Date: 01/22/09 05:43 am Title: Something Kinda Funny
no more?
Date: 06/08/08 08:16 am Title: Something Kinda Funny
Please update soon! I love this story!!!! :D
Date: 03/02/08 06:51 pm Title: Keep Myself Awake
It's not lame... just a little slow is all. This is a great story though. I like it so far, please continue soon. :D
Date: 03/01/08 10:56 pm Title: Keep Myself Awake
It wasn't that lame, it had a lot of your central plot in it, or I would imagine. That or you were just providing backstory. But either way that ring is probably very needed.... dun dun dunnnnnn
Date: 03/01/08 10:45 pm Title: Virgin State of Mind
Great chapter!
Date: 03/01/08 10:37 pm Title: Cut Up Angels
Whoo! We finally see some Vamping out! Poor Tomi. He might need to change his pants. Great chapter!
Date: 03/01/08 09:57 pm Title: Dirty Business
*dances!* I like the progression. Don't feel bad. You can see where Tom is becoming more paranoid, more frightened. I think this works very very well with this story.
Date: 03/01/08 09:55 pm Title: Unwell
Get him, Tomi! Kick those balls! muahahaha! Great chapter! Busy schedules plus long chapters don't mix well. Short tastes are better than no food at all. *nods*
Date: 03/01/08 09:46 pm Title: My Immortal
I like the journal entries, but maybe that's just me. It keeps things moving and without bogging the brain down with useless things that people use as filler.
Date: 03/01/08 09:42 pm Title: Angel's Punishment
oh wow. Big bad bitchy BILL! Ebil ass! I like the fact that you can make a character cruel, based on real people. I can't bring myself to do that yet.
Date: 03/01/08 09:37 pm Title: Something Kinda Funny
interesting approach but it works, it isn't very emotional like you say, but he seems to be reaching. To me, it's not any different than what would have been done in a movie. Not saying that you're not creative, just saying that you didn't try to be overly creative like some and have Tom know exactly what was up all omnicientally and such.
Date: 12/28/07 09:13 am Title: Keep Myself Awake
nice so far...i read your bio too,you know i wish i was a gay man too,although id never get a sex change. i thought i was the only one who had strange desires like that. it feels good theres someone out there like me=]
Author's Response: Aww. I didn't think anyone actually read profiles on here. And yeah...I've always wanted that for some reason. Im always like "Mom, WHY oh WHY couldn't I have been born a man?". But unless medical science comes a LONG way in the next decade or two I don't see me ever getting a sex change. But yes...back to my fic...ummm...I'm not going to be updating this one at all until I finish my other one (Whats it Feel Like to be a Ghost) and that might take...a very long time. So...sorry but they'll be no updates on this for a while.
Date: 11/06/07 07:23 pm Title: Keep Myself Awake
awesome story. um. Black Lab?
Author's Response: Wow. Yeah, didn't think anyone was still playing. And even if they were didnt think they'd guess that one. Good job.
Date: 11/05/07 10:35 pm Title: Something Kinda Funny
New reader! New reader!
I'm absolutely loving it.
I love Vampire!Bill. hehe.
Please say you won't EVER forget about this story?
*kisses*
xXxEddiexXx
Author's Response: Yay! I love new readers! And I'll try. I'm having trouble with this fic. Grr. But I wont give up...it just might take some time.
Date: 11/05/07 02:16 am Title: Keep Myself Awake
I read your response to a review down here, and don't you DARE dropping this story! *begs*
Author's Response: Aww. Thank you! And yeah, I probably wont but my updates aren't going to be very regular.
Date: 11/05/07 02:14 am Title: Keep Myself Awake
It wasn't lame at all! It's amazing, I'm really impressed. I can't wait for the next!
Date: 11/04/07 11:16 pm Title: Keep Myself Awake
I just wanna say....When I read the name "Delilah"....I totally burst out laughing. I haven't even watched the show in ages and I just freakin' pictured that catholic schoolgirl uniform.
Author's Response: Haha. But her name was Darla. But yeah, I made them similar.
Date: 11/04/07 08:17 pm Title: Keep Myself Awake
This was amazing! really enjoying it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! No one was commenting, so I wasn't sure. Cause I've been thinking about dropping this story.
Date: 10/22/07 10:22 pm Title: Virgin State of Mind
this was amazing! and so are you! :)
Date: 09/20/07 05:53 pm Title: Virgin State of Mind
:D great. that children talk kinda freaked me out..actually it was interesting. but i like it. more please? =]
Author's Response: Yep, Bill is not exactly sane all the time now, but there is a reason for that.