Date: 06/16/12 08:45 am Title: Truths.
That was a rather strange story. All the smart-alec back-talking jokes between the twins were a bit much, it felt kind of forced. And you have this odd way of narrating where it feels like ppl are moving too much, too many expressions, and tempo changes in the convo, if u get what I'm saying. Anyways, it's ok, it wasn't all bad. In fact, I quite enjoyed reading it. You caught my attention and I really wanted to see how this little scenario between the twins would play out. Its a fun plot idea, a great snippet of an afternoon to capture between the twins. So I'll def say that this was fun to read, but I wish the writing wasn't "trying so hard" to be funny. It was amusing in its own. Well done. :)
Date: 07/02/08 11:31 am Title: Truths.
awww, this was so sweet :] i really loved it tbh (: xox
Author's Response: thanks babe :) x
Date: 07/02/08 10:55 am Title: Tig
“Bring it on, bitch.” haha. that's so funny that part. it did make me laugh. lol. it's so good & yeahh, i loved it and i'm gonna read onn (: xox
Author's Response: awesome. thanks :) x
Date: 06/07/08 10:14 am Title: Truths.
haha that was great, soooooo funny
and the tension was brilliant.
i can imagine the twins being like that minus the snogging :)
brilliant!
Author's Response: Yay, glad you thought it was funny (: Thank you :) xx
Date: 06/06/08 03:42 pm Title: Tig
i like this one (x2) cos its fun seeing a game turn into such a life changing thing. funny to see others reaction to news.
Author's Response: aah, Abi. you always analyse things, bless. Dankee, xx
Date: 06/02/08 02:36 pm Title: Truths.
Bill is allergic to apples.
Author's Response: I thought that wasn't confirmed? I'm not sure. At first it did say orange, but we changed it 'cause it sounded a bit...odd. Oh well, it's only fiction. xx
Date: 05/25/08 05:00 am Title: Truths.
ha! love the ending, but there should be more please
Author's Response: Glad you liked the ending, we were quite proud of that :] Sadly there will be no more, unless we can think of something to put in another chapter, but so far we have n othing planned. Thanks for your review (: Jess, x
Date: 04/12/08 05:45 pm Title: Tig
I like the chapter, it's funny, interesting and very well written. I really liked.
Hope you update as soon as possible because I'm sure I want to read more. ^^
Good job.
Author's Response: We're really glad that you like the chapter, and thank you for saying it's well written ^_^. We are going to try and update as soon as we can, and we're also really glad that you want to read more. Thanks for your lovely review, Jess, x
Date: 04/12/08 04:04 pm Title: Tig
Ohhhh this is sooo good!!!
WHY DID U STOP?!?!?!?!?!
Author's Response: Thank youuu! We haven't stopped, we just need to alter a bit on chapter two, and then Jade is going to write and post it. Should be up around monday/tuesday at the latest, i'd guess. ^_^ Jess, x
Date: 04/12/08 02:37 pm Title: Tig
Cute!
Author's Response: Thanks :D Jess, x
Date: 04/12/08 12:46 pm Title: Tig
oo! I really like this.
they're so funny.
please post more soon!
Author's Response: We're really glad you like this :D Thankss :D We will, we're working on the next chapter right now (Y) Jess, x
Date: 04/12/08 12:43 pm Title: Tig
sweetness =D
tom sounds like my 10 year old brother >_>
Author's Response: ahaha, is that good or bad? lolss, thanks for your review (: Jess, x