Date: 06/04/24 07:35 am Title: Twenty Eight.
This was a really great chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/31/24 07:54 am Title: Twenty Seven.
This was a really great chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/30/24 05:18 pm Title: Twenty Seven.
It must be so hard for Tom to leave Bill at what he calls home, having such a bad feeling about it. But I can understand him… in his eyes Bill is an adult and if he says he wants to go home he will respect that. However Bill being in tears about it, I really don’t know how I would have reacted. I am very excited to read what will happen at that game night though. I wonder if Steffen is really keen on having Tom there or if there are ulterior motives behind his actions. I just really hope he can save Bill from that asshole Steffen. It makes me so sad how much Bill is suffering. Love the drama though and love this story!
Author's Response: Absolutely, as much as Tom cares for Bill, they are still both adults and Tom believes that Bill knows his own mind, even if he does have a bad feeling about it!and who knows what Steffen is thinking, all I know is it’s not nice thoughts and game night is going to be… interesting.
Date: 05/29/24 02:47 am Title: Twenty Seven.
Awh, I Understand why it didn't feel good for Tom to leave Bill there, especially with what Steffen did to Bill (again)
Oh wow, that must be one of those game nights, but I fear Steffen will use it as some kind of test.
Great chapter😊
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/26/24 03:43 am Title: Twenty Six.
I love that Tom cares so much about Bill‘s wellbeing. It really helped him that Tom took him home so he could relax a bit. And he does trust him to some extent, following him to his apartment and letting him clean his wound. Tom is so good for him. Now I hope that he won’t let him go home. He can’t let him go home, it would probably be his death and I’m sure Tom knows by now that home is bad, even he does not know of everything that’s going on there. I love love love this story so much! I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: He really does, he’s such a caring soul. Unfortunately he does allow Bill to go home though, Bill is an adult after all and Tom can’t force him to stay, as much as he has a bad feeling about it.
Date: 05/26/24 03:02 am Title: Twenty Six.
Awh, so sweet how Tom is helping Bill, and even let him stay at his home, so he can relax a bit.
But that it's so late is going to be a problem, I wonder what the text said.
Author's Response: It definitely is going to be a problem, Bill is going to be in a little bit of trouble when he gets home I think!
Date: 05/25/24 08:30 pm Title: Twenty Six.
This was a really great chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/22/24 04:28 pm Title: Twenty Five.
Oh Bill, please finally tell Tom so he can help! I hope Tom won’t stop asking questions now, because I really think Bill can’t go back there, he won’t survive. That was so sad. He is punished because he took care of his dead daughter‘s funeral. What a major asshole Steffen is (not that I didn’t already know that). I love all the drama though, can’t wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha I think Bill is a little bit stubborn to be honest! Yeah, things really aren’t going to get better for Bill at home, they might even get worse!
Date: 05/20/24 05:20 am Title: Twenty Five.
This was a really great chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/20/24 02:34 am Title: Twenty Five.
Awh poor Bill :( I understand why he won't tell Tom what's going on at home, even though he should
Great chapter😊
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/15/24 03:54 pm Title: Twenty Four.
Ah, here we go, cliffhanger… seriously, you are killing me with those. I demand that for every chapter with a major cliffhanger there needs to be a new chapter the next day. So I’m looking forward to the next chapter today haha… OK just kidding.
Oh poor Bill! I’m feeling so bad for him. I hope this is the breakthrough for Tom realizing what’s going on though, or at least ask more and more questions. Also, I really hope Bill can gather enough trust and courage to tell him about Steffen. He needs to be rescued out of this misery. On the other hand I love the drama so do keep it up.
Awh I don’t understand that you are not completely satisfied with this. I personally love it just like I loved all the chapters before!
Author's Response: Haha, I just can’t help it! I adore cliff hangers so much. I think Tom is definitely slowly having a breakthrough and realising everything isn’t as okay as Bill is pretending it is! And thank you, some chapters just seem like fillers to me and just feel like I’m rambling nonsense but I’m glad you liked it
Date: 05/14/24 08:31 pm Title: Twenty Four.
Great chapter😊 Now that Tom sees how bruisend Bill is he's a step closer to the truth, even though I think Bill will come up with another reason, but hopefully Tom sees right through it.
Author's Response: Absolutely, hopefully he will be able to save Bill
Date: 05/14/24 08:05 pm Title: Twenty Four.
This was a really great chapter!
I hope bill will tell tom what happened to him!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/12/24 04:05 pm Title: Twenty Three.
It’s good that Tom starts to ask more questions. He is probably the only one who can save Bill now, and get him out of his misery. I hope Bill didn’t do anything stupid with the pills he took last chapter and I hope he is OK (well… as OK as he can be at least). So Steffen has control over Bill‘s mobile phone. I really hope that Tom gets suspicious anyways. I love the drama and need more of it please!
Author's Response: Absolutely, hopefully he will ask even more! I don’t think he did anything too stupid, this time anyway!
Date: 05/10/24 02:27 am Title: Twenty Three.
Yes Tom, start asking yourself more questions and you might find out partly what's happening to Bill.
Oh, Steffen really keeps Bill as a prisoner until he releases Bill again so Bill can go to work :(
Great chapter😊
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 05/10/24 02:03 am Title: Twenty Three.
This was a really great chapter!
I hope bill will be ok!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/08/24 06:08 pm Title: Twenty Two.
Every time I read a chapter I just want to pull Bill into a hug and cuddle him and tell him everything‘s gonna be alright. Seeing him suffer like that makes my heart ache so much. But, like you, I also love the drama and I think there is going to be a lot more of that.
Also, what?? What is going on there? So Bill is the prize of Steffen‘s game nights, but the employees are involved in this crime as well? Do they know it’s Bill? And what’s with Tom‘s pay rise? I have more questions now than I had before reading this chapter haha.
I admit I barely can wait inbetween chapters, I am always so excited. I love love love it!
Author's Response: I know, me too! He really isn’t having a good time! I hope things look up for him soon… rnHmm.. that does sound very bizarre that they are saying Bill is a prize.. I wonder what’s going on with the employees. Hmmm. rnSo many questions! Hahah! rnI honestly love how much you love this story! It’s honestly my baby and my heart has gone into it.
Date: 05/07/24 04:53 pm Title: Twenty Two.
This was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/07/24 02:59 am Title: Twenty Two.
I wonder about Tom's raised paycheck.
Oh wow, those guys in the elevator, if only Tom knew it was about Bill.
Awh, Bill's therapist is slowly coming somewhere with Bill.
Oh no Bill :( I wish I could be there for him.
Great chapter😊
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/07/24 12:18 am Title: One.
Every part of it kills my heart. I'm just looking ahead into nothingness.
I'm waiting for the next part.
Author's Response: Thank you