Date: 07/14/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
poor Simone, Tom and Bill
I had a feeling something like this would happen.
The only thing I don't like about this, is they said "we're fucking." That sounds like they are doing it just to be doing it, not out of love.
Date: 07/14/10 08:09 pm Title: Prelude
nope, loves has no boundaries.
I think the reason incest is illegal (well one reason, rather) is that you would never know if it was a forced relationship or not.
Date: 12/06/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
Fucking update you skank whore.
Date: 11/12/08 12:42 am Title: Chapter 4
great story and can you recamend a song from Ayabie?
Date: 10/06/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
cant wait :D
Date: 08/29/08 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooooh its baaaaack I love this fic! xxx
Date: 08/29/08 03:26 am Title: Chapter 4
Great job! I really liked it a lot! ;)
Date: 08/28/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG UPDATE!!!
Date: 08/28/08 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Fina-fucking-ly!
One chapter a month!
That's so fucking bad!
But, this is fucking good enough for me to stick around.
I never read the previous chapter!
I've just read through now, and I'm fucking kicking myself!
I don't wat Bill to get with someone from Ayabie, only Tom! Billa and Tomi and all that shit.
Even if they aren't together properly.
Can you make me some crazed fan that kills Jorg for being a twat? It would proper amuse me
Anyone doing actually, like they run in and are like BAM! And Jorg falls over with and axe in his back, and everyone is like O,O Oi!
Asif you're gonna have them fuck in the room with cameras, when they know there are cameras there!
You're more messed up that me! There's one thing having people you trust watching you, but random security is just wrong, sick and wrong!
More so that het!
You know you're updating soon, or my foot's gonna be up yer arse, or not.
It's pure fucking love, and fluff ^.^
Date: 06/23/08 06:57 am Title: Chapter 3
please write more :o this can't be the end !
Date: 06/06/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
WHAT KIND OF MORON WOULD DO SUCH A THING TO HIS OWN FLESH AND BLOOD?
Ahem, you're amazing.
Date: 05/07/08 05:07 am Title: Chapter 3
WOAH! Now that was damn hot XD. I can't believe their father grrrrrr, lol. Lie like you mean it! Awesme story
Date: 04/29/08 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
awwwwwwwww!!! =(
update soooooon!!
xoxox
Date: 04/29/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter 3
You didn't just stop it there >_< Gaah!
So awesome. I love this story, and the title still cracks me up xD
Date: 04/29/08 12:24 am Title: Chapter 3
I wish that was true!! It would bee a very good movie!!
This is good change for me cause I have been reading really fluffy stories now.
And btw I think I like your Tom the most.
Keep on doing the good work!!
Date: 04/28/08 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG OMG OMG!! DON'T STOP THERE!!!! *goes utterly mad*
You MUST update soon!
(Translation: I love this story, keep it up, babe!!!)
Date: 04/28/08 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bacon Buttie, only someone from the North of England would say that, I'd love to hear Germans say it.
Author's Response: -Giggle-rnrnHaha, that actually made me laughrnrnMental note: STOP BEING SO BRITTISHrnrnLol
Date: 04/28/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yay! The cinema near me! *squeals*
Paradox, this is GREAT! Your rock girl! You seriously do! Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Awhhh thanks!rnrn-blushes-rnrn