Date: 04/14/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
*failz to put words on it* I totally love your story! It's so beautiful and perfectly written! And I love the way you manage to make something good out of the bad things that happend to Bill. This is one of the best stories I've read on this site, and I think it deserves a LOT more attention than it's getting. A lot. Keep up the fucking good work!! :D
Author's Response: Haha oh wow! Thank you so very much. :D
Date: 04/13/09 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
I don't think this was too long. It was an important chapter, I can't belive andi noticed at the end, I mean the twins don't even know yet, I hope bill's brave enough to let his doc pass on the info to the police...
Author's Response: Oh good. :) Thank you.
Date: 04/13/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow... I'm feeling so melancholy but at the same time hopeful about this story... I love it, it's evocative and fascinating. *tracked* Oh, and I'm glad Andi can see what's going on. ;)
Author's Response: Me too. ;) Thank you very much.
Date: 04/12/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
i want morreeeeee i love the story. though its terribly sad for billa. :(
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Date: 04/12/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
*loves*
I've pimped this fic too, to all my online friends that haven't read it yet.
The one girl was crying tonight.
Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you so much, you're so sweet. :D
Date: 04/12/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank YOU for writing this. It's perfect, it hurts, but it's still so beautiful.
Author's Response: <3
Date: 04/12/09 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
i'm in love with this story :) i love long chapters :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. :)
Date: 04/12/09 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
my god, i love this! Genius, girl just pure genius!!!!! I LOVE IT! update lot's more soon!
Author's Response: lol thanks so much. ;D
Date: 04/12/09 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well, I'm DEFINITELY a fan of long chapters ;)
I've missed this, too. I wondered whether or not you'd get around to updating =] Great chapter. I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Oh good. ;) Thank you. <3
Date: 04/12/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow! so Andi is going to support them when they get to realize what they are feeling??? that's cute, and its awesome the way u narrate their feelings how they interact with the other. I loved how Simone found their family, it was a lovely scene! really! I love the way Tom takes care of his younger brother, how Bill starts feeling around his big bro. its just so lovely, and like I always say: everything happens for a reason, and this situation is giving really good results even if its bad.
Author's Response: ;) Thank you!
Date: 04/12/09 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow. i love how insightful andi is. its just perfect. the perspective and insight he has, how he can compare now to how it used to be and analyze the change. it wonderful to have an outside view to see how things are changing for the twins. another phenomenal chapter. thank you so much!!
Author's Response: No, thank you! Very, very much. :)
Date: 04/12/09 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was completly amazing, so sweet and caring but cryptic at the same time. I want to cry for Bill, if that ever happened I know Id be going over there and trying to find those evil and sick people that did that. I would spend life in jail for him, I hope you update soon, this relationship is starting to creat some questions and it would be nice to see the amazing outcome I know will come out of it. Well I hope,lolz, you never know with you, but please update soon hun. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: lol I know, I'm so terribly erratic with my updates but I'm glad you're sticking with me. Thank you very much. <3
Date: 04/12/09 09:47 am Title: Chapter 5
Apologise??!! girl, dat's xcessive modesty on ya part! I mean, c'mon! when said chapterz'r written so flawlessly&beautifully, nobody can possibly dislike length; contrary 2 dat, it adds more value&enjoyment! well worth da wait, xpectin' dis new update! so, so, so glad&xcitd 2 see u back, enchantin'&delightin' ya loyal, dotin' reader fanz wit ya stunnin' talent&fics!!! Yuppy&hooray!!!!:):):):)
I luv how u developd dis story&ya approach, smooth&slow pace,zoomin' in&highlightin' all detailz, shiftin' focus, framez blendin' 2getha, creatin' sumthang surreally fantastic&grippin' dat blurrd my vision&I felt transposd, watchin' it all unfold right in front of me, almost tangible! U got sum serious skill wit da story-tellin', probably praisd dat bout u bfore, but still feel compelld 2 mention it here, now, again! respect&rainbow garlandz...
Author's Response: You always leave such amazing reviews! lol Thank you so much honey. :) So much.
Date: 04/12/09 08:50 am Title: Chapter 5
I think you're doing an amazing job on this fic. I'll be honest - I find it ridiculous when people write the twins 'getting together' after one of them has been raped. A couple of weeks later and they'e banging each other's brains out - AS IF that would ever happen!
* rolls eyes *
But they way you are writing it here is so believable and sensitive. As though that terrible thing has broken down the final barrier between them. It's sexual, but it's not, if that makes sense! To me, they just need each other so completely now.
I think it is extrememly difficult to write a believable scenario in which the twins get together under these circumstances, but so far, you are managing it very well. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much. :) I really appreciate that you're honest with me and I completely understand what you mean. I hate it when things just jump forward too quickly. I do my best to not write as such. And yes, it does make sense. :)
Date: 04/12/09 07:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Very well done. Great story. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 04/12/09 06:55 am Title: Chapter 5
Where to even start?
Tom is trying so hard to be there for Bill, that I'm afraid he's going to fall part too eventually, if HE doesn't have anyone to fall back on. Bill, oh, my poor Bill. He's still so scared and it breaks me that it even includes Gordon but I can understand why he's scared.
The current of their unspoken feelings, god, I can feel it too, like that rumble of thunder in the distance which tells you there's a much bigger storm coming so you better prepare for it. Yes, that's exactly how I feel it.
My poor Tom, who is filled with so much anger, bitterness and regret, waging war with his other feelings of fierce protectiveness and love...always love, because it's always been there, unspoken but very much understood.
Both boys are going to break soon, but at least they will have each other to fall back on, to hold each other through the storm and nothing can tear them away from the other until it's over and they will come out victorious.
And I SO not mind the long chapters! I tend to write them myself and I prefer them long anyway. It would have broken the seamless flow with this one has, to be honest.
Thank you for writing this and I know this will be amazing and it's going into my faves even if it's not done.
Author's Response: He has Bill to fall back on. ;) And I love that comparison to their feelings, it's perfect. Thank you so much. <3
Date: 03/26/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Write more! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 03/15/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
I cannot even express how excited i was when I saw that this had been updated. This is my favorite story ever. You just write soo soo well, the depth of the emotion is so intense and beautifully written. This was another great chapter. Their relationship and bond is so deep and intense even just as brothers. I do sincerely hope you update again faster than before, but this was worth the wait. My favorite story at the moment. Keep up the great work, I am super excited to read more. Thanks for updating!!! =)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. :) I'm glad you like it.
Date: 03/15/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
please update soon! this story iz amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 03/12/09 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Please wake up muse!! I miss you ... lol, please update soon I love this, it's really well written, keep it up !! xx
Author's Response: He's awake, just lazy. lol Thank you very much. :)