Date: 12/24/08 07:46 am Title: Chappie 1
A beautiful oneshot, but you seriously need a beta reader. There are some words in the wrong tense, some sentances in the wrong tense and and some that are misspelled. The basic outline is absolutely wonderful - I love the way it goes - but you just really need to tidy it up.
Author's Response: Thank you<3 Yes, I know, but I wrote this a long time ago, but I've gotten better over the months... But I am using a beta for my longer stories. Thank you<3
Date: 12/15/08 09:47 pm Title: Chappie 1
That's so wonderful! :D You have the greatest ideas! :D
Author's Response: Awwww thank you<3 Lol, i do what i can;D
Date: 11/23/08 08:30 am Title: Chappie 1
Aw, so extremely lovely!
I love when Tom acts like a big, protective, brother should. :D
Tom was so sweet, and Bill was a cute child. ^-^
I absolutely loved it!
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much<3 It means a lot to me! rnI really love it too, when Tom is being that kind of guy! And when Bill act like a little child in a candy store! YAY!rnrnThank you soooooo much for your extremly sweet review<3
Date: 10/05/08 04:09 am Title: Chappie 1
Awwwwwwwww!!!!
So cute!!!
I love this :)
The whole story made me melt :)
Author's Response: Awww thank you!!! I'm so happy that you liked it! *Scraps you back up to your body form again* Thank you so much, that's what makes my day brighter!!!
Date: 08/17/08 03:33 am Title: Chappie 1
I wish mi brother treated me like that...*jealous*
Author's Response: hehe I guess we all do:-D I wished my friends treated me better... i wished my family treatet me different and I wished my best friend were here... Well I guessed you liked it.. soooooo. Thank you sweetie:-D
Date: 06/09/08 03:19 pm Title: Chappie 1
aww that story was so cute!!!!*sobs*
Author's Response: Awwww thankie sweetie:-D I'm glad you liked it:-D
Date: 06/09/08 03:18 pm Title: Chappie 1
aww that story was so cute!!!!*sobs*
Author's Response: Awww thankie sweetie:-D I'm glad you liked it:-D
Date: 06/05/08 07:49 pm Title: Chappie 1
Aaaww, this was a cute story =D
Author's Response: Oh thankie sweetie:-D
Date: 05/30/08 06:12 am Title: Chappie 1
it was awsome... it was good
Author's Response: well thankie sweetheart:-D
Date: 05/17/08 07:23 pm Title: Chappie 1
OMG!!
You're such a good writer! ^^
Tom's so sweeet! =D
Author's Response: awwww thank you sweety<3rnI'm really happy for that:-D
Date: 04/10/08 05:35 pm Title: Chappie 1
i love your writing! great job!
Author's Response: AWWW aren't you just sweet:-D Thanks...rn*Blush*
Date: 04/07/08 04:04 pm Title: Chappie 1
aww tomi such a sweetie
Author's Response: Yeah hihi<3
Date: 04/07/08 01:41 pm Title: Chappie 1
oh gosh... the fluff!!! gaaahhh! *adds to favs*
WONDERFUL!
BEAUTIFUL!
INCREDIBLE!
BRILLIANT!
*gives you a medal*
Author's Response: Oh I smile my face of now:-D Im glad that you like it that much:-D And by the way thanks for adding it to faves :-D
Date: 04/07/08 01:30 pm Title: Chappie 1
that was adorable! well done ^-^
Author's Response: Thank you very much:-D
Date: 04/07/08 01:00 pm Title: Chappie 1
Aaaaw, it's very cute. I really love reading such stories. ;)
Author's Response: thanks :-D
Date: 04/07/08 12:52 pm Title: Chappie 1
Nuurh, hvor var den sød! (:
Der var et par småfejl her og der, og i starten var den meget stiv i det, men da jeg nåede længere ned i historien blev den bare fantastisk! Jeg håber virkelig at du bliver ved med at skrive, for du har talent! :D
Author's Response: Mange takker jeg er virkelig glad for at du kan lide den<3 rnJeg kan godt se hvad du mener... men jeg har også lige siddet og skrevet den på under 1 time og 30 minutter.... men jeg havde alle disse ting jeg ville have med og begyndte at skrive... Men tak fordi du syntes den er god <3 Og rigtig mange gange tak fordi du syntes jeg har talent;-D Jeg bliver skam ved med at skrive.. har en masse gode idéer i mit hovede <3 Takker<3 rn