Date: 11/03/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoy reading both first and third person narratives, although I think first can be more of a challenge to write in, something which you handled very well. The story itself was great, and I particularly liked the description of how Tom was feeling in the club. Overall, I really enjoyed it. :)
Date: 03/02/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so effing hot, i nearly jizzed in my pants just by reading it. Well done :D :D
Date: 04/23/09 04:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I remember this one!!!
It' was as much fun reading this now as it was reading it a year ago :P:P
Date: 03/28/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
great story. loved it
Date: 02/02/09 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was freaking sexy!!!
Date: 10/11/08 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
i reaaally liked it!! :p
Date: 09/05/08 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. that was hot. super super super hot. loved it.
Author's Response: lol thanks, glad you liked it ;)
Date: 07/14/08 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, dominant Bill is very hot.
I just adore the way you wrote this, I'm not sure I can express to you the extent of how much I liked it so I'll just end my review here.
Author's Response: Lol thanks XD I'm glad you liked it so much!!!
Date: 07/05/08 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1
twincest creeps me out often because i have a twin as well.
Author's Response: I appreciate how you feel and everyone is entitled to their own opinion. However if twincest creeps you out, why not avoid the twincest stories? No-one makes you read them XD
Date: 06/04/08 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was pretty good. xD
Author's Response: Thanks :D :D
Date: 05/15/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really really REALLY hot. Like...holy-crap-hot. Good job, seriously.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for your sweet words and I'm glad you found it hot!!! *does happy/crazy Bill dance*
Date: 05/01/08 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very hot. I love the idea of Tom being dominated (but not topped) by Bill. XD.
Author's Response: WOO! *grins* lol glad you like it!I love the idea of domineering Bill, dunno why (but like you said, not topping Tom :D!!) Thanks for the review <3
Date: 04/17/08 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Erotic and extremelly hot
Love it
Gave me goosebumps
Author's Response: WOOT! I gave someone goosebumps! Glad you loved it and thanks for the review :D
Date: 04/04/08 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
exquisite!
Author's Response: THANKS :D :D :D
Date: 04/04/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh wow, this was amazing. its really hot and erotic. gah, please write more(:
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Don't worry, I'll definitly be writing more in the future ;D
Date: 04/04/08 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I loveed this story
Has to be one of the best ones I've read so far.
The sex part was intense and I was hooked onto reading more.
First person was great. you done everything perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! *does hyperactive hummingbird Bill clapping*
Date: 04/04/08 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm actually very impressed! First person is hard to get right and you really pulled it off. Very nice, very hot.
Author's Response: yay thanks!!! I was so nervous about writing it in first person! I'm glad I managed to pull it off! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/04/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was all awesome!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/04/08 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
really good hope you write more like this one
Author's Response: Yay thanks for the review :D