Date: 06/03/09 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
You know, the chapter itself was just beautiful! So many conflicting emotions and yet, a constant one with both. Simply breathtaking!
However....I can't help but be stuck on the one scene, with Bill describing Tom's stubble and the days he hasn't shaved just so he wouldn't leave Bill's side and how he rubs his face against the stubbled cheek, liking the pricky feeling.
OMG, I LOVE THAT WHOLE SCENE! *melts*
Author's Response: Eee! Thank you for pointing out that scene, it's one of my favourites for this chapter. x3 And thank you again! for the wonderful review. <333
Date: 06/03/09 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ah, those poor boys.........they're so in love. =)
I do hope one of them realizes that he can always talk to his twin 'cause this one those times that that phrase 'you can tell me no matter what', really needs to be applied; especially the 'no matter what' part.
=)
Author's Response: That is very true, but it's hardly how things ever work out. lol Thank you very much. :)
Date: 06/03/09 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
I hope they kiss soon, this is sad how they are both suffering with these feelings and Bill is suffering from the rape, I hope they do it and make each other happy and heal Bill, update soon XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: :) Thank you. Things will progress soon. XoXo
Date: 06/03/09 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm half way of melting to a silly smiling pile of aww, but just had to drop by to tell you I love this. This was exactly what I needed today.
The way you describe their emotions, how incredibly sensual it all feels, and how much love is showing through everything they do - it's amazing, thank you so much for writing this.
This was most def not a filler chapter, it was a lovely, beautiful look to their hears and minds and bodies.
Now excuse me, I've got some melting to do.
Author's Response: *gives you a bucket to melt into* Thank you so much sweetie. <333
Date: 06/03/09 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awwwww! yay
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/03/09 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
:) Great chapter... waiting patiently for the next update. I love your characterization of Tom, btw. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 06/03/09 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow. the set up for this and what is eventually going to happen between the twins is just beautiful. i think this chapter is exquisite as both boys question and try to explain their feelings. your words flow like silk; i just adore your writing. thank you so much for an update--keep up the great work!! =)
Author's Response: o__o Wow, thank you. That is a huge compliment. <3
Date: 06/03/09 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Gosh. When they tripped and hit their heads together, MY head started to hurt xD
Great chapter :D They're so oblivious, and keep tip-toeing around each other. They'll crack soon enough ;)
Author's Response: lol ;) Thank you.
Date: 06/03/09 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is a fantastic story, but when are they going to stop dancing around each other?
Author's Response: Thank you. And pretty soon, perhaps. ;)
Date: 06/03/09 10:46 am Title: Chapter 7
I love it :D I hope you continue soon!! *srry for the boring review xD*
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: lol not boring at all. Thank you. :)
Date: 06/03/09 10:06 am Title: Chapter 7
oh gosh.... i luvs this chapter! update more, please!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 06/03/09 09:45 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, update :D FInally!! 8D well.... I can't say so much more than that I loved it and that you should update faster and....... that I lovelovelovelove it :D:D:D -big heart!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 06/03/09 06:54 am Title: Chapter 7
ooh, i was soo happy when i saw this update! I really love the tension between them.
Hope you'll update soon ;)
Author's Response: Oh good. :) Thank you.
Date: 06/03/09 06:21 am Title: Chapter 7
And so they have to finally get to a breaking point, lose their minds and kiss each other. Yeah, as if. Not so easy, right? Anyway, you keep this coming because this is good and I luvs it.
Author's Response: No, you'll see. ;) Thank you very much.
Date: 06/03/09 06:01 am Title: Chapter 7
YOu simply amaze me here! This was so fantastic, i really loved it! Please more of this, please. I'm begging you on bleeding knees!
Author's Response: *gives you bandages* Thank you. :)
Date: 06/02/09 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this!!!! I hope you continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you. Just updated. ;)
Date: 04/22/09 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
I ignored my math homework to read this. I'm so in love with this story you don't even understand. Please, I'm begging you, update soon.
Author's Response: Don't let me and my stories be a distraction! ;P Thank you very much.
Date: 04/21/09 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
oh that ending was too cute!! lol, loved it. another brilliant chapter. things just keep developing at a wonderful pace and you are able to keep up with the depth of the emotion. thanks for the fast update, i can't wait for more of my favorite story. =)
Author's Response: Thanks so much sweetie. :)
Date: 04/20/09 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ah.......they're so close to getting together but so far away.
I'm sort of suprised at the whole Gordon situation, gotta say I wasn't expecting that and David too. I mean, why is he pushing Bill back out? To be violated like that is something that some people never heal from; to expect someone to be alright after being brutally raped by 4 people and assaulted by 6, is extremely unrealistic.
Umm but great job! I'm waiting happily for the next chapter.
Author's Response: David doesn't know all of the details about what happened, he just knows that Bill was raped. Thank you. ;)
Date: 04/19/09 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
awww the cake!!!! tom could saythat too D:
it's lovely, so that's the cure huh? tom trust your instincts! XD n billa, u r making ur twin worried u know? gosh, love ur museee mine is fugitive, if u see her plz tell her to come back to me plz! D:
Author's Response: Tom's not quite that creative. ;) He'll think of other ways to heal his bb. If I see her I will definitely tell her to get her ass in gear. <3