Date: 04/05/08 09:04 pm Title: Rubbing Mirrors
great way to end it [bitchy of course, lol, but it's a good place to stop].
looking forward to more.
[can you REALLY see tom as a geisha?]
Author's Response: Yeah, a grumpy "I don't want to be here" sort of geisha, who resents having his dreads piled on his head, but that's half the fun, on the other hand I can see Tom kind of switching personalities in the bedroom going from cocky exterior to shy soft spoken interior
Date: 04/05/08 12:48 pm Title: Double Bill-ing
OMG! ^.^ Yay! I love this story! Keep it up, ja?
Author's Response: Of course
Date: 04/05/08 12:10 pm Title: Double Bill-ing
-giggles-
that was funny!
georg fell off his chair!
can't wait to see what the public will say..
and how they're going to deal with it.
keep writing! xx
Author's Response: Yes I'm quite excited to see as well. I'm guessing there will be a certain amount of "OMG TOM IZ TEH HAWT" from fan girls
Date: 04/05/08 10:40 am Title: Double Bill-ing
XD
poor g's. soooo lost.
Author's Response: Hehe, poor boys have no idea what's going on
Date: 04/05/08 10:20 am Title: Double Bill-ing
This was a really funny chapter. I'm having so much trouble pituring tom as bill. I know that theoretically they'd look exactly alike but still...
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, I can see why, I mean a Bill that behaves like a Tom... that's just scary
Date: 04/05/08 09:27 am Title: Double Bill-ing
Oh, I would have loved to have seen that! Lol, really funny. Poor Georg and Gustav!
One little thing... I find it helpful to put thoughts in italics or single speech marks as opposed to double... The sentence where Tom thinks “It takes my twin doing unmentionable things to me to change me,” confused me a little at first as I thought it was normal speech. It's just my personal opinion though.
Author's Response: It originally was, I lost my formatting when I uploaded it and forgot to put it back in places. Thanks for reminding me *head desk* and thanks I'm glad you enjoyed (even if poor Georg and Gustav nearly peed themselves at the sight of two Bills)
Date: 04/05/08 08:18 am Title: Double Bill-ing
thet was hilarious loved it write another chapter soon
Author's Response: Working on it ^_^
Date: 04/05/08 07:54 am Title: Double Bill-ing
haha, great chapter. wasn't quite expecting that reaction from the Gs, but hey, at least they didn't pee their pants. :P ;)
Wonder what's going to happen next.
update!
Author's Response: hehe, working on it (though it could be slower than the last few chapters as I'm working on a second story as well) ^_^
Date: 04/05/08 07:40 am Title: Double Bill-ing
Haha, awesome chapter. Are the twins gonna stay that way? I wanna see how everyone else reacts :3.
Author's Response: For now, yes, cause I can't dress tom as a hip-hop geisha... it'd just be wrong
Date: 04/05/08 06:47 am Title: Double Bill-ing
Haha, so funny XD
I wonder what David is gonna say though...
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll have to think up something...
Date: 04/05/08 05:11 am Title: Double Bill-ing
Aww it's GREAT! I love this plot!
Author's Response: Thanks *_^
Date: 04/05/08 04:27 am Title: Double Bill-ing
OMG XD
GREAT! JUST GREAT!!!
Author's Response: I try
Date: 04/04/08 07:30 pm Title: Mirror Games
OMG you deffintely don't need any constructive critism and if anyone does they deserve a punch in the face becuase that was amazing! I have never read a fic like this before its so unique and facinating. Can't wait to read more
Danke,
Andi
Author's Response: Thank you so much, the next chapter promises to be light and kind of funny, involving the rest of the band's response to Tom's new look
Date: 04/04/08 06:16 pm Title: Mirror Games
Oooooooh! I'm curious to see where you take this next! How will everyone else react to the twins being identical once again?
Author's Response: hehe, shocked Gustav, Georg, and Jost are amusing me far too much right now, next should be up soon
Date: 04/04/08 04:46 pm Title: Mirror Games
Indeed smutty *grins* I love it! This is so sexy and hot! Great work!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed
Date: 04/04/08 03:52 pm Title: Mirror Games
This was awesome! I usually don't like Bill being on top, but you made me enjoy it somehow xD. I repeated, I love the idea of the twins actually looking identical. That's hottttt.
Author's Response: Thanks, hon, I tried to keep Bill IC as much as possible, and thanks ^_^ nothing like a little doppleganger love
Date: 04/04/08 03:15 pm Title: Mirror Games
I wonder how Gustav and Georg are going to take this? What 'bout Jost? Haha, it'd be pretty funny to see their reactions.
Wonder if Tom has any particular fantasies... *smirk*
do update!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm plotting it. The twins are going to have to realize "oh shit, some of this is permanent..." which will be hilarious
Date: 04/04/08 03:13 pm Title: Mirror Games
Oh god... That was awesome girl! So very hot ^_^ I loved how it took the narcissistic (sp?) element of identical twins being together to a whole new level... Yum!
God, I love Bill topping ^_~
This is going to my faves, I'll definitely want to read it again! Hope you post more soon!
Author's Response: There shall be more, after all I have yet to put in geisha!Bill, and the world needs geisha bill, also possibly soviet uniforms
Date: 04/04/08 03:01 pm Title: Mirror Games
I can't think of a single thing to critique. Maybe my mind is just addled by how gloriously hot that was. Your imagery is brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you, my plan was to distract the readers with lust... so they don't notice my habit of refusing to end sentences *evil*
Date: 04/04/08 03:00 pm Title: Mirror Games
twice the black mane and tight clothes?very hott. not much I could say as for constructive critique.
Author's Response: Thanks, ^_^ you're sweet