Date: 02/03/26 09:41 pm Title: Six
I don’t feel that there’s anything wrong with the story (apart from that major character death warning I really don’t like 😉), however if you feel like it’s not going right you should definitely rewrite it because I think you have to be comfortable with it. I wouldn‘t mind and would look forward to it. Anyways, great chapter and poor Bill, I hope Tom won‘t be too angry with him.
Date: 02/03/26 09:34 pm Title: Five.
I feel bad for both of them. I understand why Tom is angry with Bill for forgetting the order, but something is obviously wrong with Bill. I do have my suspicions on what that could be. Great chapter! (Sorry for the lack of comments in the last few weeks, I’ve been incredibly busy. Will try to catch up in the next few days x)
Date: 01/30/26 07:54 pm Title: Six
Great chapter😊 And if it feels better for you, then I would be okay with it being refreshed, rewritten and improved.
Date: 01/29/26 09:43 pm Title: Six
I like the story, but if you think it's outdated and want to rewrite it, I'll still read it 😉😃
I like this pair, even though there seems to be some problem with Bill, but Tom is patient and I think he can help him overcome whatever is happening.
Date: 01/18/26 08:49 pm Title: Five.
What a shame, Bill told the truth and Tom didn't believe him, but what happened then? Does Bill have some undiagnosed health problem? Because something's wrong with him to make him act like this, unintentionally... I hope Bill is okay and that Tom finds a solution to his problems 🤞🤞🤞
Date: 01/01/26 04:48 pm Title: Four.
I think Bill has a problem, I don't know if it's with drinking or something else, I just hope he can work it out. Tom is getting worn out and that could strain their relationship, which would be very sad for both of them 😥 Thanks for the update!!
Date: 01/01/26 03:25 pm Title: Four.
First of all: happy new year to you! May it be filled with happiness, success, laughter and of course, with a lot of Tokio Hotel :) x I loved this chapter and im wondering what’s exactly wrong with Bill. I guess I will have to wait and find out!
Date: 12/18/25 04:00 pm Title: Three.
I love this. Them. I am very curious where this story is going and I’m looking forward to more.
Date: 12/06/25 09:29 pm Title: Three.
Forever d84;a039;d84;a039; Tom & Bill d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: 11/21/25 04:33 pm Title: Two
Great chapter! I love the way this story is written, I feel like the writing style is a bit different from what you usually write, and I really like that! Can’t wait to see where this is heading, although I’m still scared of that MCD warning.
Date: 11/05/25 09:12 pm Title: One.
Ok, I like this history 💯👏👏👏👏
Date: 10/27/25 08:37 am Title: One.
Going to be honest here: I do not like the major character death warning. I hate it when one of them dies because it makes me so incredibly sad, just thinking about it makes me tear up right now. However, I love your stories, all of them, and of course I will read and love this one as well. Having said that, I loved the beginning to this story, it’s very well written, and I can’t wait for more. Hope you had a wonderful time in Egypt x
Date: 10/26/25 07:38 pm Title: One.
I already like this story😊
Author's Response: Thank you. I have big plans for it! I hope you love it as much as I do