Date: 06/26/09 05:03 am Title: Chapter 8
I don’t even know what to say about this to be honest. I was thinking when I began to read it that it was gonna be Bill and Bushido for a bit then Bill would give up and go back to Tom, oh no, not at all. First you have Bill break it off with Bushido by sending the diamonds back then he goes to the party. Okay, that I get, he was invited but then Bushido puts it on again and they kiss in the bathroom? Didn’t see that coming.
Bill and Tom’s crazy, rough, wild, painful sex yeah totally didn’t see that coming either. I was so close to crying at that part because I wanted Bill to be happy but I wanted him with Tom. I was torn at that moment. Then I saw Tom was all sad too and I just wanted him to be happy but that would make Bill sad. It was so playing with my emotions.
I’ve never, ever read a Billshido before and this was most definitely a good choice for the first one I read. I must say, you deserve more reviews for this but I guess that little red ribbon is enough reward, hm? This story is absolutely mind blowing and I can’t get over how amazingly written this it. All of the emotions and tears in this just make me want to hug you, I don’t know why.
I can’t honestly get over this story. I promise you right now that I’m going to have dreams about this because it is 5am and I’m just now getting to bed. Might I add that I stayed up from like 12 – 5 just to read chapter 3 – 8. Yeah. ;)
I must say I’m looking forward to another update, whenever that comes and this was absolutely beautifully written.
You are the new owner of my longest review ever written. ;)
Is this enough motive for another chapter? Maybe for at least half of a chapter? If you need more motive, I can give it to you. ^_^
Author's Response: Lol! I'm glad I was able to surprise you with those little twists and I'm really glad you've enjoyed it so far. It means a lot to me. And yes, that little ribbon blows me away. I couldn't ask for more; it's so amazing. You've definitely given my muse a little spark of fire so hopefully he'll get to it. ;) Thanks again sweetie. <333
Date: 06/24/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohmygod, I can't get enough. I'm reading this story over and over again. O_o I simply love it!
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!
Date: 06/24/09 11:08 am Title: Chapter 8
This totally deserves to be features.
I spent 3 evenings reading the 8 chapters and this fic is just wonderfully written. I don't usually see tom and bill's relationship portrayed in this way. That bill didn't really love tom as a lover and still have sex with him. It's heartbreaking just reading the last half of the chapter.
Your writing made me wow and I'm waiting for new chapters from you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 06/23/09 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
awww i've read all your chapter
they are simply amazing i cried from chapter 6 and up
i quess it was to this sonq
circa survive juturna
but then again very well amazingly written
i love this story so far
im spechless
Author's Response: Thank you so very much.
Date: 06/23/09 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
!!! OMG! ASS!Tomi makes me sad.
Author's Response: :( yes.
Date: 06/23/09 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
awsomeeeee
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 06/21/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG! (Y) x
Author's Response: :) <3
Date: 06/21/09 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Gosh, that was intense. Got to continue reading that tomorrow.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/20/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
huh, at the end it was..idk..:/ but still good :D
Author's Response: I know... *sigh* Thank you. :)
Date: 06/20/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
my heart gets tighter at every new chapter ._.
Author's Response: <3
Date: 06/20/09 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
damn bill, you make me have heartache. poor tomi by the way. I even if bushido seems to be okay in that fanfic, i cant stand him anyway. ):
Author's Response: Bu's good guy. :P
Date: 06/20/09 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I remember i saw this story on FF.net a while ago, but then it only had one chapter and i really wanted to read more. Months after, when I saw it featured here, i hadnt read it in so long that only the title rang a bell, i had forgotten all about it, so I read the first chapter and it all came back to me. I forgot how much I wanted to read this, and im really exited to get to read the rest of your updates.
Later i guess in a few days when im done youll get a proper review of what i havent gotten to read yet lol
Cheers. :)
Author's Response: Oh yeah! I stopped posting it there because technically it's not allowed to post band fics... And I'm too lazy to update there as well as here and my LJ. lol I'm glad you were able to find it again! :) Thank you.
Date: 06/20/09 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
I don't know if it's the PMS or not, but gah, stupid tears. Gah.
can't wait for more (:
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Date: 05/20/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
I just discovered this and I find it amazing
Is the first story where the relationship with Bushido is over the twincest, that's a change x)
Please update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 05/20/09 05:59 am Title: Chapter 8
wow. powerful. so well done, you always write everything so well. the scene between the boys is just so huge. cathartic. interesting twist that bill never really wanted it. poor tomi. but hten he makes his request and no more poor tomi. i dont think its fair to ask that of bill at all, esp since he's just learned how much bill is willing to do to keep him happy. its taking advantage of him. and bill should know better, because tom isnt going to actually set out to hurt him. fabulous chapter, i can't wait for more, as always. loved it. keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much.
Date: 05/18/09 12:09 am Title: Chapter 8
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!
Why, god, why?
Really?
I totally thought when Bill was pondering on whether he loved Bushido or not, he'd realize he was just in lust with him but in love with Tom.
Oh, this was a good tearjerker chapter though and it made me shed a few.
I feel SO bad for Tom but in my mind, I can see the next chapter.....or at least how I'd make it over the next few chapters but I'm super excited to see where you'll go with this.
^_^
Author's Response: :) Thank you.
Date: 05/15/09 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG OMG!!.. well this is my first time that I leave you a review I think, so sorry for that..You take some time for an update, I was starting to worry!..
Oh that was so sad.. Bill is actually in love with Bushido.. how come?! .. geezz... I don't understand. Poor Tomi I feel sorry for him D: he is very much in love..
Bill is not going to stop seeing Bushido.. Hell no!.. so sad!
Well I guess I have to wait for another update..please don't take so long I like the story so much!!
Author's Response: I am a slow updater, my apologies. :) Thank you.
Date: 05/15/09 08:54 am Title: Chapter 8
oh dieu...
Author's Response: ??
Date: 05/15/09 05:31 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad as hell to see this updated!
I thought the chapter was good, but I couldn't believe Tom at the end. At first. He was so hurt that I couldn't believe that he would do that to Bill. But then it made sense that he would move to anger and to bargaining, so yeah, okay. Doesn't mean I don't want to smack him upside the head, though!
Author's Response: lol! Thank you. :)
Date: 05/15/09 05:00 am Title: Chapter 8
hav 1 more thang 2 add, been meanin' 2 enclose it alongside my usual comments linkd 2 da stories! it's concernin' dis fic tale&'In your bed of roses'- baby girl, ya insight in2 human psychology is absolutely extraordinary&fascinatin'! wit every single chapter I'm left nothang short of proffusely baffld at how somebody could possibly b so perceptive&complex bout such maddeningly intricate stuff! 2 my mind, it's all so multi-angld&facetd, dat I honestly blieve it would actually represent an accurate rendering of a reality if eitha of da 2 separate situations did, in fact, occur, though I don't wish these scenarios on B&T- no offense, but they're not quite entirely ideal, I mean a kinda abusive, 1-sided relationship wit a completely smitten, entranced, love-stricken, in denial Tom, or da otha basically grim rape theme, well da intro part. howeva, they both come across as da unquestionable, natural&logical unfolding of subsequent events- my sincere opinion. plus, they'r sooo incandescent, smolderin', irresistible... u're 2 good, 2 much 4 me, merely average reader, 2 handle!!! even if it ain't gonna take place face2face, I dfinitely tip my hat, take a bow&giddily cum up 2 u&ask 4 an autograph, squealin' my admiration 4 how much talent u've got&4 takin' da time&puttin' da effort in2 writin' on this fandom&keepin' folks like me majorly entertaind, transposd, dazzld! I know&admit, I'm such a girl, but... 4 da upteenth time, respect&lots of it!
Author's Response: Wow. Just... Wow, that is such a huge compliment; it means a lot to me that you think that. Thank you very much. :) And I'm so glad you understand the plot/events in this fic, as it seems most people don't. So thank you very, very much. :)