Date: 08/23/25 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Two
this is so sad i wanna cry 😔😭 my poor bill
Date: 02/01/25 08:47 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh my god, this was so good but also so sad. I hated the ending because I wanted it to end happily, I did see the warning tho and I was so nervous about it the whole time. But I don’t regret reading this, it was absolutly beautiful. I really enjoy your stories!
Date: 03/09/23 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen.
Omg... I knew the major character death warning was there... but DAMN this hurt 😭😭😭💔💔💔
Date: 02/23/23 10:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen.
Yay!!! I'm so happy to see this update!!
Date: 02/09/23 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Twelve.
💕💕💕 what a cute chapter!!
Date: 02/06/23 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Awww i loved this! Hope Bill feels better soon and we get an update 😀
Date: 12/02/22 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Awww I'm crying!!
Date: 10/01/22 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Six
Love it!!! I just found this story and already am invested in it. Great job with your writing 😁
Date: 09/29/22 10:07 am Title: Chapter Five
So sweet.
Date: 09/22/22 09:56 pm Title: Chapter Five
I am happy for Bill & Tom 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲
Date: 09/15/22 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Four
Damn... I'm crying my eyes out, my precious Bill, suffering, breaks my soul. Tom is a sweetheart, not only did he save him but he is there, I hope he supports him and honestly, Bill's situation is so sad... bye I'm going to cry....
Date: 07/05/22 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Three
I am craying 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Date: 07/04/22 11:36 am Title: Chapter One
Love your work, I can tell this will be another good one.
Date: 07/04/22 03:35 am Title: Chapter One
I love this story already. Will Bill get better? Of course not, but I like happy endings. I love that there is always something to read. All updates! Keep it up!:))
Date: 12/05/21 11:02 am Title: Chapter One
I've said this before, but you should find yourself a beta. Your ideas are good, but the execution could be a lot better. You constantly switch pov which comes across as sloppy writing and you often make mistakes that would easily be fixed if you only read the chapters through properly, or if you had a new set of eyes taking a look at it before posting.
I don't want to sound negative because it's nice to see active writers, but with how often you post you are almost clogging up the page, making other writers work disappear among yours, your name being almost the only one you see day after day and while that doesn't have to be bad, it comes off as kind of spammy, and since it's not particularly good spam, it becomes annoying instead.
You have so many good ideas and your writing isn't always bad per say, but it needs work. Even professional authors have beta readers or editors, and your work would have a lot higher quality if you did as well.
Quality over quantity, as they say.
Author's Response: Hi there. I assume this is aimed towards myself? (Shaddix)
rnThank you for the review, whosever i have noticed you comment the same thing each time rather than review the actual story? I don’t want to take it personal, but it’s starting to feel like it is if I’m honest with you.
rnI understand where you are coming from, yes I have a few stories, but If you have noticed they aren’t solely mine. They are all collabs and with two different people.
rnI try my hardest to take into consideration other writers. I have a set schedule which I have clearly put in each story in the story notes to make it clear to everyone, which I have done from the start. I also try and time my updates. I do one update a say, except on Thursdays which I don’t post at all. If another writer has posted before I have chance to update, I leave it as long as I can before updating so I don’t hide anyone else’s work. If I post first, then I post earlier so other writers can be seen.
rnAs for me being the only one person, this is not my fault. All writers can update when they wish and how often they wish. I’ve noticed some weeks, I’m the only person to update anything. This is not my fault, and it is unfair that I’m being called spammy when I am just uploading to a set schedule. If I wasn’t to update In those weeks, there would be nothing updated on the home page. Again, it is not my fault others are not uploading. That is down to them and when they would like to upload, and how often that want too.
Date: 12/04/21 05:28 am Title: Chapter One
Bill disabled again, I just hope his condition does not get worse, the good thing is that he has friends who appreciate him a lot, especially Tom.