Date: 09/13/09 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
God, your chapters are so intense! I can't breathe through them sometimes. The end of this one just about killed me, it was so heavy. But finally, that kiss. Wonderfully, perfectly written.
Author's Response: I hope they're not too intense! D: Thank you so much. <3
Date: 09/13/09 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
Dude. JHklhnishg. Dude. Could you have not told me you were working on this?! You could have SOOOO avoided having to draw Sadobitch. Srsly. This would have been a good bribe XD I loved it sooooo much. And may I say: IT IS ABOUT FUCKING TIME THEY KISSED, Jesus.
Author's Response: BAAH! Damn. idk it just kind of slipped my mind I guess. I wrote this chapter fairly fast. xD And I thought it was as well. I was actually going to have it happen next chapter but I couldn't wait anymore. Thanks bb! <3
Date: 09/13/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh wow.
Would you believe me if I tell you that I was thinking about this story JUST THIS MORNING BEFORE WORK?
Just, omg. Wow.
The boys just took my breath away and I AM SO GLAD THEY ARE TOGETHER AGAIN.
This was terrible, the uncertainly, the fear, the sudden mistrust that should never have been there! It was like a black mark in Bill's heart and shit, poor Tom.
It's so much his instinct and how could he possibly go against that, after feeling like he failed Bill utterly the FIRST time!
Ugh, but THIS, omg this, we needed this and so did they.
I can breathe easier now.
Author's Response: lol! Of course I'd believe you, silly. That's hilarious. Perhaps I was zoning in on that and it made me post quicker. ;) hehe thank you so much darling. <3
Date: 09/13/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow. That was so... just perfect. I felt every emotion throughout this and I was nearly crying myself.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 09/13/09 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 10
I loved it!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'll do my best.
Date: 09/13/09 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Finally
Author's Response: lol ;P
Date: 09/13/09 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
yay another chappie finally!! and oooohhh mmmmyyyy ggooosssssshhh!!! its amazingly fluffy!! please post another chappie soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Date: 09/13/09 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
OTL - See that? I am BOWING before you! Oh, my goodness. I think I love you because this was absolutely wonderful. I mean, the other day, I came back and reread this whole story and my head I was just like chanting *update*update*, so you can imagine my utter joy right now.
It's only slightly disconcerting that Simone is slightly aware of their growing dependency on one another but she seems to understand that they need each other and I'm happy the twins finally have each other and that they're back in each other's good graces.
This chapter was absolutely breathtaking, so, I am totally satisfied to wait patiently for the next, as I usually am, but I'll be hoping against hope that it won't be a very long wait. ^_^
Author's Response: Haha wow! I am humbled, thank you so much. <3
Date: 09/13/09 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
awwwww *grins* this was so cute. I think my heart melted.
like a lot. I was wondering how they'd get together, and such and this was perfect ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 09/13/09 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
I wonder what's going to happen. This story is so emotionally loaded. It's almost hard to bear sometimes.
Author's Response: Oh my. I'm certainly glad you're bearing it then. :) Thank you.
Date: 09/13/09 11:52 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh I've got goosebumps. That last scene was so emotional and beautiful and gah! Now I have to go back and read it again.
Author's Response: Eee! Hooray! Thank you. :)
Date: 09/13/09 10:44 am Title: Chapter 10
this was beautifully writen as always, the kiss at the end was perfect and every second I was waiting was worth it and more. Every second I read this I felt like I felt Bill's feelings, the trouble and confusion, and adding that little part of Simone and Gordon really helped fill me in on their perspective. It was one of the best chapters of this story I have to say, I cant wait for what you have planned next. I hope they dont just avoid the kiss, so please update as soon as you can. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked Simone and Gordon's perspective being added in there. I enjoyed writing it. XoXo
Date: 09/13/09 10:23 am Title: Chapter 10
Makin' me cry like a baby just to see them, for the most part, fix it in the end.
*sigh* That was worth the wait, so very much.
Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you.
Date: 09/13/09 10:00 am Title: Chapter 10
So pleased to see this fic updated!
This chapter is beautiful. The timing of their kiss was so perfect. As long as they're together, they'll get through this.
Fab chapter, thank you! x
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was timed well. Thank you. :)
Date: 09/13/09 09:53 am Title: Chapter 10
Ahhh, *sobs hysterically*
That was so painfully beautiful. Every emotion we think they're feeling was expressed perfectly. And I'm so happy that Bill didn't reject Tom, they need each other :3
Author's Response: Thank you sweetheart. :)
Date: 09/13/09 09:29 am Title: Chapter 10
i think i inhaled at the beginning and exhaled just now. so awesome... *tears*
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/30/09 11:32 am Title: Chapter 9
I LOVE THIS STORY; SEEING TOM IN THIS NEW LIGHT IS REFRESHING TO ME. AND THERE'S NO NEED TO HIDE, YOUR CREATIVE MINED WILL TAKE YOU WHERE IT WANTS TO GO, YOUR NOT AT FAULT AT ALL ^_^
Author's Response: omg caps. lol. Thank you very much. :)
Date: 08/17/09 02:35 am Title: Chapter 1
lol. my bad, i meant you've ever written
Author's Response: ;) Thank you. lol
Date: 08/15/09 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn. Thats very well written and really sad. I think it's the best I've ever written.
Author's Response: The best you've ever written? ;P - Thank you.
Date: 08/04/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaaaaaaaw.......Poor Tomi *watering eyes* I really hope Bill gets over it, and Tom as well.....though I'm such a horrible person for sayong this: torture them as much as you can! BUT PLEASE MAKE EVERYTHING OKAY IN THE END!!!!!!!!! Or it'll happen in my head and I'll hate you forever xD Lolz, but seriously :') I loved it!! And I do hope things get beeeettttteeeeer soon O.O 'specially with Tomi........ I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: They will get better. :) No worries. Thank you doll.