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Reviewer: meinfreiheit89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 07:19 pm Title: But So Does Sex

*gasp* what happened to their pants?? Did some little gremlin get em?? Hahahaha

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/09 02:20 pm Title: But So Does Sex

loved it!!x btw, where are their pants?? :p lol

Reviewer: anders1972 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 03:19 pm Title: But So Does Sex

A quickie... just what I needed right now.
Nice! :) And Hot! And funny... LOL

Thanks!

Reviewer: Dreamy girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/08 07:25 pm Title: But So Does Sex

&... Where the hell is my mind ? --'

I loved it *_* So hot !

I think TWINS make it better, all the time ^^

I didn't know Ur stories before : i was TOTALLY WRONG ;)

Gr8 job, thanks ! Bye !

Reviewer: Wien Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/08 04:07 am Title: But So Does Sex

*fans self*
So hot. *Bows to Majestrix*

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/25/08 06:44 pm Title: But So Does Sex

That was hot!

I wonder where the pants are too!

Reviewer: DarkGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 05:23 am Title: But So Does Sex

But where are Bill's pants??? XD

Reviewer: Nightshade Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/08 06:49 am Title: But So Does Sex

I thought this was an excellent little PWP. Hot sex, very spontaneous. Great job, Sophia! :D

Reviewer: RosePhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:30 pm Title: But So Does Sex

LOL Bill is cute, half naked or not. I love his pose at the end, even after being fucked through what, three positions? Position change!sex is awesome and this was a good way of showing that. Love it and extremely hot.

Reviewer: strssna Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 11:44 am Title: But So Does Sex

Mmm-hmm, see I wasn´t the only one who got excited about the chairs-part in Vanity Fair :) This was luurve!

Reviewer: yaoisex Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 10:44 am Title: But So Does Sex

So good.

Reviewer: muse87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 10:35 am Title: But So Does Sex

CHAIRS. Now one of us needs to write about the frying pans...the twins are fucked up, aren't they? Let's not count the weird qualities.

HOT, just like I told you.

I don't think Tom ever kissed Bill's ass better. 'Course, he did fuck it better, so he can be forgiven.

Reviewer: MarieTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 10:25 am Title: But So Does Sex

HOT (L'

Reviewer: TH_MY_SOS Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 10:07 am Title: But So Does Sex

mmmm ^______^

This is pretty good, but I have to give it a seven. There is plenty of room for improvement. Though you did specify that this was a 'pwp', I think that you should have also specified that it was ooc. I can never see Bill and Tom behaving this way.

You're a good writer; that much I can tell. But the way you made Bill and Tom is only possible if it were a dream dreamt. That meaning, while you are dreaming it seems to make sense, but when you wake up, you contemplate whether you were on crack or not when you wrote it.

You didn't have any spelling errors either. That is also very pleasant to come across.

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 09:56 am Title: But So Does Sex

xD WONDERFULLLLLLLLLL!!!

Reviewer: sskyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 09:04 am Title: But So Does Sex

lol love the ending XD so hawt!!!

Reviewer: Rocky Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 07:57 am Title: But So Does Sex

basement stairs = kinky!!!


sizzling ^_~

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 07:50 am Title: But So Does Sex

Love it!

Reviewer: Maggie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 06:18 am Title: But So Does Sex

This was some powerful smut.
Wow

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 06:10 am Title: But So Does Sex

WOOT! Basement sex!!!! I looove this. Soo hott! Kisses do make everything better, but sex ... especially from the twins ... WOW!! OMG! LOVE THIS!

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