Date: 04/27/15 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so so so perfect, I have such a kink for pee especially being peed IN unfff and you got their relationship down perfectly.
Date: 09/19/12 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
woooo me likes xD kinky, a kind of different version of Golden Showers but yeah x'D nice job darlin ^^
Date: 10/26/11 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 12/20/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
THIS WAS REALLY HOT :D I can't stop reading it ^^
Date: 08/02/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gosh! The piss thing, it grosses me out, but it was Bill's own faulttt. Haha, at least he liked it? But I really love this fic! You did such an awesomeee job! :D
Date: 01/29/10 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Second time I'm reading this and it's like it got even better! o.O Soo hott !
Date: 11/29/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is even better a second time. :)
Date: 04/09/09 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
DAAAAAAAAAAAMN DAT WAS FRIKIN HOT.....IDK WAT TO SAY DAT WAS HOT...AND THE ENDIND WAS SO SWEET, NOW IF THEIR RELATIONSHIP WAS REALLY LIKE DAT I THINK THEY WOULD GET 5X MORE FANS AND PEOPLE TO LOVE THEM....BUT IDK DAT MEAN THE FEMALE CHANCES WOULD BE VEEERY LOW...OOOH WELL I STILL LOVE TO STORY XD
Date: 03/23/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol, ahhhh.. Dude, this story was hot but at the same time it cracked me up man.
Date: 11/24/08 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWWWWWW That ending made me MELT!!! And the rest of it made me hot... way to smut it up *Two thumbs up* XD
Date: 09/06/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
So perfect =D
Love!
Date: 07/16/08 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1
*drool*
that. That was. Surprisingly hawt when Tom couldn't hold it any longer. O.O. Wow!! Sexy!! *adds to favorites* YUMMY!!! That gave me a tidal wave of dirty thoughts. I like it!! *dies*
Date: 07/15/08 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was a sweet and weird story (':
Date: 07/12/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
*giggles* i am so very fond of you tink xXx
Date: 06/21/08 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
O......M........G!!!!!!!!!!!!
i didnt think your smut could get any smuttier. that was a whole new level
and then some
wow lol
Date: 06/20/08 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol *hides* it's a bad thing to get addicted to, nowadays.
Date: 06/20/08 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol, then give me a shout in the SB or something. I'm like... Literally always in there, unless I'm writing.
Author's Response: I've noticed that xD
Date: 06/20/08 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol, but I've had that idea for months now. Okay, so now I imagined it was that you know, Bill and Tom. Getting it on. Whoever is on bottom farts. That would be sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo weird. And I like giving people ideas. xD
Author's Response: Well, now is not really the best time for giving me ideas, I'm afraid. Maybe some other day ^_~
Date: 06/20/08 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Lol, what do you mean? I ish confuzzeled. MY MUSE IS BACK ONLINE. I'm happy now.
Author's Response: Seriously, you don't want to give me ideas, I'll end up writing them xD