I can't WAIT for the next chapter! OMG!... YEAH!
Love it!

Author's Response: hihi *jumps around in joy* so glad you do sweety !!!

*sniffles/dies* That. Was. THE. Most. Cutest. thing i have ever read ever! GAH! i dont even have any words for you, my vocabulary isnt large enough for me to explain how AMAZING that was.

One thing is though, and i dont think i even deserve to critisize even if it is constructive, but watch when youre writing peoples names, you used Bill Tom, Bill Tom alot, you don't usually so it might just be me being retarded its just a pet peeve of mine XD but anyway,

The end was breathtaking btw, honestly there was a single tear rolling down my cheek when Bill pressed his fingers to his lips and then put them to Tom's *melts* like wow its weird how something so simple and short could be so meaningful. I cant WAIT for the next chapter :)
Danke,

Andi

Author's Response: andi *blushes* thank you ! and about the names I know, it's just hard writing a story about them where they can't have a dialog ;) I'll try to avoid it in the next chapter though!!! promise. I am so happy that you liked my ending cus I thought it was just a very Bill-thing to do :) *hugs n kisses*

Georg afraid of faeries?! I LOVE IT! ROFL You've signifigantly brightened my day! ^.^

Author's Response: haha I just thought it would be a nice touch considering everyone has been mocking him bout it ;) thank you, this review brightened mine !

I have never laughed so hard at any other story in my life! You have just managed to top JK Rowlings' Fred and George! The Fairy princess thing had me nearly in tears and Bill making fun of Georg and, everything! I'm still smiling! Great chapter, possibly the best I've ever read! Update soon. Love the romantic stuff going on between Tom and Bill too. It's so cute. Comedy stuff still made my day!

Author's Response: hekki *gapes at you* oh my god that has got to be one of the greatest compliments of all time *blushes crimson, worse then Georg* shit, you are too good to me sweety! my god you know how to make a girl smile :)

yayness! this is really good, i love the plot line and the fairytale of toms and billls is hillarious.... keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thank you so much, it's so nice when peple say they love the story in general :) *hugs you real tight*

zomg your story is incredible. And I highly disagree; Your story is so good I feel it's nearly impossible to think that you are just putting your own imagination into use. (Refering to the book Tom is reading)


And you take very well care of your grammar and the way your story progresses. I am so proud wipes tear


You don't understand how hard it is to come across good stories on here. I feel like crying sometimes from the stories that I come across It is an honor to have come across you. And I just checked out your page. I knew your username sounded familiar. I didn't know that it was the same lucy. I was hanging by the schrei box when you had some of us check out the icon on your profile page. You know, that Bill one with him having singing as his only skill. Well anyways, I'm getting off topic, that was a couple of weeks ago. I don't want to be one of those commenters who say, "Oh good job. More please." I'm NEVER like that. And given that you actually spend time working with your story is speechless.... just hugs You are one of those writers that I am realizing that makes TokioHotelfiction so awesome to hang out in It's utter torture I promise to come across a story that you think is going to be a five star winner when it's just as overrated as a Harry Potter movie (Lve the books - hate the movie. I apologize if you are one of those people ^-^)

I wish that you had more people that paid attention to the fact that you don't have a suitcase full of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. It makes me so happy. God I am such a dork No wonder my English professor loves me. I get excited over weird things like that. You know, but you really do read over what you write. I can tell

Moving on and back to your latest chapter. huggles I love it of course. I'm feeling this fluffy feeling starting to form within Tomi. Baby Bill is still his bumblebee self. You have captured his cute personality so well I feel like squeeing.


and even Georg and Gustav.... wow. This is the first in which I am coming across a coupling with Gustav/Georg. Georg the pixie I am now determined that Gogo is a true fairy nods head Oh God how I ache to send him a Tinkerbell card He'd think his fans were losing their minds.


Have I mentioned that I love this story?


Again, I am glad that you take time to read your reviews. In which case, I am just realizing, I am probably giving you a heart attack with mine. smiles sheepishly My bad. I tend to get carried away when I make comments


My favorite part in this chapter was when Tom was on stage with the guys and they were rehearsing. So sad I felt the slight pain Tom had when his brother couldn't join them It almost made me want Tom to say, "No Bill, no Tom. Later." Instead you had Tom stare at Bill the entire time. It was so cute. goes on and on for a few minutes , squees and drools.... the works


Take care Lucy and pleasant writing on your next chapter



~Ria

Author's Response: Ria…I can’t even begin to describe how you made me feel just now! I love (and I mean LOVE) positive reviews and constructive criticism, it’s the only way to improve. But this *stares at review* this was just breathtaking. You have a way of letting people know that you appreciate them without it getting to sugar-coated, if you know what I mean. And I have to admit, there has only been a handful of reviews I have received that can compare to this one. Knowing that people like my plot is what keeps me going. Knowing that people like my writing style is what makes me work harder, but being told so bluntly that you like my story, it just makes me tingle in the most wonderful of ways. And wow to the grammar comment cus I don’t have a beta and didn’t think it was working out for a second, but I guess I’m doing ok then ;) And just to actually respond to your review and not just ramble about: I think the HP movies are highly overrated!!! Thank you so much for the comment on Bill *blushes*. I would so love to see Georg’s face if you sent him a Tinkerbell card :p And yes Ria, I can honestly say that your review gave me a heart attack! But in a good way cus you made it flutter :) thank you so much for being one of the most dedicated readers to this story and I am so glad you take your time to review each chapter. Love from Lucyrn

next please! I'm dyin to read more ^_^ this is SO one of my favorites

Author's Response: thank you so much girl :) made me smile

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA XD
Your story is a murder! I am killed by laughter! ^_____________________^
oops i am late for my serial...

it was amazing, oh Firelucy!

Author's Response: oh no *giggles* sorry girl didn't mean to kill you :) thank you so much *hugs you*

Thank you so much for writing this. I had a really bad day, and when I saw you updated, I couldn't stop smiling idiotically. Thank you, again, for this story, it's really awesome! *gives you chocolate cake*

Author's Response: *munches chocolate cake* aw darling that was so sweet of you to say it really made me smile :) thank you for this

This is awesome and funny all at the same time!!

Author's Response: thaknsies :)