Date: 10/18/08 05:36 pm Title: “Well, the core has expanded."
Noooooooo. Don't kill them!!!! *rocks back and forth* NOOOOO!!
Author's Response: ;P
Date: 10/18/08 03:21 pm Title: “Well, the core has expanded."
Noooo!
Evil devil Simone!
I HATE her!
She can't kill the babies!
can't wait for more
Author's Response: It ain't the babies ;P
Date: 10/18/08 03:06 pm Title: “Well, the core has expanded."
*sighs*
I don't want anything to happen to Bill...or Tom. I'd be sad beyond words, seriously. They've had to deal with far too damn much for that...
Don't get me wrong. I don't want anything to happen to the kids, either, but I think I'd be more sad if it were B&T. Simone is evil =( I'm anxious, though...*ugh*
Author's Response: Just to spoil, I am especially excited to see YOUR reaction to the next chapter, then ;P
Date: 10/18/08 03:02 pm Title: “Well, the core has expanded."
I've meant to ask this before, I'm sure that it's been mentioned somewhere, and I've over looked it, or not let it register, but, what time period is this set in? My mind has different settings for each section type thing, for example, the Lumina HQ is an old, medieval castle, but the mafia HQ was modern, silver and had lots of glass.
I so don't want anything bad to happen, and I'm worried about what's coming up, but at the same time, I'm excited about it. Every now and then I do love abit of drama and/or angst.
I know this is mean, but I don't think that I'd be all that bothered if the kids die, don't get me wrong, I want them to live, but as long as Bill and Tom stay together and strong, then I'm fine with whatever else happens.
Guh, I just fucking adore this, and even though it means it ending, which is really really bad, I want to know what happens in the end. And if it ends, another upside is getting to see the undoubtedly great stuff that you've yet to produce/post.
Author's Response: This is not set in any particular period. It's an alternate alternate universe, yeno? I added those things to like show the Mafia (or Malfora, which is their real name) to show how much colder they were. In a way ;p And it is not the kids Simone is supposed to kill...
Date: 10/14/08 06:51 pm Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
Please continue, Love this story
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :)
Date: 10/14/08 06:35 pm Title: “It's been five years, Bill.”
I love this story, please continue :)
Author's Response: Aye-aye
Date: 10/14/08 01:48 pm Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
Great freaking sequel Ö I looooooooooooooveeee this!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Will do :)
Date: 10/12/08 05:09 pm Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
bitch...... YEA!!! TOMI AND BILLA STILL LIKE EACH OTHER!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOO!!!!!
sry: hyper.......... d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)d:)
Author's Response: Hehehe ;P
Date: 10/12/08 12:51 pm Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
Muahaha her plan is starting to crumble :3
Author's Response: Aye
Date: 10/12/08 07:28 am Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
Sorry Simone, but you fail. They're getting closer and closer. Deal with it. :)
The end bit was so cute. I found myself "Awe"'ing out loud. :3
Author's Response: Hihi ;P
Date: 10/12/08 06:32 am Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
What an epic fail, for Simone that is.
Dirty slag.
Yeayyy! Fluff's back, regardless of how long it's for, but it's back. *happy dance*
I were so worried about opening this, I'd have read it no matter what direction it was going, but if it was bad, I think I'd be scowling all day.
I'm not a fan of long angst, just short bursts here and there.
Thank God you didn't do that, even if you do do it in the next chapter, it's fine by me.
If you had angst in this chapter, I'd have feared for your father....and inquired about his well-being.
I feel I'm rambling.
I love how gentle and sweet Tom is with Bill, even when he's meant to be pissed at him.
And EWWW! Tasting breast milk?! WTF?! That's wrong on so many levels!!
But his reasoning for doing it was so so cute.
Bless him.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha! My dad is in Oslo, so no worries ;) I wouldn't taste breastmilk, really. I was kinda disgusted myself.... <3!!
Date: 10/12/08 01:12 am Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
Alva...you're the Angel that lights my dark days!!
Author's Response: <3<3
Date: 10/11/08 11:56 pm Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
*kills simone then feeds her to the dogs!!!* gawd shes the worst!!! i hate ehr with a passion!!! an undying passion!!!GERRRRR!!!!
great story!!! love the boys!!! but hate simone...hate her sooo much!!!
xoxoxoxo
Author's Response: Aww xD Thank you!
Date: 10/11/08 11:54 pm Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
I loved this chapter, I especially liked the part where Bill feels like he's seeing Tom as an individual for the first time; just wow, that was so well written.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I felt so emotional while writing, so it is nice to hear it was well written ;P
Date: 10/11/08 11:41 pm Title: “Loving them... I don't think that's wrong.”
*growls*
Simone needs to like, fall face first on a bed of nails...from about 15 stories off the ground. She's pissing me off =[ Stupid bitch...
I don't want Tomi and Bill to drift apart anymore! It makeses me sad. *sniffles* Poor...BOTH of them.
Author's Response: Mothers-in-law can be bitches, aye.
Date: 10/11/08 08:21 pm Title: “It's been five years, Bill.”
O.o.................d:)
Author's Response: o.O
Date: 10/10/08 10:36 am Title: “It's been five years, Bill.”
I can't leave a long review, I'm in a neighbours house, stealing their Internet for an hour.
But urghhh, Simone needs to die.
End of.
I don't know what to say about Bill and Tom fighting after him only having been awake for a few weeks, but that's me, I only think there should be more angst years after the angst, and nothing but pure fluff in between.
I hope that made sense, it didn't really to me.
On the other hand though, I'm glad they're arguing properly, and not just be one big happy family as most authors write, but then again, you're so much better than other authors.
Ergh, I'd say more, but I can't.
Author's Response: Aww, that's OK :) I added early angst to let the reader see what kind of an impact Simone has on her son. And HOMAGAD, thanks for that compliment! Although I don't dare to believe you ;P
Date: 10/09/08 03:26 pm Title: “She's talking to me!”
Simone is a bitch! *gets out knives* Now just tell me where she is! :D
Author's Response: Hahaha xD NO! I was paid to protect her...
Date: 10/09/08 11:06 am Title: “She's talking to me!”
you are really good :D:D
Author's Response: Takk, du xD
Date: 10/09/08 02:25 am Title: “She's talking to me!”
OHMIGAWD. are you kidding me?? Simone wants the babies...dead?
i'll kill her.
I lobaloba it babyyy..MOAARR.
Author's Response: D'ække ungene... :O