Date: 05/09/08 10:14 pm Title: Washing Machines and Fuzzy Afros
aww..poor Bill everyone's picking on him..xD
UPDATE!
Author's Response: Haha, oh, I know. Poor Bill. But who said life was fair? XD
Date: 05/09/08 09:59 pm Title: Washing Machines and Fuzzy Afros
AWWW
omg...MR.STEVENSON! HAHA I bet that was Domi's idea =P
AND jazzy!!!! aww..hehe I still feel bad for scaring him the night of the Tokio Hotel concert..poor thing =P
AND MIRACLE OF LIFE OMG!!!!!
BIOLGOY CLASS!! EWWW
lol..That scene highly reminds me of the time you, me and DOmi were watching Little Britian and those naked men came on HAHA And then we couldnt fuckin find the remote!!
haha good timess xD
Poor Noo
Aw, gustavalanche and Oli are getting closer!! XD
update oli, awesome , funny chapter as usual!!
Love you
Author's Response: ACTUALLY. I CAME UP WITH MR. STEVENSON. [and i hope to God he never finds this]. OMG LITTLE BRITIAN! <33 Yeah, OLI AND GUSTI, SITTING IN A TREE!...
Date: 05/08/08 08:29 pm Title: Water Balloons and...Bert McCrackens?
aww. Bill's like a little baby everyone has to take care of. left alone shivering. poor thing.
haha "Bert McCracken on a whole wheat bun" i've never thought that is sounded like a McD's meal. but now that i think of it. HELL YA IT DOES!! i want to order that now.
i love how you reference things that i ALWAYS know. i enjoy it.
Author's Response: Lmao, yeah! OMG, I'm so glad you understand my references. I was so scared nobody would!!! Yeah, I really wanna go to McD's and order a 'Bert McCracken' one day. I wonder what they'd say...
Date: 05/08/08 12:46 pm Title: Nail Polish and Paintballing
AWWWWW LOL FOOTSIE LINE V.GOOD ACTUALLY THIS HOLE THING IS HMM GR8!!!! SO LIEK YER UPDATE SOON FOR ME COZ I APSLUTLY LOVE THIS FIC SO DARN MUCH XD
luv it
100/100
ly
xxx
Author's Response: LMAO! YEAH! Thank you! I shall update asap!
Date: 05/08/08 12:44 am Title: Nail Polish and Paintballing
nah, i don't write hate reviews. If i am not fond of your story, i just won't comment it..
BUT YOURS!!! i love. :DDD
seriously, i don't know alot of people who can really write humor, it seems to forced or something, but yours seems to just come pretty naturally.
'She could totally see it now: Olivia Evans; stopping fertilization, one fat and sweaty second grader at a time.
Good times, good times.'
^ laughed until i couldn't breathe
yeah, oli and sonny are pretty much gods of the 'panty drawer husband list'.
At least Oli is still cute now. :(
SO! YEAH!
update?
pwweeeaassseeee?
*pout*
loveeeeee
Author's Response: LMAO YEAH! Honestly, I think it's a good thing that you don't write hate reviews; I personally don't either, because people always take it the wrong way, and I don't like starting things. YEAH! WHAT HAPPENED TO SONNY!? He wasn't really THAT cute when he was with FFTL (well compared to Matt, no one really was...XD) but now he's just narsty. I love Oli; it's kinda weird that we share the same nickname. So as weird as this sounds, I thought you were talking about me for like, 2 seconds. AWKWARD. Thanks so much for the review, I really like the long appreciative ones. It's so awesome to know that people actually like the shit that I write <3
Date: 05/07/08 10:54 pm Title: Nail Polish and Paintballing
Love it I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I will! <3
Date: 05/07/08 09:46 pm Title: Nail Polish and Paintballing
OMG! LOVED it! that was so freaking hilarious!
Author's Response: Lmao! Thank you! <3
Date: 05/07/08 09:43 pm Title: Nail Polish and Paintballing
HAHAHA
OMG OLI!!!
"YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU’RE TALKING ABOUT, OIL THAT IS OF OLIVES!”
HAHA I KNOW WHERE YOU GOT THAT FROM!!!
"AT LEAST I KNOW TEXAS ISN'T IN CANADA!"
HAHA STEPH!!!!!!!!!!
I can see our actual life is inspiring your story xD
HAHA POOR TOM..NO FUTURE CHILDREN FOR HIM!!
And I really had to laugh when you said Bill clapped his hands like a demented seal...hehe...I ENJOY HIS CLAPPING!!!
Anyways awesome chap..
And next time..UPDATE FASTER! lol joking, you can arm slap me tomorrow at school =P
ly
Author's Response: JWLKHGLKASHGDLAKHGLSAH;GKLSHGDASL;HGD. NO ONE KNOWS WHERE I GOT THOSE FROM, BETCH! But yeah; Bill does clap like a seal, and yes, I do get my jokes from my friends. OKAY WORLD, I JUST ADMITTED IT, ZOMG! <3 I LOVE YOU!
Date: 05/07/08 09:39 pm Title: Nail Polish and Paintballing
Awww, this was so cute! And funny. I love it. (And I also love paintballing. Another plus.) My favorite part was this:
“You know, dinner was great and all, but I really wish that whoever is playing footsie with me would kindly stop.” Georg suddenly said.
“Sorry.” Olivia and Gustav both said at the same time and jumped up in their seats.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: HAHA! XD! Yeah, I love that part too! Wow, I hope the paintball scene was pretty realistic, since I've actually never been! Le gasp! I know, shocking. I really want to go though! It sounds really fun from what my friends tell me.
Date: 05/07/08 09:31 pm Title: Hairballs and Giraffes
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
omg i just love this tom.
and im loling at everything you write.
OUT LOUD. that NEVER happens.
i love your style, so funny.
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks so much! :) I'm so glad I'm actually able to make people laugh; like srsly, when I first started writing, I thought no one would understand my jokes, but obviously not! <3
Date: 05/07/08 12:21 pm Title: Mice and Street Hockey
this is so gr8 danke for this chap even if i had to wait till the end brill woow lucky girl nehoo bill is totally bein a chick but its teehhee funny
toms a dick [haha litterally] and well tht nasty thing bout georg ewww but
this is so gr8 wow i love this more and more evry day so liek yer up date soon
ly
100/100
xx
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! Lmao, I'm so glad you like it! <3
Date: 05/06/08 05:15 pm Title: Mice and Street Hockey
OMG! this has to be my favourtie chapter!! GUSTAV KISSED OLIVIA!
2 cute bro :)
and omg tom's pimp stick... i swear i think i was hyperventilating that was so funny :P
Author's Response: Lmao, lmao! Don't hyperventilate too much though! <3
Date: 05/05/08 06:30 pm Title: Mice and Street Hockey
"She smiled at him and casually rose from her chair to go to bed, but Gustav stopped her and pressed his lips to hers."
O.O GUSTI KISSED OLI, GUSTI KISSED OLI!!! XD
YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!
HAHA "PIMP SITCK" Ah Tom has humour lmao =P
HAHA Black Mouse Run fast HAHAHA
AH OLI, GETS FUNNIER EVERYTIME! XD
I REVIEWED SO I GET OLIVER!! XD
LOVE YOU!
Author's Response: YES! THEY FINALLY SMOOCHED! Lmao, yeah, I hope ppl aren't disappointed that it's not Bill and Olivia; they didn't really like the fact that they weren't together. Anyway, FIIIIINE. You can have Oli; I guessss. ps: STOP EATING MCELINNAS!
Date: 05/05/08 02:56 am Title: Mice and Street Hockey
okay, so, here it goes.
This is actually one of the first times i think i have commented your insane story.
seriously dude it is so random and so fuckin' hilarious, you consistantly reduce me to tears. where the fuck do you come up with some of this shit? tom flashin'? jeffree starn' gusti?
Fuck it.
i love it.
please continue.
ooohhh... it appears that the 'next' button has shown up.
*grabby handss*
give mee mahhh olllliiiii!!
(damn he's a babe!!
Author's Response: OMG. You totally scared the shit out of me. I thought you were going to trash it XD. But thank you SO MUCH; you have no idea how glad I am to hear that you love it! I felt kind of uneasy putting so many celeb references in it though, because I though people wouldn't get the jokes, but I'm so happy that you do; I didn't even think people would know who Jeffree Star was, let alone OLIVER SKYES! XD, but yeah. I heart Oli. He's one of my many husbands :)
Date: 05/05/08 01:32 am Title: Mice and Street Hockey
OMG I Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 05/05/08 12:49 am Title: Mice and Street Hockey
I like it a lot so far. Very funny. Please continue soon.
Author's Response: Oh, fer sure I'm updating soon! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 05/04/08 08:14 pm Title: Mice and Street Hockey
this chapter was great. i actually laughed out loud a few times. write more! sooon! i love this!
Author's Response: Lmao! Yes, 'lol-ing' is pretty much the main idea :)
Date: 05/04/08 08:04 pm Title: Mice and Street Hockey
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! <33 I hope to update around...tomorrow ish. Hopefully.
Date: 05/04/08 07:51 pm Title: Mice and Street Hockey
OMG! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)
Date: 05/04/08 01:50 pm Title: Water Balloons and...Bert McCrackens?
cute, as usual. fun fun fun!! :D
Author's Response: Lmao, thank you! <3