Date: 06/18/08 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
you make me crumble and fall apart and i don't know if it's for bill's hurt that hurts so much or the incredible lovelovelove between bill and tom that burns so bad.
either way, you rule.
Author's Response: Oh gosh sweetie, thank you so much. <3
Date: 06/18/08 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well, I was thinking of hiting you but I guess this chapter makes up for it. Tom is so sweet and I feel so bad for Simone and Jorg too. I'm sorry he frightened Bill but he didn't know. At least he cares. Update soon.
Author's Response: Lol well thank you. ;)
Date: 06/18/08 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
it made me heart breaking to see Bill like that *hug him*
and Tom really a good big brother :)
write more please
Author's Response: Thank you, I will. :)
Date: 06/18/08 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oooh, that was great! It's such a wonderful story, written with so much passion and emotion. I can totally understand why Bill is hanging on Tom so much. And I can also imagine why this can turn out in a relationship or something like that.
I give you one week to update again.. :P Really, don't let us wait so long anymore.
Author's Response: Lol I'll do my best to keep to that week. ;P Thank you.
Date: 06/18/08 10:42 am Title: Chapter 3
That was heartbreaking. *cries*
Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you.
Date: 06/18/08 09:12 am Title: Chapter 3
So not fair- dis made me shed tearz! U'r xceptional&bewilderin' in how vivdly convincin', profoundly shatterin' u xpress `it`, the dreadful aftermath of such a trauma! It's on such rare occasions that I even weep, dat I actually don't think I cry more than twice a year- I'm not dat emotional carin'-sharin' sentimental type, plus I bottle my mess up inside! I prefer optimistic pozitivism&2 smile cheerfully most of da time, but reality check, huh? don't worry, I'm fully aware dis b da natural, humane reaction of solidarity wit da victimz! I can't merely imagine such awful, overwhelmin' pain inflictd on a person! if only it never happend elsewhere otha than in fictitious stories!!!
Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you for the amazing review.
Date: 06/18/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 3
OOOOOH! You continued!!!
I am so glad! I remember reading the first chapter of this on LJ and it was one of my most traumatic twincestfic experiences ever. *cries a bit*
This is a such a sad but beautiful story. It shows your writing skills how you dont let it fall into complete melodrama. It's angst all right, but well-balanced.
I hope you will post the next chapter soon. I cant wait to read it!
Author's Response: Of course! Thank you very much. :)
Date: 06/18/08 07:46 am Title: Chapter 3
its been a long time
but still so good :D
Author's Response: Yes, sorry about that. Thank you. :)
Date: 06/18/08 07:41 am Title: Chapter 3
This story is beyond amazing. It literally makes me hurt for them. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Date: 06/18/08 07:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww, I'm so glad you updated this. It was a beautiful chapter, even if it was heartbreaking too! Poor Bill :-(
I adore the relationship between Tom and Bill in this - the emotions, everything. Really this is an amazing piece of work so far.
Update soon please. X
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Date: 06/18/08 05:25 am Title: Chapter 3
This story is really sad and heartbreaking, so full of emotions. You got me almost crying when I read what they had done to Bill. 4 guys, I can't begin to imagine what that must feel like. You really got me carried away with this story ;-)
" He wanted to hurt the men that had hurt his brother, wanted to kill them slowly, and rip off their dicks with his bare hands, but he couldn’t do a thing, except stand around and watch his little brother suffer."
That sounds pretty good to me, can I help then ;-)
Jorg was really stupid, bursting in like that, all though he had no idea what happen he could have been a bit calmer. I feel for him.
Don't wait to long to update, I want to know how it will go on ;-)
Author's Response: Lol you can mutilate them all you want. ;) Thank you so much, I'll try to update sooner.
Date: 06/18/08 04:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh god.
It's so beautiful and sad ç_ç
Beautiful chapter, i loved the last part **
...Well, everything i might say seems stupid compared to what you wrote T.T
So i'll just tell you that i love this story, that when Bill feels helpless i feel helpless too, the same for Tom's feeling, and for their mom's.
And i want to hug Bill so close T__T
I'll just let Tom do the job for this time xD
Poor little boy ç_ç
Author's Response: No, not stupid at all. D: Thank you so much! :) I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 06/18/08 03:57 am Title: Chapter 3
Finally, it's back! OMG, I just love this fic, it's so well written! Go on, please!
Author's Response: Haha yes. Sorry for the long wait. ;) Thank you.
Date: 06/06/08 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow this is so sad. It's a delicate subject to write about, but I think you've done brilliantly. Update soon please :-)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 05/18/08 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please update!
Author's Response: I'm doing my best. I'm just very busy right now. Thanks for being patient. :)
Date: 05/08/08 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is an amazingly intense story. its also very moving. i cant wait to read more. poor Bill. I feel awful for him. Your writing is beautiful. <3
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 05/03/08 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
that's just perfect.
please keep writing.
its so intense and sensitive.
splendid.
we are waiting more
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 04/17/08 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Anytime :) I'll be waiting then.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 04/14/08 05:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Babe when are you posting?? I'm sweating while waiting to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha sorry. I've been really busy lately, and haven't had a lot of time to really sit down and write. Hopefully it won't be too long. Thanks for being patient. <3
Date: 04/12/08 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Owww... this was so so sad D: sometimes stories like this make me wonder if anything like this will ever happen to him :( anyway, I hope Tom's costant presence will help him feel better soon... please post post post!
Author's Response: It makes me wonder too, but I hope that it never, ever does.