Date: 09/18/14 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooowwwwww!! Ouch!! Ouch!! Ouch!!
Date: 07/14/08 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Honestly, that was both beautiful and sad, and I absolutely loved it. I can almost see it happen, hear their conversation in my head. Great job, and please keep up the wonderful work!
Date: 06/21/08 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwwwww no!
shows how easy accidents happen though
well written, excellent perception of sibling rivalry.
brilliant!
Date: 06/16/08 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
no no no, he didnt die did he :'( i loved it but .... :'(
Author's Response: No, he didn't die ;) Thanks :)
Date: 05/20/08 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1
sad story.
but yet, I liked it : D
Author's Response: Glad you did :)
Date: 03/29/08 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really good! That's beating my drabble!
Author's Response: Maybe not? Thanks :D
Date: 03/27/08 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh wow, that was so sad but extremely beautiful. geesus, those boys. they need to understand when to stop. but then again, perseverance is what's needed to have their kind of relationship(:
okay, i went of track. this was absolutely amazing& you are a great author. ahhh, i love thisss
Author's Response: *blushes* Aw, thank you! *huggles you*
Date: 03/27/08 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
:) haha 'Kanye West, Flashing Lights'!
great stuff!
Author's Response: Never heard the song, you know? Juts had that quote to work on ;) Thanks :D
Date: 03/27/08 09:22 am Title: Chapter 1
wow...that was pretty good....geez lady why you get all violent on billa? XD that's really good though. I like it lots ^_^
Author's Response: Yay, thanks! And I get violent on them both, lol ;)
Date: 03/27/08 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG, why I had the feeling from the beginning this would have finished bad D: awww why do they need to be so stubborn, damn! *thinks of a sequel* ... *begs for a sequel* ps. you and your blood xD
Author's Response: *thinks of a sequel* *write down on the NEXT 100 THINGS TO WRITE list* ps: Don't you just love the blood? Because I do! :D
Date: 03/27/08 08:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg Tink! You've made me cry, again *_* I - I Love your stories darling. *sniffles* This was so horrifying and yet I don't know beautiful? I don't know if you should call this story beautiful really, but it was, I think at least. Because the way you write makes it beautiful. You never stop to amaze me with your writing skills, you leave we with this feeling, which I don't know how to explain, every time! I guess it's the way you affect me, your writing I mean. It's great, always have been and will always be. And before I forget, I am aware of that I've missed some stories of yours while I've been away, but I'll read them hun, I'm looking forward to reading them. And this story was great, I hope you win this contest ♥
Author's Response: *wipes tears* Aw, you're making me blush so hard! Thank you ♥
Date: 03/27/08 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, silly boys and their pride. That was really good Tink! Sad, but good!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thankyou :D
Date: 03/27/08 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1
That was... really sad, yet I loved it.
Author's Response: :D