Date: 11/04/09 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
The conversation with Bill and Tom at the beginning is so heart breaking. Beautifully written, as usual :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 11/04/09 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh yeah! This chapter is sexy sexy! LOVE IT! I love how Bushido asks Bill to say his real name. So fetchin' yummy! You are a seriously amazing author!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Date: 11/01/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay! I love that last part with Bill bursting back into the room and kissing Bushido! Awesome! I also loved the part when he first arrives at Bushido's door and this line, "...overwhelming urge to burst into tears and bury his head into the crook of Bushido’s neck rushed through him like an ocean wave." So sweet!!! I love this story so much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Date: 11/01/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
That's right, Bill - do what makes you happy! Be with Bushido :)
Author's Response: Yes, indeed. ;)
Date: 11/01/09 08:59 am Title: Chapter 4
God, I love that makeout scene in the car. So sexy! I also love how Bill gets aroused after talking to Bushido over the phone and gets himself off, at the end saying "I want you." Oh!! I love it! So sweet!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/01/09 02:19 am Title: Chapter 3
"...There was no way he could shake his hand and not want to caress each line of every tattoo on his skin." That was easily my favorite line of the whole chapter. It breaks my heart that Bill has to continue to lie to Tom and sacrifice his own happiness for Tom's. Beautifully written :)
Author's Response: Thank you. It's also one of my favourite lines. :)
Date: 11/01/09 01:58 am Title: Chapter 2
Oi! Some awesome parts in this chapter. Where to start? Okay, I LOVED the sexy dream Bill had about Bushido. Yummy! I thought it was so cute that Bushido had been talking to his mom about Bill. Awww!! I can't forgot the kiss in the bathroom. So hot!! The whole chapter was awesome!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :)
Date: 11/01/09 01:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, so I decided I wanted to read this story again and this time review. I read this so long again and I have a terrible memory so I'm going back through. I think my favorite part of this chapter is when Tom says, “Oh, come on Bill, that had to be a joke. There’s no way he could seriously want you to suck him off.” I love that Bill gets offended and realizes that he wants Bushido to have been telling the truth. I absolutely love the idea of Bill and Bushido together so THANK YOU for writing this awesome story! Anyway, on to chapter two :)
Author's Response: Thank you! For reviewing and reading. :D
Date: 10/16/09 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
One of the reasons i really like this story is because Tom stays mad at him for a while. in other storys he's mad and then he just breaks down. this story he was mad juuuuuuuust a little longer! =]
but uh, could you update???
we neeeeeeeeeeeed updates!
Author's Response: I try to be as 'realistic' with the emotions as I can. :) Thank you. And I'm doing my best. I'm totally blocked right now. :(
Date: 10/16/09 10:23 am Title: Chapter 9
HEY!!! can you please update!!!!!
we've been waiting for some time!!
we need updates!!!!!!
Author's Response: I apologize for the delay in updates. I'm really blocked right now. :( I appreciate your patience.
Date: 09/25/09 11:08 am Title: Chapter 9
gods this story is wonderful and so so sad in equal measures.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 09/22/09 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
PLEASE update this soon!! *whimpers pathetically*
Author's Response: I'm sorry I'm totally blocked right now. :( My apologies.
Date: 09/12/09 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, please tell me you're updating soon. :(
Author's Response: I'm having absolutely horrid writer's block right now with this. My deepest apologies.
Date: 07/30/09 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 9
I guess it was one of the most intensive chapters you've written so far. It felt like strings snapped and there is huge gap between them. I feel so sorry for twins, since they both are in the trap. ((( My heart is breaking
Author's Response: There is definitely a gap. :( *hugs* Thanks for the review sweetie.
Date: 07/20/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
wow. what an excellent and powerful chapter. i would say your writing has improved, and it was exceptional to begin with. keep up the great work. your stories are my absolute favorites.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 07/19/09 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love your story XD PLZ update!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 07/05/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is so sad :(
I don't like Tom's character, he's obsessed.
I don't know why, but I have the feeling that Bill's not gonna stay with Bushido, he will be with Tom, because that is what always happens no matter what and what the people wants :S
Anyway, I think you're a great writer, you're doing a good job, congratulations for the featured :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 07/05/09 07:45 am Title: Chapter 9
please write more fast please please please please please please
Author's Response: I'll try! lol
Date: 07/05/09 07:31 am Title: Chapter 9
chapter 9 nearly made me cry im going to have to go read it agian the story did not really stick in my head i was to busy trying not to cry and reading to fast :(
Author's Response: <3
Date: 07/04/09 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
...Look forward 2 it babe... - and i hope bill deleted this
...Please, please love me back... - this is so heartbreaking! but tom youre drunk, dont hurt bill T___T
...And as Georg watched one of his dearest friends puking his guts out, he was becoming more and more certain it wasn’t just because of the alcohol poisoning... - thank heavens for the Gs
...No, there was definitely something wrong... - duh, ya think??????
*hmmmm, i fail to see the "next" button... T___T
*probably needs to go check out the songs heheee
Author's Response: <3