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Reviewer: lamefreak Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 10:16 pm Title: My Immortal

XD looooveeee it. more more. soon please. =]

Author's Response: Thanx!! Yeah, I'm going to try to update tomorrow so check back then!

Reviewer: unintended_muse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 09:58 pm Title: My Immortal

Want. Another. Chapter. You are soo freakin' killing me! *falls into a grave with black roses*

I'm really not one to beg for updates...but...I need you.
And I sooo can't even picture Bill with short, spiked blonde hair....it just won't come!

Author's Response: Hehe. Well not tonight as it is midnight and I have to get up early but maybe tomorrow. And I know blonde, spiky Bill? I couldn't even picture it, which is why I chose it. I wanted him to be drastically different. So much so that no one would recognize him but his brother. That's when that popped in my head and I started laughing. But yeah, I'll try really hard to update at least once tomorrow.

Reviewer: unintended_muse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 09:53 pm Title: My Immortal

evanescence? did i get it? now i'm gonna read the chapter.

Author's Response: Hehe. Yep you got it! Point goes to you. Was pretty easy to guess though, but I thought it was fitting for the chapter.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 07:20 pm Title: Angel's Punishment

I really like where this story is going so far and I can't wait for more. Its interesing how evil Bill is! =]
When is the next charpter going to be ready?



p.s just like everyone else Im loving it!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, it surprised me how much people are liking evil Bill. I figured that would turn a lot of people off. But yeah, read my comment to the person below about the next chappie.

Reviewer: Lamefreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 07:19 pm Title: Angel's Punishment

Oh okay understandable. lol
and no rush. =]

Reviewer: Lamefreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 07:12 pm Title: Angel's Punishment

whoa. i didnt think bill was going to hit tom! =O lol. n evil bill is cute. i like it. =]i love this story too. look forwards to the next chapter. but just wondering when will the next chapter be? :D

Author's Response: I don't really know. I mean, I updated twice today. That took it's toll on my muse. Probably tomorrow if I have time. I recently dropped out of school so I have some free time but I'm starting back up again some time next week and after that I'll probably be too busy to update so I'm trying to update as fast as I can now because I don't think I'll be able to later. Oh and I'm glad you are liking it!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 06:41 pm Title: Angel's Punishment

evil bill ...uh HELL YES!!! nice change

Author's Response: Hehe. You LIKE evil Bill? Well thats...different. Glad you like.

Reviewer: TH4everbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 06:07 pm Title: Angel's Punishment

it kinda makes me cry a litle how cruel bill is, i can't really picture him like that

but it's good, you kinda dragged me into the story and i can't wait for the next chapter :-)

Author's Response: Hehe. Thankies. And yeah, there's a reason Bill is like he is, it will all be discovered later on, I promise.

Reviewer: unintended_muse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 06:01 pm Title: Angel's Punishment

Two chapters in...and I love you! Now that's some daaamn fine writing! I'm really lovin' "Mr. Evil Bill."

I shall be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! And I have never heard of that song...

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I have fine writing? Really? Cause this is my first Tokio Hotel fan fic. I've done a Buffy one and a Rasmus one but never Tokio Hotel so I'm a bit nervous. And yeah, the songs by Lacuna Coil. It's a bit odd compared to their other ones but I love it.

Reviewer: Volatile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 06:00 pm Title: Angel's Punishment

btw LACUNA COIL

Author's Response: Yep, yep. Lacuna Coil it is. One point for you!

Reviewer: Volatile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 05:51 pm Title: Angel's Punishment

O_O I'D ASK YOU TO MARRY ME but I'm already in a secret *polygamous relationship* with several authors and fans on this site. So let's keep this between us, shall we, mon amour >_>

Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks, I'm honored.

Reviewer: Anna483 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 01:21 pm Title: Something Kinda Funny

Continue..but make the entries longer. Other than that i like it...=]

Author's Response: Oh I will. That was meant to be more of a teaser to get people interested in the story. But thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Volatile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 01:08 pm Title: Something Kinda Funny

Fuck if I know where this is going, which is amazing because usually I'm a master at figuring out foreshadowing. Therefore, moar plz :D

Author's Response: Glad I can keep you guessing then.

Reviewer: unintended_muse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 11:49 am Title: Something Kinda Funny

I have a slight feeling where this is going...can't wait for another chapter!

Author's Response: I couldn't help it! I just tempted myself into writing it after I made the suggestion to you. Hehe. But it will be very different from yours I'm sure.

Reviewer: kaulitzxlovee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 11:41 am Title: Something Kinda Funny

This is very good.
I love it.
I love the whole formatting.
And this song is by Spice Girls, I believe. (:

Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks!rnYes, indeed it is the Spice Girls (I used to love them when I was a kid). rnOne point for you.

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