room?
Anyway, I really thought this fic had been abandoned. It's sweet and painful and Tom's awkwardness around Georg is so realistic. I kind of just want to tell him to just confide in Georg why he's so skittish and defensive around him. It's understandable that Tom is humiliated by his bed wetting problem at his age, but it's better than alienating Georg completely by acting like a nutcase. LOL If Georg laughs at him....well then Tom knows he's not really a true friend OR potential boyfriend.
I also find the story a bit vague though. I hope that I'm interpreting this correctly: That you're going for the slow, awkward buildup between Tom and Georg--and not just BAM! It's in your face and the whole "I like you, do you like me?" nonsensical stuff. I find myself wondering what Georg is thinking though. It's obvious he's crushing on Tom but was Tom the only one? Has he crushed on anyone else--boy or girl? This has been going on for two years I believe right? Because I think it started when the twins were 11 and then they turned 13. I could be wrong. Anyway, it's just that Georg is a bit mysterious in this. Kind of want a little more from him so I get where he's coming from. He seems to be--in this chapter at least--implying that Tom is fucking around with him. 'Leaving him hanging' as he put it. But isn't he getting that Tom is really insecure? Then again guys are idiots.
I hope to see more of this soon--along with your other stuff.
Author's Response: Yeah, I can't really write unless I'm feeling it, so I suppose it comes out when it comes out!
To answer your questions: the story is from Tom's POV, so that's the only POV the reader gets, and anything about what Georg is thinking is filtered through Tom--the reader knows what Tom knows. There are stories later in the series that are from Georg's POV, so you'll know what he's thinking, but everything about Georg in this story is going to be implicit, since it's not really about him per se. I suppose the moral of the story really is this: people are stupid about lov.
That said, thanks for the in-depth review, those make me oh-so happy.
Date: 08/03/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter Four
So glad to see this updated, I thought you'd abandoned it.
Wow, this was so awkward and painful for Tom. I really felt for him.
Can't wait to see more. :)
Date: 08/03/08 12:34 am Title: Chapter Four
omg omg omg iv been waiting for this please dnt wait so long to update again please lolz and icnt belive Tom like pee'ed lolz thats like so ebarrising lolz
Date: 05/11/08 02:47 am Title: Chapter Three
Love this! I adore Tom in his crush. Can't wait for the update!
Date: 05/10/08 03:39 am Title: Chapter Three
oh Tomi is so cute
I can feel his nerves
its so...its like walking on eggshells for him, with all these feelings that he really dont know what to do with
he is too cute
:)
Date: 05/10/08 12:35 am Title: Chapter Three
I don't know how many parts you plan on adding to this or how far your taking the relationshio but where ever this ends up going the pace is so sweet and perfect. I love it
Date: 05/09/08 10:36 pm Title: Chapter Three
Tom's crush on Georg is sooooo big and complicated and painful it hurts. And it's adorable at the same time. *pets Tomi*
I've always loved your writing.
Date: 04/24/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter Two
aww ^_^
i LOVED it! =D i absolutely CAN'T wait for the next chap!
Date: 04/24/08 02:06 am Title: Chapter Two
I LOVE your characterization. The boys are so.... boyish. It's awesome. So good.
Date: 04/24/08 02:03 am Title: Chapter Two
You are my absolute favorite. :) Your writing is so raw it HURTS.
Date: 04/13/08 01:32 am Title: Chapter One
I like how this story is going and I can't wait for more. Poor Tom, I feel so bad for him.
Date: 04/13/08 01:27 am Title: Chapter One
Okay... that was just too cute.
I hope there's more to come!! I can't wait to see where it goes.