Date: 09/25/12 08:27 pm Title: Sunday
great story, so sweet and fluffy c:
Date: 09/16/12 06:33 am Title: Sunday
awww.... that was so sweet. and the sex was so hot!! hooot!
okay.. off to bed I'm such a zombie!!!
Date: 09/16/12 06:19 am Title: Saturday
cool. and sweet. thank you.
Date: 09/16/12 06:10 am Title: Friday
aww.. that was cute and the fact that george is phobic of fairies is funny because perhaps he wouldn't get so mad if they used a different word for homosexual.
but sweet, very sweet and I can't wait until tom breaks down and questions his brother. I wonder what bill will say? Or will he have to say anything at all, simply kiss him senseless?
*can't wait*
Date: 09/16/12 05:59 am Title: Thursday
well I think the book is genious. and i'm really liking this story.
... and why the hell am I still up at 6am reading yaoi TH fiction? I've been up all night I should go to bed, but noooooo because I must finish this and go dream naughty twincest dreams.
Date: 09/16/12 05:50 am Title: Wednesday
tom you're so much in denial it's not funny. read between the lines!!!!
*and please tell my cat to stop nosing the computer screen trying to chase the cursor*
Date: 09/16/12 05:41 am Title: Tuesday
aww this is getting sweet. wait till he figures out he loooooovvvveeessss his brother like a lover. then...
hey tom go fight for your man already!!
Date: 09/16/12 05:31 am Title: Monday
only gay for you tom ... only gay for you.
though it was really funny the innuendo laden title track to getting the ring off... absolutely hilarious.
Date: 09/16/12 05:22 am Title: Making off the bet
interesting start
Date: 07/01/12 07:03 pm Title: Sunday
This story is freaking awesome IMO. I've read it before, once a few years ago, and I remember it very well. It's a really unique and cool plot idea and a great way to bring about a twincest relationship. I'm really happy I read thus again, I love it. And your humorous use of the G's characters also, is great, really funny. You wrote Bill very well I think, cinsidwring he couldn't talk for practically the whole story. I think it's because you focus so much on body language --quite appropriate for your title, but also a great way to really show the twins love and understanding and unique relationship. I just love this story. Thanks for writing it, well done. :)
Date: 06/22/12 10:37 pm Title: Sunday
i loved this story. it was so adorable. I loved tom's little fairytale. lmao. you did a really good job with this.
Date: 06/20/12 01:20 am Title: Sunday
I shall first give my criticisms so that you remember my compliments more XD Okay, so the grammar in this definitely could use some work. I know it's a really old fic, and I know your work has improved grammatically (I've seen some of your more recent stuff), but I suggest having a beta reader look at this and correct it. Sometimes you've misused a comma, when it should have been a semi-colon, and sometimes you've got sentence fragments. But most of the time, it's the wrong form of words being used. Like "fitted," from the second to last paragraph, should be "fit." As in "They fit together so well." Fit is a weird word, in that the present tense and the past tense are both the same word. Sorta how "fish" is both the plural and the singular form of the word ^-^ Now, as to the story: THANK YOU!! I take movement for actors as a course at school (theater school), and one of the things I've noticed about Bill and Tom is that their body language is much more sexually oriented than that of normal siblings. Of course, that COULD be explained by saying that whenever I see them, they're in front of a camera, but at the same time, if they were directed mostly at the fans, Tom's eyes wouldn't be half-way boring into Bill's head when Bill was staring seductively at the camera XD Also, a lot of the stuff you said when you were writing it as the book was true. Actually, I wouldn't have gotten as interested in twincest if it wasn't true XD I mean, the number of times Bill has danced provocatively against Tom... XD Anyway!! Amazing job on this, Lucy-san =)
Date: 06/17/12 11:25 am Title: Sunday
well I must say how refreshing this is, I came back from a few years hiatus to look for one of my fav author's fics and Lucy, you kicked some fucking ass with this Fic, I loved it too damn much! *hugs and drools over it*
Date: 04/29/12 09:13 pm Title: Sunday
Awww very great story! xD although the relationship between Gs was kinda strange for me. And I love Bill's first words after a week of silence (x
Date: 02/17/12 09:35 pm Title: Sunday
awww...cute. i normally hate twincest but this was done so tastefully i couldn't help but like it, it was so cute. and it motivated me to find out more about sign language! xx
Date: 11/01/11 01:22 pm Title: Sunday
Oh, my! I love this story! It's so super cute and it makes me feel so happy. :)
Date: 10/31/11 12:52 pm Title: Sunday
oh god!!!
i loveeee youuuuuu
i freaking love youuu :33333
i just had to read it again :P
oh, and btw did you read that book too?
if so, can you give me the full title and author please?
oh and please make mooooore and more and more and more!
i'll be looking forward to it!! :))))
Date: 10/17/11 03:12 pm Title: Sunday
Wow. I had quite a few laughs with this one! I love plotting Gustav! And hahahaha, fairy Georg! That made me laugh each time. You have amazing sense of humour. ^^
Date: 09/30/11 02:26 pm Title: Sunday
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAmazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzing, Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Story :D
Date: 09/08/11 02:25 pm Title: Sunday
i absolutely loved this story! question. why is georg afraid of fairies? not that i'm complaining, it was fucking hilarious. i'm just a little curious as to why. i thought the whole story was just so sweet. ya know? i can't thank you enough for writing this. it really made me smile. :)