Date: 07/04/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
...The love he felt for Tom was constant, steady and as old as time... - got, this must be so hurtful for them both
...He did love his brother, he loved him very much, just not in the way that Tom said he loved him but that wasn’t so bad, was it? ... - *dies*
...Could you ever forgive me?... - *finally inhales* god, that was intense! but i feel a bit relieved thats sorted out,a bit, i hope?????
...I don’t want you to see him anymore... - i guess not *sigh*
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
Date: 07/04/09 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
...he’d said he hadn’t done this much, not that he wasn’t good at it... - naughty, naughty bill
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...We need to talk... - yeah i think you should get it straight with tom..scary
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 07/03/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
hey now its time for bill to get jealous of someone Tom gets together with!
Author's Response: We'll see.
Date: 07/03/09 02:57 am Title: Chapter 9
im scared ._.
Author's Response: *hugs*
Date: 07/03/09 12:15 am Title: Chapter 9
Damn, girl. This was so intense! I wasn't expecting Tom to go that far. Great chapter!
Author's Response: ;) Thanks sweetie.
Date: 07/02/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really tried to stay neutral as I read your story over last hours but I just can’t feel sorry for Tom. I don’t know why so many Reviewers write ‘oh,poor Tom...’ and stuff like this because I got so angry at him in this story. For me it is like he mistakes possession and obsession with love since you don’t treat the person you love like he treats Bill. If he really would love his twin so much like he always claims; he would try to be a supportive, understanding old brother now that he knows that his brother doesn’t love him in an ‘unbrotherly’ way back and would accept Bills feelings for Bushido, just for the sake of his brother’s happiness. But no, he just feels sorry for himself and does stupid things. I mean I can really understand that he is disappointed and hurt but Bill is all this things too but he still tries to be there for Tom as a twin and this is real love. I just hope that Tom learned from the last encounter and that he begins to understand. Besides all this I’m so happy that I found this fic of you because the storyline is so clever and interesting. There isn’t just good or bad but a very complicated relationship between the twins. Your really caught me with this story and your writing; I couldn’t stop reading! You’re a great author who manages to write complicated and twisted emotions. I’ll waiting patiently for an update :)!
Author's Response: I really appreciate your honest feedback, and I'm so glad you understand this story because it seems that few do. So thank you for that, and thank you also for the kind words. :)
Date: 07/02/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad you updated! I love this story! And to answer your question, I think you're a great author! You learn from what works and doesn't work in your stories, and you improve with every new addition! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much. :)
Date: 07/02/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
Poor Tom. I feel so sorry for him and Bill and Bushido. But why did he have to go for the alcohol? Congratulations on getting featured!!!! I love this story!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 07/02/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
I can really see why you would have started crying when writing this. It's so sad. I hate seeing (reading?) the twins fight, fictional or not, it's just not right. I'm so glad you got your muse back for this chapter because it was.
If ratings were still here, I'd give you five stars in a heartbeat.
Author's Response: So much thanks to you. You really helped my muse along sweetie. :)
Date: 07/02/09 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
...He looked like a beat puppy. But Bill couldn’t talk to him. Tom would never let him... - stop it tomi! its killing poor bill. youre suppose to be the 'older' twin
...He had to talk to Bushido... - not a good idea *shakes head*
...No, it’s fine. I can come over... - youre kidding right? argh! difficult thing love is
...You’re a good man, Bill. But don’t make yourself suffer just to keep other people happy. It’s your life, not theirs... - i like this. it has a very deep meaning. i know bill's childish, young side is more prominent, but i love when people notice him as a man, who is capable of deciding his own fate
...There was no going back from where he’d brought this, and Bill just couldn’t turn away and drive home to his brother... - *faints again*
*P/S - hope u dont mind my silly reviews. cant help it really ^___^
Author's Response: I don't mind at all! I love the way you pick out certain sentences. Thank you. :)
Date: 07/02/09 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is really good! So much emotion! I really enjoy this story. From what I read of this whole story, you as a writer have grown. I really hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 07/02/09 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
...But as he stuffed it down into a place he could ignore, he felt the little green monster eat away at him a little bit more... - damn, everythings just complicated ggggrrrr
...He heard the shouts of the crowd behind him, becoming louder and angrier, and one solid silence that was louder than any scream he’d ever heard... - wow! u really wrote this hurtful part very realistic! i wouldnt know how to react if that ever happen in front of my eyes *sighs*
...Not everyone, and the people who truly care about you would learn to accept it... - yeah, sweet natalie, i totally agree.being the adult here (but keeping my fingers crossed that everything in this amazing fic, stays FICTION..wuwuwuwu)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/02/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
wow this is so amazing and intensely writen, wonderful :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 07/02/09 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
...Around these words Bill had written ‘Geh’ multiple times, some with designs that appeared to be sad or distressed... - owh i love this song! its very sad T__T
...Hate and envy rushed through his veins like hot fire, burning a hole in his belly and Bill wondered how long he could keep lying to his brother... - man, thats tough! suddenly i want tom to go find some girl
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*omg! cliffhanger! wheres the 'next' button?????????? *found it*
Author's Response: *puts a neon sign over the next button* :P
Date: 07/02/09 11:27 am Title: Chapter 9
...........='(
When I first started reading this chapter, I felt bad for Bill, Tom, and Bushido but now I'm like....like.....erg WHY?!
*sobs*
I know now, that Bill and Tom will most likey not be getting back together; I was really, REALLY holding out hope that they would.
But omg this monsterous thing that Tom turned into......that was scary. Bill probably wouldn't be able to get near him without cringing in fear, poor thing.
*sigh*
I really do wish that Bill, Tom, and Bushido could get together some kind of way and be happy.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 07/02/09 08:36 am Title: Chapter 9
oh mein gott, i love this chapter! it's so amazing, just like this story! now wonder it was featured.... and you have definatly improved and grown as an author.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 07/01/09 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
...and the only evidence that Tom had been there was his scent still lingering in the air, and the slight streak of dried blood on the wall... - *cringes* ouch T__T
...He did like Bushido; he wasn’t going to tell himself he didn’t, but he couldn’t tell Tom he did... - i feel like fainting *head swirls*
...When had his brother, the love of his life, fallen out of love with him?... - *fainted*
...In the far reaches of his mind, he could still feel the large, strong hands caressing his back, could feel rough stubble prickling his sensitive skin, could almost taste Bushido again... - o0h!! poor tom! no wait, poor bill! bushido??? *cant decide* damn...
Author's Response: :) <3
Date: 07/01/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
...Tom was beautiful when he slept... - first i was like aaaawwwwwwww
...even if he was drooling... - and then i laughed so hard!
...Bill knew it was twisted, knew that no one else would understand, but he understood, and that’s all that mattered when Tom was holding onto him like a lover instead of a brother... - *sigh* yeah that is a problem. i mean, as a reader, i really love all this "lovey-dovey" slashy twins but as a fan, i kinda never want them to have this sort of relationship in real life, you know? *confused*
...I understand, but your existence is reciprocation enough. It’s a gift... - mein Gott! i melted
...Quit acting like a jealous boyfriend, you’re my brother... - *more confused*
...Bill tasted like alcohol, stale bile, sugar, and someone else... - oh no0o00o0o0o0o T____T
Author's Response: Yes, I definitely hope it's not their real life. Thank you for the review. :)
Date: 06/30/09 03:08 am Title: Chapter 1
...but that he was tall, muscular, and had dark hair and skin. Oh, and she thought she saw a tattoo on his neck... - hehehe we all know who this is
...There was no way he could keep it, no matter how exquisite it was or how fabulous it looked on him... - owh, please do keep it! or u could give it to me =P
...because for an instant, a millisecond, he’d actually wanted Bushido to be telling the truth... - dumdumdum
...You’re an asshat, I hope you know... - haha, ass hat? priceless =P
...I’m falling asleep... - aaaaawwww *warm and fuzzy inside*
* i have been tracking this story for a while, wanting to read it, but i've just got the time, and its already featured!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you finally have the time to read it. :) Thank you!
Date: 06/28/09 03:54 am Title: Chapter 8
I've never read something with such passion. I'm glad to see that this story has so much serious emotion in it. It makes me think that this is all really happening, which isn't true. I love the plot line, even if I have no idea how this is going to end. :)
Author's Response: ...Wow. Gosh, Ericka, thank you so much. you have no idea how much that means to me. :) I hope you're patient enough to stick around till the end! lol