Date: 04/14/08 10:09 am Title: Like a rolling stone
It is not bad!
If only they would just accept each others feelings. But if they did that there would not be much of a story. Lol!
Please update when you can! :)
Author's Response: Hehe, no, the it would be over in like five chaps or something, boooooring I say xD
Date: 04/13/08 06:40 pm Title: Like a rolling stone
Great story.
The kiss in the last chapter didn't seem rushed I don't think =)
Date: 04/11/08 09:28 pm Title: Like a rolling stone
Wait... they cant just drop it like that can they? Tom had to have had some feelings cus he let Bill kiss him and then he did all that smiling afterwards.
Author's Response: Well, in this story, Tom is the kind of guy who's scared of his own feelings. Especially when he has feelings for Bill, cause then he has to be gay. He pushes the thoughts out of his head (just like Bill thought in the last chapter) and tells Bill they should just carry on like normal. And he doesn't really know what he's feeling, like Bill. Bill has never felt love before and he doesn't really know what he's feeling. He tells himself he just imagine things and tell Tom the same thing Tom told him. X) I know it's hard to understand what Tom thinks about everything, but since the story is told in Bill's POV, Bill can't really read Tom's mind XDrn
Date: 04/11/08 01:53 pm Title: Like a rolling stone
hmm... i like it.. but not as much as the first few.
you did a good job and all, but i was expecting a little more.
keep writing though, i do enjoy this fic a lot :)
Author's Response: I don't like this chapter either. The first ones were so much better. But I'll try to make it up to you in the next one ;) And I will keep on writing, no doubt xD
Date: 04/11/08 07:31 am Title: Like a rolling stone
it's not bad! its a really powerful passage because it shows Bill's inner struggle! Thank you, it is a really great chapter and I really enjoyed reading it... more when you can please? x
Author's Response: Awww, thank you :D I really like to write about everyones thought and so on. I guess my grandma is right about having the blood of psychology (?) xD Well, thanks for the review, next chapter will be up soon I hope :)
Date: 04/10/08 07:09 pm Title: Like a rolling stone
YAY! Cupcakes are sweet! lol. Actually, I think this chapter was pretty good! It could have been a bit longer, but I liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks :D I promise next chapter will be much longer xD
Date: 04/10/08 05:36 pm Title: Like a rolling stone
Dude, it was not bad! I liked it, really showed how good of a writer you are. Cause it's not easy to write Bill thoughts, that guy is wicked xD
*hugs*
P.S. Can mine be chocolate cupcake??
Author's Response: Thanks, it was a lot of thoughts in that chapter xD And of course, chocolate cupcakes for you :D
Date: 04/10/08 03:49 pm Title: Like a rolling stone
how could you say it was bad?
I liked it, really!
are they just saying that?
or maybe they just haven't realized it yet?
I can't wait to find out more!!
Author's Response: Thanks :D Well, you could say they can't really read they're own feelings XD You will probably understand later on, it's hard to tell without telling you the whole story xD And we don't want that, do we? X)
Date: 04/10/08 02:52 pm Title: Under the iron sea
aw, this was a great chapter :)
so cute!
good job :D
Date: 04/10/08 09:59 am Title: Under the iron sea
ooooh i really love it... more wjen you can please?
Author's Response: Thanks :D you will get more soon, hopefully tonight or tomorrow X)
Date: 04/10/08 04:38 am Title: Under the iron sea
Please Continue ! It's Really Good And Nothing's Wrong With A Bit Of Cheese Now And Then ;-)
Author's Response: Oh I will :D Thanks, and your right, cheese stuff is always good for you xD
Date: 04/09/08 11:20 pm Title: Under the iron sea
Wow! I'm loving this fic! It's... amazing! More? Hope soon =) *gives cookies to you to keep writing* lol Love ya!
Author's Response: Thank yooou! :D I will definitly continue! *munches on cookie*
Date: 04/09/08 04:04 pm Title: Under the iron sea
yay! I loved the chapter!
I'm so glad they're together! =D
tom is so sweet and cute when he blushes!
please, more!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Well, they're not quite together yet.. but definitly a big step forward. You will see in the next chapter ;)
Date: 04/09/08 03:54 pm Title: Smiles
oOo they kiiissed! *fan girl squeal*
Date: 04/09/08 03:52 pm Title: Under the iron sea
Whoa!! Ice Cream?? Is it cookies and cream flavored?? *drools*
This is great!!! I don't know why I love this Bill very much. He is afraid of the feelings he have but he can stand for himself, feeling that there is no one else that would doo that for him, that would protect him from the evil world! I just...*cries*
Update soon please!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, it's like BIG cookie-thingys in it with a lot of cream on top xD *gives you ice cream* And you pretty much captured Bill's personality in that description. That's exactly how I want him to be. I'm glad I made it xD Thanks for the review and everything :Drn
Date: 04/09/08 03:30 pm Title: Under the iron sea
Hard not to be in love with someone like him. His lips really ARE that kissable looking :}
Author's Response: Hehe, so true, so true! xD
Date: 04/07/08 05:42 pm Title: All u can eat
Bill is soo much fun!! Hell yeah, you make me wish I was in this school!!
Too bad I'm not xD
*hugs*
Date: 04/06/08 01:35 pm Title: Smiles
YAY! im so glad you posted another chapter :)
i really like this fic a lot.
good job!
xoxo---ReiReiKatlee
Date: 04/06/08 01:33 pm Title: All u can eat
Awesome chapter, Im glad Bill stood up for himself xD
Please update xD
Date: 04/06/08 01:01 pm Title: All u can eat
This story is great
I don't wanna say it, but there are very SMALL errors in your grammar. I don't even remember where, but maybe you can be more careful next time.
STILL, I REALLY wanna read more of this.
I'm so glad bill's sticking up for himself. =))
Author's Response: Thanks :D I will definitely look it over more carefully next time, and try not to have any errors. Thank you for telling me, always good to know XD So hang on and there will be more of this :D