Date: 05/08/10 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
This chapter was so cute. :3
That little uh, scene, was pretty sexy. >_>
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 05/08/10 03:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow, lots happening is right. The sex scene was of course very very hot. And a big break through for Bill. I thought Tom was very brave for doing the press conference. And I love how supportive and understanding Andreas is. I hope he gets a chance to let the twins know that he's ok with everything, so they can have that comfort. Thanks so much for the update, it was wonderful as usual!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review. :)
Date: 05/06/10 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 15
I have been doing a terrible job of reviewing your work, and the reason for this has been that I am enraptured by this story and could not tear myself away from hitting the "Next" button. So forgive me if this review is long, but I have been waiting for the story to come to a close for now so I can tell you how I feel.
As I originally said in my first review, I am moved by your portrayal of the rape itself and how it has affected Bill every day since. As the story has progressed however, you have done a brilliant job of showing clearly that there are days when Bill makes progress, and days when he falls backwards. Recovery in these kinds of stories always seems fake, always seems to quick and too full. In truth, recovery takes a very long time, and there are many steps backwards when one doesn't want to be backtracking. That you have shown this brings a realism to your story, something that makes the pain that Bill suffers almost touchable. I feel like I am falling into his skin when he relapses, when he has his memories and his utterly weak moments. It makes me care for the character in ways that I did not know I was going to.
As for Tom, I am really enjoying the trip you are taking me down the road of "twin-ness". I do not have a twin, so reading stories with the brothers in it is always an interesting experience. But with your story I feel like the interaction between the two is beautiful, and like Bill's recovery, filled with trials and tribulation. The way the two of them are dealing with their attraction to one another is glorious, I can feel my heart rising as their relationship grows.
I believe that my favourite scene so far (and I am not going to count your shared masturbation scene in this because that was FANTASTIC) would have to be Tom attacking the rapist in the police station. My image of Tom has always been that of a very strong and very capable man, something closer to the whole alpha male image than is usually portrayed in fanfiction. I am not a lover of material that is too "fluffy". And thought I understand it has it's place, I have a hard time imagining Tom as a super fluff with no hard side to him. To be able to see you give Tom a real push and show off what he is capable of in his anger was exciting, thrilling and downright empowering to read. I was cheering him on, and was very happy to have seen that side of him.
Awaiting your next chapter desperately.
Author's Response: I want to apologize for taking so long to respond to your review but to be honest I had no idea idea how to, I still don't. You've totally blown me away by saying all that, and it means so very much to me. I truly appreciate that you are enjoying my story so thoroughly. I'm glad I am able to portray everything realistically; it's something I constantly worry about. I don't know what else to say except for thank you. Thank you so, so much. :)
Date: 05/05/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 15
great chapter
thanks
cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 05/05/10 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 15
Please, update soon! *puppy eyes* :) I have a lot of important exams now, but your story helps me to cope with stress, so keep writing and make my exams' results better:D
Author's Response: Aw, lol, well I'll certainly try to keep the updates steady. :)
Date: 05/05/10 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 15
YAY! this chapter left me feeling happy :D -beams- poor tom having to deal with that press conference.
Author's Response: I'm glad! :)
Date: 05/05/10 11:34 am Title: Chapter 15
I hate interviewers.
Go on?
Author's Response: I'll try to keep the updates coming steadily. :)
Date: 05/05/10 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1
thanks~ nah, im 27 and still have add, blame the specks that float around when i try listen to the teacher... *giggles* im not that bad, i just need to eat before class. i added you on facebook, just in case i ever go on there. oh, and yesh, i may be a bit silly, but my stories are all the proof anyone needs for that. love ya sugar~
Author's Response: :) <333
Date: 05/05/10 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1
then youll always get them~ i adore this story though. you write it so very well and it gets stuck in my head in college so i end up thinking of all the possiblities and had to drop english comp 1... sok, i was failing anyway? hahaha.. you rock, and i await your updates, your majesty... *bows gracefully, stands up too fast and trips, landing on her ass with a blush*
Author's Response: Aww, hey now, don't let my stories distract you from school work! :P haha *picks you up* Silly.
Date: 05/05/10 04:34 am Title: Chapter 1
*hugs tight* well then we're even, considering how much your story means to me. if you ever need someone to talk to, ill always be here for you, and i kinda owe you so yeah. add me or something if you want~
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I truly appreciate that, and you don't owe me a thing. Your kind reviews are all I need.
Date: 05/05/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 15
i seriously cried, thats how much this touched me. i loved this and i love you for writing it. this story is my absolute favorite on this site and i cherish every moment the twins experience. i hope you update this more often, sugar.
Author's Response: Aw, honey, thank you so much. *hugshugshugs* That means so much to me.
Date: 05/05/10 02:02 am Title: Chapter 15
Three cheers for Andreas!
Author's Response: Here here!
Date: 05/05/10 01:11 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh girl, this chapter was beautiful! So gorgeously written. But you're making me nervous with the shifty eyes, there. What are you up to?
Author's Response: Thanks so much sweetie. :) I'm not up to much... >_>
Date: 05/05/10 12:54 am Title: Chapter 15
The moment when they waked up was so beautiful *____* i'm melting like a jelly
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 05/04/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is an amazing story. I am touched by the way you are writing the interaction between the twins, it's so very realistic. Even more so though, I am captivated by the way you wrote the rape and Bill's thoughts and emotions regarding it.
It is very difficult to read about rape if you have been a victim yourself, but your story is full of depth and makes me feel sore and incomplete when I read it. I know that sounds terrible but it's amazing, the feelings that you have evoked through your words. I applaud you. I will continue to read.
Author's Response: Wow, you don't know how much that means to me. I have worried from the very start of this story about not being realistic enough or portraying the rape wrongly. This story has literally sapped so much energy from me, so it means a great deal to me that you would say all that. Thank you very much. <333
Date: 05/04/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
awww That was such a good chapter ! I'm always super excited when I see a new chapter of this story !
The twins are so in love, it's beautiful to read.. and I adore Andreas in this fic, is acceptance is really the proof that he is the best friend the twins could wish for ! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad! Thank you so much. :)
Date: 05/04/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 15
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! WORTH THE WAIT :) XOXOXOXOXOOXOXXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX UPDATE SOON PLEASE
Author's Response: Thanks! XoXo
Date: 05/04/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
oh! i'm really glad andreas can accept the twins love XD
Author's Response: Someone has to >_>
Date: 05/04/10 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 15
Awww awesome!
I love it! I started reading your fic and I had to finish, please update soon its pretty cool!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Date: 05/04/10 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 15
*__*
Still, so, so, sooo in love with this fic.
Author's Response: I'm so glad. <333 Thank you!