Date: 04/25/08 05:47 pm Title: FISHES
oh... my... god!!!
on the edge of my seat!!!
Date: 04/25/08 05:32 pm Title: FISHES
OH NOES!!!!!! WAT HAPENED 2 VIQTORIA D: D: D:
Date: 04/17/08 07:29 pm Title: EVERYONE LOVES HER EXCEPT FOR THE MEANIES!!!
haha I LOVE This :
I wish bill could be mine but I cant have Bill because that would be gay and he poops from there.
genius!
Date: 04/08/08 07:11 am Title: boob drums
I WILL PROTECT HER FROM THE FISH--
EPIC. HOMG, IM DYING. lol!!!! Her eyes "sprakle" awesome typo.
Finally!!!! Gustav/Viq~!!! OTP!!
Chicken soup!!!!! HAHA!!!!1 Homg, srsly. This is so win. XDD.
Date: 04/04/08 10:42 pm Title: boob drums
I'm disappointed. I'm so glad you're writing het fic now, because I've really been craving Mary Sue lately, but you really need to try harder. I'm not sure how your other fics are so much more polished, and this one has so many grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors. Maybe try a little harder with the next chapter and have a few experienced betas look it over, like you did with Analyzed.
Otherwise, great work. Tom's internal dialog is fascinating. I love that his relationship with Bill is so tormented.
Author's Response:
OMG WHY U HAF TO B SO MEAN 2 ME!!!!!
I DID GET A BETA AN SHE SAID EVERYTHING WAS OK!!!!
VIQOTRIA IS NOT A MARY SUE!!!!!!!!!EVELNTYONE!!!!!! SHE IS SPESHUL AN UNIQUE AND SHE HAS FLAWS!!!!!!!!!!
IF U DONT LIKE IT THEN DONT READ KTHNXBYE
Date: 04/04/08 09:20 pm Title: boob drums
oh my *ROFL*
brilliant!
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sucks that you mods have to go through all of that :(
Gambatte!
Date: 04/04/08 08:59 pm Title: boob drums
SEXY RAWR BIATCH OMG THANK GOD GUSTAV DON'T HAVE TO PUT HIS THINGY WHERE GOERG POOPS NOW. GOOD YAY VIQTORIA OMG I LIKE LOVES HER WITH HER SQUISHY BOOBIES!! ;D
Date: 04/04/08 08:45 pm Title: boob drums
I knew Gustav couldn't resist her boob drums!! Now he has to survive Tom's bear hands! O_O
Date: 04/04/08 08:23 pm Title: boob drums
"my blood boils like chicken soup with extra carrots. " THAT IS SO MY NEW FUCKING FAVORITE SAYING!!! HAHAHAHA Ily XD
Date: 04/04/08 06:56 pm Title: boob drums
OMG RITE MOAR NAOW.
Date: 04/04/08 06:46 pm Title: boob drums
lmfao
omg i love you so much
the mistakes make it funnier
my fav part was with the fish and the boiling soup and extra carrots
Date: 04/04/08 06:45 pm Title: boob drums
Wow. This hurts my eyes. Seriously, if you honestly get stories that are this bad... Then I pity the mods. You have my permission to shoot me if I ever submit anything that is close to this bad.
Date: 04/04/08 06:43 pm Title: EVERYONE LOVES HER EXCEPT FOR THE MEANIES!!!
oh god, this is so hilarious
Date: 04/04/08 06:29 pm Title: boob drums
*hands over all intarwebz*
Date: 04/04/08 06:28 pm Title: boob drums
no
Author's Response: NO U!
Date: 04/03/08 10:46 pm Title: PHOOTO SHOOT
oh shit... lol XD
Date: 04/03/08 10:39 pm Title: EVERYONE LOVES HER EXCEPT FOR THE MEANIES!!!
Even though this is ironic, it's done so unbelievably well, that it's still painful to read ^^' haha...
Date: 04/02/08 12:08 pm Title: PHOOTO SHOOT
i hate this story it is aload of shit and doesnt even look like it has been beta'd. See thats what an nunice person would say. I say its ok but slightly mediochre
Author's Response: ju are a meanie an ju jus doesnt understad me cuz i am speshul and uniq