Date: 05/17/08 09:30 am Title: In the pants of course!
Eminem's Public Enemy #1 "in the pants". :D
This is such a cute story and I'm getting into it, I kinda wanna slap Bill and say, "Its you! You're the one Tom likes!" Though the flashes of jealous from both of them and the hesitant affection is adorable.
Author's Response: Hehe thanks for the review :) I know, even I: the writer wants to slap my characters haha.
Date: 05/17/08 06:49 am Title: In the pants of course!
Bill is jealous, hihi :D If only he knew. But Tom is not exactly subtle or maybe it is so because I know how Tom feels. I think this is going to be very interesting ;)I love it!
Update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe~rnPoor Bill, he's so clueless on how he feels! It is gonna be interesting ;)
Date: 05/16/08 01:14 pm Title: Toaster of Death
hihi, I think it's funny the way that Tom reason. Bill thinks that Tom likes Georg:D I want to know what happens in the next chapter so go on, i'll be waiting!!!
Author's Response: Hehe! Thank you so much for the review. Bill is CLULESS. Heh.
Date: 05/09/08 01:21 pm Title: Toaster of Death
Hurry up and get Tom to subtally tell Bill how he feels! He could tell him out right or try making him jelous! Just do something before Tom goes nuts.
Author's Response: o____o Maybe I will! I will try to hurry it up. After the filler (Chapter 5) I'll be able to
Date: 05/09/08 09:20 am Title: Toaster of Death
oh my hahaha
so georg is bill
I finally get thet
Im a bit slow sometimes
lol
Author's Response: Hahaha. In Tom's mind anyways hahaha. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/05/08 05:33 pm Title: Rainbow Pops
it's so amazing
pliz continue soon i check every day hoping for a new chapter ^ ^
Author's Response: Awh thank you!
Date: 05/04/08 06:05 pm Title: Rainbow Pops
Yay, a chappie! ^_^ lovely lovely story!! if its a beta you need, i offer my services. ^_^ im already a beta for a few of my friends and i must say that i love helping them with their stories. so let me know if you need any help, ja?
Author's Response: Oh that would be amazing! I swear, every single one of my Beta Readers died on me. Thank you, and yes I will probably go to you. Most likely actually. I'm almost done my fourth Chapter; so... I might call upon you <3
Date: 05/04/08 01:53 pm Title: Rainbow Pops
Find a beta reader ASAP! I can't wait this long again! I get the sense that Bill likes him too. That would be nice. He's just digging his grave deeper and deeper at the moment so he needs to fix that soon.
Author's Response: o___o I'm sorry again for the wait, I know. His grave is only going to get deeper sadly; silly Beta Readers all died I swear. Well... The fourth chapter shouldn't be that long away. ;D. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/04/08 06:03 am Title: Rainbow Pops
this story wascute. I can imaine Tomi blowing a raspberry at his brother,its cute x]
Author's Response: I know. I can imagine it all when I write the whole story. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/04/08 04:12 am Title: Rainbow Pops
=D
i liked it =D
i only started reading just now, but i hope u don't mind (A)
poor tomi must be really confused! i hope he figures things out though, before he totally ruins his relationship with bill! =0
Author's Response: Oh he is~ Thank you for the response. Maybe he will, maybe he will be more confused than a Zebra with polka dots.
Date: 04/28/08 05:43 pm Title: Lollipops and Puppies
PMG! please write more! I want to knw what happens next!! I love this story so far!!
Author's Response: Hehe. Thank you~ for your review. More chapters will be up soon I promise.
Date: 04/27/08 01:06 pm Title: Lollipops and Puppies
Confession time for Tomi isn't it! I wonder how it all goes down. I feel bad for Bill as he momentarily feels like Tom is mad at him, like in the conversation at the table - luckily Tomi's good at making things better!
Author's Response: Maybe? Thanks for the review :)
Date: 04/27/08 12:54 pm Title: Rainbows Make The World Go Around
Poor Tom :) But Bill's magnetism is enough for anyone to want him. I'm excited to see how this develops!
Author's Response: True dat! Thanks for the review
Date: 04/27/08 10:32 am Title: Lollipops and Puppies
hahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
oh my god this is do good
shit I really need the next chapter soon
and awww to the twins being so damn adorable all the freaking time, really cutely written
I laughed so hard when tom took that last shot, god I really hope the Gs leaves them later on and then there's two drunken-out-of-their-wits twins...alone...on a bed...gosh I'm riling myself up here
yeah so, basically love this !
hugs and kisses
lucy
Author's Response: hahahaha. Thanks so much <3
Date: 04/27/08 10:15 am Title: Lollipops and Puppies
great(:
continue(:
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 04/27/08 08:51 am Title: Lollipops and Puppies
can't wait for more!!! Update soon!
Author's Response: Pretty sure there are more. Rofl. Thanks!
Date: 04/27/08 08:04 am Title: Lollipops and Puppies
OH
MY
GOD
hahahahah
I love thme drunk
thats when all the fun happens ^^
Author's Response: Oh ho ho. Yes exactly.
Date: 04/27/08 12:08 am Title: Lollipops and Puppies
moooorrreeeee!!!!
Author's Response: Coming up. Thank you for the review <33
Date: 04/26/08 11:58 pm Title: Lollipops and Puppies
How will bill react to that knowledge? Will they even remember in the morning? Update soon.
Author's Response: I feel a dun dun dun dunnnnn~ coming up soon. rnThank you for the review~
Date: 04/08/08 09:29 am Title: Rainbows Make The World Go Around
aaaaaawwww
so good!
moreeeeeee plz! *_*
Author's Response: Thank youuuu~ New updates will be out ASAP... when I get my mind to start thinking again. <3