Date: 04/18/08 01:51 am Title: Saturday
squeals
Bill had the likes for him the WHOLE time?
'Tis so freaken cute. Billy is like a fuzzy bunny that I feel like glomping. I didn't expect for you to have turn your story into such a corner. I thought that Bill was being Bill. I didn't expect for him to like his brother like that the whole time![]()
I like when I can't predict a story
You caught me by surprise there. I want Bill to talk dammit
It's making me frustrated. I can't wait till that bet is over with ![]()
This was a brilliant fuzz of a chap. And have I mentioned how awful I feel for having such a delayed review? 'cause I really am sorry ![]()
awwww
notices that your next chapter is your last chapter![]()
I guess I'll see you in the last chapter? ![]()
~Ria ![]()
Author's Response: haha can imagine bill just being bill and still being so seductive and flirting ;p it's just in his persona I guess ! and sweety about the delayed reviews, you know what they say: when waiting for something good, one can never wait long enough :) love you for writing all this stuff sweety !
Date: 04/18/08 01:39 am Title: Friday
Omg...... so I was thinking....
bats eyelashes![]()
Could I be your beta? You mentioned that you didn't use one and I noticed a few grammatical mistakes in the previous chapter.
Not that it was too noticeable or anything, but I have a very keen eye for something not quite in its place. So yeah, if you don't want me to then that's totally cool. But really, I think it'd be hella hot awesome. But it's alright if you don't want me to. I mean, you probably found yourself one anyway?
I love this chapter. Totally a crack up. I canNOT believe Georg's poor dream. What in the heck are the fairy's doing in his dreams? ![]()
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Attacking him with their wands?
Seriously ![]()
*squeals loudly* oh God how I want Tom to just flip them over and start making out hard core on the spot
Hey, I may hate mindless pwp's but zomg this would be perfect for some imaginery sex.
drools![]()
Again, I've had sooo much work this passed few weeks
But your story along with Hanzy's have been on my mind like no other ![]()
okay, can't exactly stray on a chapter for too long. I'm so sleep but I'm determined to finish commenting before I call it a nighter ![]()
later
~Ria ![]()
Author's Response: oh my, I would love to have you as my beta, but I really don't know how that works and anyway ;) I mostly write pwp's :p I also have a problem with being way to unpatient when it comes to updating my stories, totally stupid I know, but I have a reputation of being a quick updater. you really don't like pwp's though...wow, that's like 80% of my stories *grinns* thanks again for an amazing review ria and mail me bout the beta thing though, cus maybe I'll write another not pwp'ish story like this one and then I'll want to have a beta for sure!!! firelucy@gmail.com love and hugs
Date: 04/18/08 01:30 am Title: Thursday
You can't believe how excited I got when I noticed that you had updated. I was all like *squeal*. I went to sleep so late last night. I was all day under three hours of sleep. So the MOMENT I got home I threw myself on the floor and passed out for five hours. It feels nice. So yes, I come to check out my email when I get the message "Body language by firelucy, one of your favorite stories at Tokio Hotel Fiction, has been updated." It's so nice seeing that
I do apologize for taking forever to comment ![]()
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I've honestly been supremely busy like no other and my schedule is tormenting me, I had a friend literally kidnap me for the night to help her with her Government paper, etc.... and right now I ache in fifty different kinds of ways.
Okay
tries to not get off track, especially because she's a chapter behind and doesn't want you to be dissapointed![]()
Georg being scared of a dream is a WIN-WIN for the chapter. omg how funny ![]()
Off to the next chapter because I am so not patient ![]()
Much L
ve
and btw, sorry for the torturously delayed review
Hope you didn't think that I forgot about you ![]()
~Ria ![]()
Author's Response: aw ria you make me blush so badly !!! you sound like a pretty busy girl my friend ;p I feel honored to be one of the people that pulls you back into the wonderful world of fanfiction ! and I just have to say that your reviews are some of the best I get because they just mix constructive critisism and praise so well, and a whole lot of humor as well ;) thank you for being who you are sweety !!!
Date: 04/17/08 10:48 pm Title: Sunday
thet was one of the funniest stories i have read on here loved it
Author's Response: thanksies doll, made me smile just there :)
Date: 04/17/08 05:12 pm Title: Sunday
I loved it! So beautiful and funny! Thank you so much!
Author's Response: aw and thank you love for reviewing this !
Date: 04/17/08 11:56 am Title: Sunday
so sweet!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 04/17/08 10:13 am Title: Sunday
LUCY!!!!
omg
I have not had the opportunity to read this before...but now omg
I LOVE IT
its the perfect final chapter
everything is so amazing!!
the G's LOL...what can I say? too good too be true unfortunateley ;)
and the twins...my god...the sex was yeah...unbelievable. and the very end with the Bills first words being "i Live you too" made my ehart melt
this fic has been perfection all the way through!
Author's Response: Em you make my heart flutter, gosh I'm blushing so bad right now :) you have been so good to me and reviewed this story all along and I just have to say THANK YOU cus it really means a lot to me !!! hugs and kisses and I hope you'll like some of the next stories I write as well :)
Date: 04/17/08 07:35 am Title: Sunday
OMG!!!
that was such a perfect ending!
*huugs*
Author's Response: thank you so much, and for following this story from the beggining too :)
Date: 04/17/08 03:35 am Title: Sunday
Aww aww awww!!!
I really liked this fic. Everything about it was so awesome.
And the end was so sweet!
Author's Response: thank you so much, I'm so glad it pleased you !
Date: 04/16/08 11:46 pm Title: Sunday
great story!!
when i read
Right in front of your eyes, all along.
I thought gusti meant him and georg, but it's even sweeter that he noticed Bill's feelings toward tom and made them get together like this so he'd notice them too AND finally respond to them in a way he didn't jet^^
Oh I'd so buy the book if you'd really write one called body language xD
thanks for A great story!
Author's Response: haha I just had to make Gustav the wicked little minxen ;) thank you so much for reviewing this it really does mean the world to me !!!
Date: 04/16/08 11:43 pm Title: Saturday
aww so cute that Georg looks for comfort in Gusti:)
Awww bill was crying:(
,but tomi made him better:)
and he finally found out that bill was indeed sending signals^^
Author's Response: man you've reviewed like every chapter, thank you so much, that means a lot to me !!!
Date: 04/16/08 11:40 pm Title: Friday
XD G the fairy is afraid of fairies and sleeps with Gustav his prince he >.< whahahahahahah Lmfao!
Author's Response: oh my god that sounds so goofy when you put it like that haha :D thank you love
Date: 04/16/08 11:37 pm Title: Thursday
oh too bad it's not real xD
And you did a great job in writing it like its out of a real book!
hmmm Bill's sending tomi signals eh
?
Author's Response: thank you, and yes Bill is deffinitivly sending signals al right ;)
Date: 04/16/08 11:34 pm Title: Wednesday
whahaahah Georg the Fairy and Gustav were flirting eh^^
Bill must have been happy with that intervieuwXD
wonders if i should read that book...
Author's Response: haha you couldn't actually read the book considering it's only a work of my imagination ;p thanks again
Date: 04/16/08 11:31 pm Title: Tuesday
whhhaha that's one hell of a sentance to just say 'Yes' XD
and tom's story again whahahaahah
fairy princess^^
Author's Response: only Bill could be able to pull that off I guess ;p thanks
Date: 04/16/08 11:28 pm Title: Monday
whahhaha I love tomi's made up stories>.<
Lmao!
Author's Response: thanksies :)
Date: 04/16/08 11:27 pm Title: Making off the bet
>.< got you made me laugh so much^^
Tom reading a BOOK and Bill keeping SILENCE o_0 a challenge indeed^^
Author's Response: haha yep, maybe I should have put the 'out of character' warning too ;)
Date: 04/16/08 11:07 pm Title: Sunday
Nawww that was sweet :)
I really liked the story. It made me smile all along.
Author's Response: thank you, love your username by the way ;)
Date: 04/16/08 09:33 pm Title: Sunday
Thank you :)
Author's Response: you too love :)
Date: 04/16/08 05:06 am Title: Sunday
*SCREAMING FLAILING LOVE*
Author's Response: haha you go girl ;p thanks
