Date: 07/30/08 09:45 am Title: Chapter 5
Amazing.
Can't wait for the next one :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 07/29/08 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this story, so glad to see you updated. I love the Bill/Bushido pairing you've created. Please keep the chapters coming!
Author's Response: Will do! Thank you.
Date: 07/29/08 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
What a fabulous, long chapter! Bill's emotions are so raw, it's almost painful to read them, but you know, I can't drag my eyes away from the page. You are genius with conveying emotion. Just wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Date: 07/29/08 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
I would love to see those pictures:) Great chapter!
Author's Response: Ditto. ;) Thank you.
Date: 07/29/08 07:48 am Title: Chapter 5
so sad and so painful....
Author's Response: <3
Date: 07/29/08 06:45 am Title: Chapter 5
Gosh... what a conflict. I think Bill really needs to stop worrying about what will make Tom happy. It's kind of a catch 22 though because either way someone won't be happy.
:/
I can't wait to see how this plays out.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I hope it ends alright too.
Date: 07/29/08 05:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh god this putt tears in my eyes, so heartbreaking.
I'm feeling more sorry for Bill at the moment , the way he is torn between his love for his brother and the way he feels for Bushido.
I think that he should listen to what other people say, think about what makes you happy. Bill is only thinking of not to hurt his brother but he will anyway, it shows now. Tom shouldn't react that way but I know that his heart is broken and I do feel for him but he is only thinking of himself.
I wonder what Bushido thinks about this actually.
I so hope that this is going to end okey because I don't know how they are going to fix thing now.
God I want to know what will happen, can't wait ;-)
So update soon (A)
Author's Response: Well, you'll find out soon. ;) Thank you very much.
Date: 07/16/08 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god, i love this Fic! *__*
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 07/05/08 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really feel sorry for Tom. i hope he will love Bill enough to let him go.
I wonder actually how the relationship between the twins started? Because Bill didn't seem to be in love with Tom or he was at first but not anymore.
Just the way you discribe the realtionship between Bill and Bushido is just magical. All there feelings, the desire they feel for each other. I don't think Bill will be able to resist such strong emotions. puff, that was really heated by the way. XD
I'm looking forward to more of this.
So update as soon as you can :-p
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 07/03/08 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh yum. i want to hate you for making bill want bushido more than tom, but the billshido action is just too hot XD
Author's Response: Haha aww no hate please. :( Thank you. ;)
Date: 07/02/08 09:33 am Title: Chapter 4
Yes you can Bill.. just do it:) I'm loving this!
Author's Response: ;) Thank you.
Date: 07/01/08 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG u cant leave it like dat !!!!!! 'sigh' fine but u have 2 update soon k? luv ya
Author's Response: Yes I can. ;) ilu2 bb.
Date: 07/01/08 05:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh my goodness... I just read this from the beginning for the first time, and it is so freaking phenomenal. Your writing is so vivid. I seriously cannot get enough of this. I really hope to see another chapter soon... pretty please?
:DD
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Date: 06/30/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Soooo happy to see this updated. They should come more frequently (and by "they," I mean both the updates and Bill and Bushido).
Moar.
Author's Response: Lol xD They will be, I promise.rnrnThank you.
Date: 06/30/08 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
looks like it alwas gets fucked up before the happy ending, right?
gosh... i hope Tom can get over his selfishnes and let his brother be happy (...with Bushido...)
keep going please, i'm a bill/bushido fan =).
Author's Response: Yep, most of the time.rnrnThank you. :)
Date: 06/30/08 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
You are amazing. Seriously. This actually made my heart beat faster! You don't update often, but when you do, it is so damn good. Thank you.
Author's Response: *makes happy gurgle noises* Thank you. :)
Date: 06/30/08 11:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Yessss, update. And a very juicy chapter.
Author's Response: ;) Thank you.
Date: 06/18/08 08:23 am Title: Chapter 3
My pleasure, blieve me! I dfinitely meant it all, 2! u can count on it, cause I usually ain't dat keen or eager 2 review random stuff! I xclusively undertake such a task 2 praise somebody that truly impressd me, above&beyond, so much so dat I can't containin' myself! thanx a bunch 4 hearin' me out, appreciate ya havin' taken notice of my (abundantly xtensive) comment!;) I undastood what u were sayin'&I sympathize, hence all in due time, right? well, after all, good thangz do come 2 those who wait, so I'm down wit dat, 4 sure...
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. ;)
Date: 06/17/08 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow! u're amazing! 4 real! u've got some serious talent! no doubt, u're amongst my favourites! it's all just top quality material dat u produce! I just reread dis particular story, wit these 3 chapterz, I must admit I hav intensely enjoyd it! it resonates deep down within, but not in a mooshy or corny/tacky kinda way! dat troubld, anguishd tom was just...harrowin'! xquisite, tremendous scene! plus, I'm so xcitd bout ya approach of their relatioship, dat tom is so infatuated wit bill, he's so impossibly smitten, as opposd 2 alwayz havin' a promiscuous, out of control bill pressurin' poor, oblivious tom in2 thangz... u've got an extraordinary ability 2 write insightfully! it was fantastic&phenomenal&... sizzlin' hot! luv it! I'm feelin' it! if I may, I'd like 2 state a request! lol, but still pretty pls an update 4 da story! it's 2 passionate&captivatin' 2 leave it unfinishd&I'm gettin' anxious&curious 2 see how u continue wit ya train of thought! apologies if I come off as irritatin' or annoyin' wit these demandz, don't wanna give u grief! I'm just hookd! I admit! seriously, in da best of wayz, humour ya fanz! peace out! may da muses further inspire u, though I'm positive u'r set, u got plenty&respect 4 dat! keep it up!
Author's Response: Okay, the English teacher in me hates you, but I am very grateful and thankful for what you said. Thank you very much. I know I'm terrible at updating on a steady basis, but I'm glad you've stuck with with me so far. Hopefully there will be another update soon. :) Thank you, thank you.
Date: 06/05/08 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw, this is so sad! I just recently started getting into the whole Billshido thing, but i dont know if i can do this with the sad breaking apart thing thats going on between Tom and Bill. Its heartbreaking! You're ripping apart my one true pairing! T.T
Though, the Bushido/Bill is really hot in this. Ugh. I'm torn between the two.
Author's Response: I'm sorry. I'm glad you're coming into Billshido though, it's a great pairing. ;)