Date: 04/28/08 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nice twist.
"a contradiction, a paradox."
XD, laughed at the usage of your name. XD.
Author's Response: I LAFSES TOO
Date: 04/12/08 04:23 am Title: Chapter 2
omg! =0
i loved andreas' reaction =P
i might not be the biggest cest-fan, but andreas rox! xD
i can't believe jorg though! =0 u'd think he's so what ever in his power to make sure it doesn't get out and bring shame over him, rather than spreading the news himself... ^o) he's one weird sob isn't he? =P
Date: 03/30/08 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
my first thought was 'oh fuck no!' hoping that somehow Jorg could hear me. No all I can think is 'I can't wait until this updates!!!!!'
I love it. Simones sudden outburst had me in stiches too. It was very funny. Awesome chapter
Date: 03/30/08 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
my first thought was 'oh fuck no!' hoping that somehow Jorg could hear me. No all I can think is 'I can't wait until this updates!!!!!'
I love it. Simones sudden outburst had me in stiches too. It was very funny. Awesome chapter
Date: 03/30/08 09:23 am Title: Chapter 2
ooooo no!!! haha Andreas!!
update sooon!!
xoxox
Date: 03/29/08 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
DX i demand to have an update nau!
Date: 03/29/08 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
That bastard. He's gonna fuck up everything!! And is gonna win money too!
Asshole.
I feel sorry for the twins...at least they got their family support (or do they??)
*hugs*
Date: 03/29/08 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
haha Andreas is such a perv!
Joff is horrible!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Andreas might be, but so are we for writing it xD
Date: 03/29/08 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg!Update sooooooooon
I wanna know what'll happen...
Date: 03/29/08 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg ! so much to say about this chapter!! :O
Gordon called Jorg! :O I knew that meant trouble. Jorg is always trouble.
Haha! Simone cracked me up at the end of that scene. I love how everyone is just like blurting it out at random!
Lmao at Andreas! He's a twincester! XD I laughed out loud reading that part. Lucky bastard got to see some hot twin action.
I could kick Jorg's ass! Okay, his reaction is somewhat understandable, but c'mon! But Gordon rocked that scene *nods* And the end!! HE CALLED THE PRESS! *panic* I'm gonna kill him.
Overall review: Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: :D thank you so much!rnI was panicking and then your review calmed my nervesrnI was gonna write the entire fight but I was to tired lol!rnrnI keep wanting to write jorg as a nice guy but I never happens hahaharnrnJorgs a cock end offrn(:rnThanks for your review and keep an eye out!
Date: 03/29/08 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
O.O I.don't.know.what.to.say :O
Hate Jorg
Love everyone else
And you are my favourite author right now (well, you've been that for the last couple of days)
So update this one soon :D And you'll get LOOOOADS of cookies O.o
Author's Response: AwwwrnThanks so much!rnI will try but I have coursework to do and have to helo my brother move outrnXD
Date: 03/29/08 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg! =0
what kind of way is that to tell them btw?^o)
and i think that gordon is REALLY unlucky to walk in on that! =0
poor guy...
but he can't just leave simone because of smg her grown sons did!! =0
Author's Response: Don't worry, everythings going to be fine. The gordon/simone/twin thing gets resolved next chapterrnrnBesides, twincest is nothing to do with the real reason gordon left...
Date: 03/29/08 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I like this! Post more soon.:)
Date: 03/28/08 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahaha gordon is traumatized for life lmao
Date: 03/28/08 08:41 pm Title: Prelude
lol love this story. Bill's sudden "We're fucking" cracked me up. so good. Can't wait for the next chapter lol
Date: 03/28/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
More more more!!
Date: 03/28/08 06:44 pm Title: Prelude
Hahahah, okay, i'm sorry, I just couldn't stop laughing at this:
'Is something wrong?'
'No! We're fucking!'
Hahaha xD
I really like the story, keep it up !
xxx
Date: 03/28/08 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eeek! This is so amazing! I'm already hooked :OO Update soon :)
Author's Response: Aw thanks!rn(:
Date: 03/28/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jesus! They just had to fuck in the living room?? They couldn't wait, huh?
I guess. Now Gordon is gone. It's only gonna get worse.
*hugs*
Date: 03/28/08 05:09 pm Title: Prelude
Damn, this is gonna be very intense.
Not easy at all.
I like it :)
*hugs*