Date: 03/18/24 04:03 pm Title: Seven.
OK wait… I mean, how can you think it was in any way acceptable to stop there? Cause it is not! I can’t accept that at all and I can’t possibly wait until Thursday now!
It’s a good thing I am in a very good mood today (cause I bought tickets for the Kaulitz Hills podcast recording) so I can forgive you haha.
From chapter one I thought Bill might be pregnant but I kinda dropped the idea when he had his appointment because I then thought he might have just gone there for a contraceptive. Now however, I think he might actually be pregnant (or maybe was).
Really can’t wait now. This is my absolute favourite story ever!
Author's Response: Haha! Oh god, I’ve been both excited and dreading your review because of the ending! I swear, you’ll find out soon! Awh I’m so glad you got tickets for the Podcast! I’m not going because I’ll be at ZMF instead and can’t make both. I’m off to several shows next year though and currently thinking about another haha! I hope you have the best time though! rnOoh, I like your theory. I do actually try to update this story on a Wednesday, but I’m in the UK so it’s pretty late when I do. I adore how much you love this story, it honestly makes me so happy. rnBy the way, you are always more than welcome to come yell at me on Twitter too! Hahah!
Date: 03/18/24 04:45 am Title: Seven.
Oh Wow, now I wonder too what's happening to Bill.
Great chapter😊
Date: 03/17/24 11:02 pm Title: Seven.
Your stories always pull me in! I hate that Bill is going through a tough time in secret. Hope he starts letting Tom in soon.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Hope the chapters start getting longer too. I read these chapters too fast D: lol
Date: 03/17/24 10:57 pm Title: Seven.
Your stories always pull me in! I hate that Bill is going through a tough time in secret. Hope he starts letting Tom in soon.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Hope the chapters start getting longer too. I read these chapters too fast D: lol
Date: 03/17/24 10:57 pm Title: Seven.
Your stories always pull me in! I hate that Bill is going through a tough time in secret. Hope he starts letting Tom in soon.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Hope the chapters start getting longer too. I read these chapters too fast D: lol
Date: 03/14/24 06:14 pm Title: Six.
My heart breaks for Bill. He is suffering and he is being abused, and he apparently has no one to confide in. I hope that Tom will become that person for him because he clearly cares, although Bill might have been an asshole to him in the past.
There is something I want to tell you: chapters are too short! It’s not acceptable.
You know I’m just kidding though and I LOVE everything about this story
Author's Response: Hahah! I still love your reviews so much. I promise Chapters get longer! The Chapter I wrote last night was over 3,000 words so once the *reveal* happens, it will get longer I swear haha. I don’t think you will be able to handle what’s coming!
Date: 03/14/24 02:24 pm Title: Six.
This was a great chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/14/24 03:52 am Title: Six.
Oh no Bill :( I can only imagine what happened to him this time :(
It's sweet of Tom to worry about Bill, but it probably will be hard to let Bill open up about his situation.
Great chapter😊
Date: 03/11/24 06:27 pm Title: Five.
What breaks my heart is that Bill thinks it is his own fault. I like Tom being so alert that something is going on and I really hope that he will be able to help Bill eventually.
So, I was thinking that Steffen abuses Bill which this chapter pretty much confirmed. I think that Bill leaves on time every day because Steffen wants him home on time, making him cook and please him sexually. I also think that it is the reason why Bill keeps up the asshole image - nobody can get very close because of the risk of someone finding out.
I think that maybe Steffen is blackmailing Bill for whatever reason, or knows something about him that can’t be revealed, because I was wondering why Bill would let him do this to him. Something must be going on that Steffen has a hand over him. Maybe most of the money Bill makes also goes to Steffen.
Having read the warnings I know that it will get really bad and I just hope Tom finds out quickly so he can help him.
I guess you know by now that I love this story so very much! The waiting time in between chapters is killing me though haha.
Author's Response: I won’t lie, I’ve been so excited waiting for your review haha! I love your theory! I guess you will find out if you are right enough soon enough but I refuse to tell you even if you are a little bit right. I love how much you love this story! It’s honestly killing me waiting between posts because I want to get *a thing* posted, because all these chapters will make SO much more sense after chapter 7 and 8 are posted! I can’t wait for you to read them, it’s some of the most emotional stuff I’ve ever written. rnThank you for always leaving so much love, you have no idea how much I appreciate it!
Date: 03/11/24 01:15 pm Title: Five.
This was a really great chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/11/24 08:04 am Title: Five.
Awh, I already had a feeling that Steffen is abusing Bill, and now that feeling grew even stronger. Tom is very observing I see.
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I’m glad you are enjoying it!
Date: 03/07/24 11:12 am Title: Four.
Tom really has a completely wrong picture of Bill and his life in his head. I hope he will be able to see the real Bill soon and the help him.
I have a theory on why Bill is not like Tom‘s picture of him, and why he is with Steffen who is obviously a very big asshole and I really can’t wait to find out if I’m right or even close.
Seriously though, I am so impatient right now, I would love to read the whole story now. Each chapter gets me more and more excited about what’s going to happen and I really can’t wait. I guess I will have to though :D
Also, why would you be nervous? You really don‘t have to be! You’ve got a great writing style and great ideas. Lots lots of love for this story!
Author's Response: Oh gosh! Thank you so much! I honestly always look forward to your reviews, they make me so happy! I’m honestly so excited for you to read this whole story, it’s got a couple of turns in it which you won’t expec, but I’m so excited to share it with you I just want to post it all right night haha! What’s your theory? I’d love to know!
Date: 03/07/24 05:35 am Title: Four.
This was a really great chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/07/24 02:55 am Title: Four.
Awh, Tom really is wrong about Bill, which is logical with Bill being closed off like this.
I wonder why Bill did not come into the office, because I have a feeling it's not because he's not feeling well.
Great chapter😊
Date: 03/06/24 08:11 pm Title: Three.
I hate Steffan ... is very bad
Date: 03/04/24 07:23 am Title: Three.
Aww I feel bad for Bill, clearly Steffen is a very big asshole who makes Bill‘s life horrible. Tom has a picture of Bill‘s life in his head which makes sense considering he is the boss of a big company, but clearly it is not even close to reality.
I LOVE this story. Can you update every day?
Just kidding - I am very happy that you update so regularly :) can’t wait for more though!
Author's Response: Honestly, that means the world! Thank you so much, I was so nervous about posting this but I’m so happy you love it! Although, be prepared for it to get very emotional. I don’t think people are ready for what’s going to happen in around 3 or 4 chapters time!
Date: 03/04/24 02:36 am Title: Three.
Awh, Steffen already seems like an asshole. I mean, can't he cook himself now that Bill is sick?
I'm glad that Bill is able to rest on this Friday evening. Hopefully Steffen doesn't demand too much of him over the weekend.
And I can understand why Tom thinks Bill has a life of luxury, but he will be surprised when he finds out what Bill's life really looks like.
Great chapter😊
Author's Response: Steffen is definitely an asshole!thank you so much!
Date: 03/04/24 12:26 am Title: Three.
This was a really great chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/29/24 04:27 pm Title: Two.
This story looks very promising, interesting story line and charismatic characters. Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 02/29/24 04:17 pm Title: Two.
This story looks very promising, interesting story line and charismatic characters. Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!