Date: 08/25/11 06:20 am Title: Torture
Oooo, nice twist of events that Bill in fact does reciprocate Tom's feelings. :)
I think you use the word "torture" too much, but other than that, I think there's a lot of emotion in this, and I liked reading it. Well done. :)
Date: 04/21/11 01:16 am Title: Torture
Boys are so stupid! haha. That said. I really liked this. It was short and sweet and evoked emotion. I felt bad for Tom, the little bit of smut was hot, then I felt bad for Bill and then mad at both of them for being so dumb. I liked it.
Date: 07/21/10 05:03 am Title: Torture
really good, really different. i liked it!
Date: 07/15/10 12:02 pm Title: Torture
I liked that it wasn't a one way torture... Crazy, I know...But it would have killed me if it was only Tom suffering...
Thank You!
Anders
Date: 07/06/10 02:15 pm Title: Torture
Gah I really loved it. I hate when they are both trying not to act on their feelings because they think the other doesn't reciprocate them but they really do. When I say hate I mean it in the best way possible like I kind of love it too. haha. Good work.
Date: 05/10/10 02:06 pm Title: Torture
i love how its written....but i was wondering if you would consider turning it into a story? because its very well written...adn its like there is a stpr to tell..i dunno it was just an idea =D
Date: 01/16/10 10:47 am Title: Torture
Awe. They both love each other. That's cute
Date: 04/07/09 01:49 pm Title: Torture
torture is to know that both of them are in love but they don't tell T_T *cries in a corner*
Date: 12/09/08 06:19 pm Title: Torture
This is a great one shot but it would make an even better story-since you write it so well.
Date: 07/24/07 10:34 pm Title: Torture
aw thats sweet i like it
Date: 07/22/07 03:47 pm Title: Torture
oh my gosh. wow.
i didn't realise that it actually had happened till i read the ending.
it made my heart skip a beat.
awesome.
Date: 05/01/07 12:41 am Title: Torture
I loved it. I can't wait until this site gets bigger!