Date: 01/03/26 05:25 pm Title: Before the Noise
Missing this story a lot! I really hope you will update again, it’s just too good to be abandoned. Happy new year to you :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much — it really warms my heart. I’ll be back, I promise, I just need a bit of time. And I’m so happy it’s not boring and that you’re still invested in the story 💖 It means the world to me — honestly 💖 Happy new year!
Date: 09/24/25 04:36 pm Title: The Fracture
You are just so good with words. I am not a native speaker of English, but I can feel every sentence. I feel the shift from helplessness to anger, and I think it’s beautiful if words can do that. Also, I think that anger at the end made a real difference, it feels like progress they can both work with, a turning point. I loved it!
Date: 09/24/25 04:17 pm Title: The Mark Left Behind
Tom is so protective and caring, even if he neglects his own wellbeing. But he loves his brother so much, he can’t be well when his Bill is miserable. So he does everything he can to lift the weight off his shoulders. I just love everything about this story!
Date: 08/30/25 09:43 am Title: The Last Sacrifice
I am really glad that Bill didn’t get through with it. Tom is being a wonderful brother again, caring so deeply about Bill and calming him down. I am very excited to find out what happens next though, now that Bill didn’t do what McCaughty wanted. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Tom’s always there, isn’t he? But he could definitely use someone of his own to help carry a bit of all that...
Date: 08/17/25 05:37 am Title: The Only Way Out
Tom is such a great brother. I wish Bill would tell him what’s really going on. And Bill, please don’t do this, this is so wrong! I really can’t wait to read more, I’m very grateful you’re sharing this story, I love it so much!
Author's Response: Ahh thank you!! 🖤 I know you want to shake some sense into Bill—so do I! I can’t promise it’ll go the way you’re hoping… but I can promise more is coming soon😎
Date: 08/17/25 05:26 am Title: The Next Blow
I know I keep saying this, and I probably just don’t know enough English words to express this in different ways, but your writing style is just incredible. You draw me in with every word I read, and I could keep reading forever.
Author's Response: That means so much, thank you 🖤 I never feel like I quite see my own writing that way, so hearing this honestly makes my day.
Date: 07/27/25 04:06 am Title: The Moment After
I can understand why Tom is angry, not telling Bill about that picture might have been a mistake but everything he does he’s doing out of love for Bill, and he wanted to protect him. Their bond is so strong, and again, this was intense and so well-written. Thank you for sharing this story, I love it so much!
Author's Response: Yes, you’re exactly right… Tom’s choices aren’t perfect, but they all come from love. He’d carry the whole weight of it if it meant sparing Bill even a little pain. Thank you for reading and being here! <3
Date: 07/27/25 03:43 am Title: The Edge of Enough
I’m sorry it took me so long to comment, I wasn’t very well the last couple of weeks and couldn’t really focus on reading. Thank you for this chapter, every single one is so intense and with the way you write, I can imagine every scene perfectly, like I am there myself. I’m feeling so sorry for Bill, he doesn’t deserve this, and neither does Tom. I do love all the drama though!
Author's Response: Oh please don’t apologize at all! I’m really sorry to hear you haven’t been feeling well. I hope you’re slowly starting to feel more like yourself again. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave such a kind comment, especially when things have been hard. And yes… none of this is fair to Bill or Tom. But they’re still holding on. Take care, and thank you again <3
Date: 06/24/25 03:55 pm Title: Inside the Noise
Tom wanted to protect Bill from seeing this horrible picture but I can see why Bill would feel betrayed. I hope they can work this out, they will need all of their strength for the rest of the trial. Thank you for this story, I love it so much and can’t wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much—that really means a lot to hear! They both carry so much, and neither of them is truly wrong… which makes it all the more painful. Let’s see what happens next! I’m so grateful you’re here for the journey💛rnrn
Date: 06/24/25 03:46 pm Title: The Room Where It Broke
Every line of this chapter is hurting me. Not in a bad way though. I love all the drama but seeing Bill like that is still tough. Incredible writing as always, I love this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! 💛
Date: 05/26/25 04:05 pm Title: The Weight of Saying It
I’m glad Bill made it through the first round so well, but I guess the more difficult part is still to come. I can’t wait to read more, I really love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Drama incoming… 😈🙈
Date: 05/26/25 03:50 pm Title: The Night Before
I can feel the emotion through every word you write. How hard it must be for Bill, but for Tom as well. Loved it!
Date: 05/11/25 05:36 am Title: The Cost of Holding On
Again, your writing is so incredibly good, I could read books of it. I love every word. I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!🖤
Date: 05/11/25 05:28 am Title: The Shape of the Truth
I love the drama and in this story, I can feel it in every sentence you’re writing. I love drama, although I feel bad for Bill and what he’s going through. Great chapter!
Date: 05/02/25 12:09 am Title: Where the Silence Holds
I can only repeat what I said before: your way of writing and describing things is so incredibly good, I love every sentence you write and I could read for hours. I can’t wait to read how Bill and Tom will cope with this situation. I’m hoping there will be lots of drama ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I’m writing it as I go, so it’s super stressful 🙈 makes me so happy you like it! I feel like you kind of know me already… and trust me, there’s so much drama ahead! 😈
Date: 05/02/25 12:05 am Title: Before the Noise
I’m so happy you decided to do a sequel! I already love it!