Date: 04/12/08 06:08 pm Title: Hedgehog or Cat?
Vivian and Bill look so cute together xD In a brotherly way of course.
*hugs*
Author's Response: heehee thankyou very much x
Date: 04/12/08 05:46 pm Title: Hedgehog or Cat?
Wait... was that a hint at twincest? o.o. "wanting to be with Bill again"? Or is it just me? xD
N'ways, I like this chapter. Shows all the tension n' stuff between the siblings.
It's actually kinda common for siblings to be attracted to each other after meeting as adults for the first time xD. I find that amusing.
Author's Response: yeah-you got it right, I'm going to add some 'cest later one .rnrnI'm glad you liked this chapter, thankyou very much :)rnxx
Date: 04/12/08 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
haha this is so so so funny so good im hooked update soon
plz
i love this
lyl
xxxx
Date: 04/12/08 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
LOLOLOL.
Tom is proper amusing in thiss
Jade, i demand more. like now. pretty please :D *puppy dog eyes*
xx
Date: 04/12/08 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
OMGOMGOMGOMG!
the line.. '“What the hell did you get up to when we were in Vegas?” ' proper made me LOL!!!
Date: 04/12/08 09:09 am Title: Chapter 3
Eh... starting to get a little... idk, cliche for me or whatever, to be honest. Is it gonna focus on their actual relationships or just be "hehe, my sister's a hottie"?
Not to be mean, I swear. Just wondering, because if Vivian is their sister, it shouldn't just be about how hot she is.
Author's Response: i know exactly what your meaning, and don't worry it's all getting sorted in the next chap ter :) thankyou so much hun for your honesty:) xx
Date: 04/12/08 08:55 am Title: Chapter 3
oelala this is an awesome story:D
Date: 04/11/08 02:40 pm Title: Vivian
its awesome. please go on :)
Date: 04/11/08 12:34 pm Title: Vivian
“Oh and by the way, Tom’s gay and Tokio Hotel are breaking up,” ---> LOOOL
Amazing plot line and the sister is in for some treat...the Kaulitz twins are trouble xD
*hugs*
Date: 04/10/08 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm. Interesting. I usually don't read het, but I might give this a try :).
Author's Response: heehee thankyou very much then :) i'll try to kep this story interesting for you then :) if it sucks let me know :) xxx
Date: 04/10/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW.
this looks really good so far - keep going!!
and nice job on the grammar and spelling.
Author's Response: Awwwww thankyou *smiles*
Date: 04/10/08 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
this sounds as if it would be a great story. you should write more soon =)
Author's Response: thankyou-i will upload more today because I'm ill and don't have school 2 worruy about =] thanks for your review :) xxx
Date: 04/10/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's like it is going to be good. I hope you write more.
Author's Response: yeh i will write more soon enough, thankyou :)
Date: 04/10/08 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Shit, that was one hell of a chapter. Please don't stop!!
*hugs*
Author's Response: aww thanks :)