Date: 04/10/08 11:39 pm Title: Beweg Dein Arsch
bah why the hell havn't I read this before ???
shit that was...no words
ok so yes the first chapter was angsty, but I think it was just what you needed to get this story going. We got to learn about Bill's thoughts and I absolutly loved the way you were merely hinting that Bill felt something more for his brother other then just telling us right away, even after chapter number two I'm still not sure if Bill knows that he only wanted to proove himself because of his feelings towards his brother and not just to prove that he too could be fun
and I loved tom in the last chapter being all brotherly like...so sweet
but then of course he had to turn into a complete bastard in this one ;)
I loved that you let bill meet a girl without complications and she seemed so sweet to him, up until the moment she swooned for his brother of course...slut
anyways, tom being jealous is always good and I'm secretly wondering if he was actually jealous of the girl, but didn't admit it to himself :) at least that's what I'm hoping
and tom feeling guilty hahaaaaaaaaa that's even better :) he's gonna be sorry for messing with bill isn't he *evil laugh*
ok sorry ;)
this is a plot that really fits your way of wrighting cus it's got a good amount of angst in it, but nothing like the 'I wanna die kill me now angst' and believe me that's a good thing !!!
I also love the way you put the humor in so easily :) yay to boys mocking Georg, that's always fun
seriously this is such a good story and it's going to my favourites straight away ! hope to see an update soon love :)
kisses, luce
Author's Response: OMFG LUCY! You just like... wow! You knew exactly what i was talking about! Im so happy that someone finally understood! With like Bill being all hinting about liking Tom and then the Tom being jealous thing... i love you! Im glad that it wasn't too angsty cuz i know that i hate fics that are like omg *slits wrists* so i didnt want it to be like that. You just made my LIFE with this review! and i will update very soon just for you! =) Thank you sooooo much! Liebe~*Andi*~
Date: 04/09/08 07:45 am Title: Beweg Dein Arsch
Wa Tom has reached unprecedented levels of bastardliness in this chapter 0_o
oh well, I like my healthy daily dose of angst so I loved it *pets Bill* Great story!
Author's Response: i know im sorry D; my idea for this story was pretty angsty from the begining, but i was hoping nobody would be like GAH TOO ANGSTY FUR MICH XD, so im glad you loved it, cuz i loved writing it and i love gettng reviews *jumps around* so danke schon! Liebe~*Andi*~
Date: 04/09/08 01:12 am Title: Beweg Dein Arsch
Love it :D Update soon ^____^
Author's Response: Danke schon! next update should be up by tomorrow =)
Date: 04/09/08 12:19 am Title: Beweg Dein Arsch
Oh God, Tom you stupid... *grrrr* I have no words! Wich is good and bad, because your story is fantastic and now I want to go and strangle Tom, the stupid fuck.
I love this. I hope Tom will make this up to Bill somehow. I know how he can try ; )
Author's Response: LOL awe that makes me feel amazing XD...yes Tom is a very stupid fuck in this chapter, but i felt it had to be done even though Bill was so upset DD: but dont worry next chapter should make some ppl very happy *giggles* hopefully *puppy dog eyes* Thank you for your review and thank you for reading =) Leibe~*Andi*~
Date: 04/08/08 07:40 pm Title: Beweg Dein Arsch
*strangles Tom*
Poor Bill, Tom was such a dick for doing that to his twin.
Can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: I know, Tom is an ass, but we'll see what happens... Next chapter will be posted in a couple days probably. Thank you for your review =)
Date: 04/08/08 12:42 pm Title: Immer Weider Zu Lachen
looks promising ^_^
Other then playing music that's all they did.
think it should be "than"
:)
please do continue. I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Thank you so much yours is the first constuctive critism ive gotten, though im not complaining i appreciate it very much, but its funny cuz when i was writing that part i had put "than" first but then changed it thinking it was wrong. i always get confused between the two D: so thank you for pointing that out :) The next chapter will be posted tomorrow, so hopefully i don't unhook you :P Thanks again for you review Love, ~*Andi*~
Date: 04/08/08 12:13 pm Title: Immer Weider Zu Lachen
!!Looking forward to the next chapter! Sounds like a great story and its well written too :)!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much i try my very best!=) The next chapter will be posted tomorrow, hopefully it doesn't disapoint :) Thank you for your review it means so much to me <3 Love ~*Andi*~
Date: 04/08/08 12:09 pm Title: Immer Weider Zu Lachen
*first time reviewing a story on this site* This looks really promising!! I too often wonder what's behind Bill's ever happy and ditzy mask and all these smiles...
I really felt Bill's pain when Tom dismissed him so easily (that ass!), I swear it broke my little heart! I hope he makes Tomi insanely jealous at the club!!
Author's Response: Really?! I feel honored that i am the first =) I am most likely posting the next chapter tomorrow so we'll see what happens ;) Thank you so much for your review Love, ~*Andi*~
Date: 04/08/08 12:01 pm Title: Immer Weider Zu Lachen
I think it's LaFee who's the artist? Am I right, huh huh huh? :D
Author's Response: YAY! YOU WIN! *cuddles and gives cookie cuz your the first one who guessed and guessed right* lol hope nobody hates me for it D:
Date: 04/08/08 11:25 am Title: Immer Weider Zu Lachen
Awww, poor Bill! Tom, you're a real ass sometimes. And Bill, for the love of God, don't do anything you will regret just to prove a point!
I really really liked it = ) Hope you update soon, I want to know what's going to happen.
Author's Response: Yay! First review! Aww thanx so much, i really appreciate it=) Don't worry Bill isn't that stupid, but yes Tom is an ass, but hopefully he will change for the better ;) Next chapter will hopefully be posted tomorrow. Im glad you liked it and thank you again for your review. Love,~*Andi*~