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Reviewer: Nin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/21 12:26 am Title: Consummation

Lindo;) n.n. Me encantó

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much.rn

rnStarling: I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Reneekcole Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/21 05:59 am Title: Consummation

Great chapter! I love how attentive Tom was!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/21 11:00 pm Title: Consummation

this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanksrn

rnStarling: Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Reneekcole Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/21 07:22 pm Title: Consummation

Great chapter! I love how attentive Tom was!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much! rn

rnStarling: I enjoyed writing this chapter. I am glad it came across right. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Reneekcole Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/21 11:32 am Title: Dinner

I really like this story so far! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thank you so much! I hope you love it as much as we do!rn

rnStarling: I am glad you enjoy it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/21 05:30 am Title: Dinner

this was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks!rn

rnStarling: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/21 10:46 pm Title: Dinner

Bill and his butterflies ... such a man by his side, he will soon fall in love, maybe not so because he is very stubborn but he will, also Tom is doing everything on his part, that is enough to move Bill's heart.

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much, it was so much fun to write this and play with the characters.rn

rnStarling: This was interesting to write and I loved that it came across. Glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/21 10:17 pm Title: Andy

Tom struggling with his coffee pot ..... Tom is being very patient with Bill, which is greatly appreciated. Tom wanted a husband, now he has one, good for him.

Author's Response: Shaddix: The little cute things like Tom struggling with the coffee pot and the fridge make me smile, it's incredibly cute. rn

rnStarling: I wanted to show the issues with smart tech, to keep Tom human. I am glad he resonated with you. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/21 03:51 am Title: Andy

this was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks!rn

rnStarling: I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/21 03:58 pm Title: Wedding

All that needs to be said is that you two are magnificent!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much! rn

rnStarling: Thank you. I am glad you enjoy our writing.

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/21 09:14 pm Title: Wedding

At least Tom is putting all his effort into being kind and understanding to her now husband. I hope he continues to have that patience because he is going to need it, Bill is stubborn and determined to fight for his ideals. You can see that they both love music and the pursuit of justice .... I want to hit Andy, he practically cheated on Bill by lying about his sexuality, if he had been honest Bill would not be suffering so much for the loss of what he believed was his soul mate.

Author's Response: Shaddix: He definitely is trying, however I think they both still have their issues that they have to work through. Andy definitely isn't a good guy, and he is hiding so much more. rn

rnStarling: Bill and Tom definitely have a fair degree of compatibility. They also have their issues. Bill's heartbreak is a big one to overcome. Tom will try his best. Hope you continue to read and enjoy

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/21 08:37 am Title: Wedding

this sounds like a really good story!
I can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks!rn

rnStarling: I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: fading Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/21 11:55 am Title: Wedding

I’m so anxious right now! But in a good way, I really enjoy reading this story. Bill is (understandably) having a really hard time with this and I’m so worried about what is expected of him on their first night together. Looking forward to reading more!!

Author's Response: Shaddix: I'm so glad you enjoy this story, it's our baby and I adored writing it. I can understand why you are anxious, the system is so complicated and has so many expectations for a newly bonded couple. I hope you continue to enjoy it!rn

rnStarling: I am glad you are anxious in a good way. As for the wedding night well that's for us to know and you to find out. Thanks for the review. I hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/21 10:09 pm Title: Heartbreak

Poor Bill, he is so desperate to obtain the appeal in his favor and avoid that forced marriage ... it seems that it will not work since Andy himself was very sure that it would be unlikely. I have no idea where Bill will get the strength to face that terrible fate, whatever his compatibility is almost perfect, something will have to happen to make that affinity a reality. Meanwhile, it's time to console Bill ... and ask for Tom to be patient and good to him.

Author's Response: Shaddix: Definitely, Bill is not happy right now. Bill is an interesting character, painfully shy but definitely has a spark so hopefully Tom can win him around and make this marriage work!rn

rnStarling: Things are definitely a little bleak for Bill right now. Just have to wait and see how his marriage works out.

Reviewer: milahvalentine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/21 05:22 pm Title: Results

Sounds really interesting! Waiting for the next chapter 😍

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much!rn

rnStarling: I am glad you liked it. I hope you will continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: fading Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/21 02:30 pm Title: Results

Oh, this is very intriguing! Interesting way of putting wife and husband as power roles instead of merely gender. Really excited to read more!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much! It was definitely an interesting concept to come up with. I thought it made the story have a whole different feel to it. rn

rnStarling: I am glad you liked the idea of husband and wife as power roles instead of gender. Hope you will continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/21 01:18 pm Title: Results

this is very different and interesting. looking forward to more!!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much! I hope you like it!rn

rnStarling: I hope you will enjoy it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/21 11:15 pm Title: Results

Oh no ...... a story with a theme never read before. My poor baby Bill in the hands of a husband who may not be like his father, a dictator ... That news was catastrophic for Bill, all his plans and his future disappeared, Andy's fault for putting Bi ...

Author's Response: Shaddix: It's the first kind of futuristic fic I've ever written but I'm so glad we did it. I love the story so much! I hope you love it.rn

rnStarling: I have had this idea knocking about in my head for a little over a year now. I am glad Shaddix was willing to collaborate and bring it to life with me. Hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: MOCHAMONA Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/21 09:54 pm Title: Results

Excited for your new story! Thanks!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much!rn

rnStarling: Glad you're excited. Hope you like it

Reviewer: Liss92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/21 07:55 pm Title: Results

Looking forward to this :)

Author's Response: Shaddix: I hope you love it as much as we loved writing it!rn

rnStarling: I hope that you continue to enjoy it

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